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- Feb 1, 2018
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Make it good!!!!!! Looks like good art (could be better but not the worst) and a trainer will deff be interesting, cant wait to see this done
I haven't played yet but I can already tell this is going to be a good game when it gets started. I only hope in the end the game will be finished not abandoned before.
- Feb 11, 2018
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A trainer game in the Fairly Odd Parents universe? Yes, please make it happen.
Not playing it now, but the idea sounds like a good concept, may be tempted later down the road if content gets added to it. Only concern is that pic of Wanda I'm seeing on the first page, that design doesn't suit her at all, needs to be more milf than teen, needs a thicker waist than the hourglass she has here (she's kinda old and she's had a baby after all).
- Jun 6, 2017
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I like the concept, and I already thought that there was a game missing for this parody...
Most did say already the important stuff about the art, like that it should be getting better (is of course just concept art), but it has already good proportions, except some details (already mentioned).
My question is, if you do the original 2D color style, or go for a more 3D style with shadows and all like that you did with the Vickiy concept (well, for porn I guess the 3D one could be better, as it can offer more depth).
A problem with that could be partly the background, as you should keep in mind to edit it to match it to be more to the style.
But well, what do I know about art?
I would agree with an earlier post about wanda and her human look, that it somewhat doesn't fit if it is a parody, but maybe Timmy could have just done a wish for it, and maybe there could be an option in the game to reverse it for one or several scenes, or the other way around, that he can wish for the human form after some progression (but seriously, pls some scenes with the original form).
About content, most was already said as well, it being a corruption game and all, but maybe there could be some additional content with characters that don't get a full implementation, like making a wish for it to just do it, just as additional content or in an easteregg style mechanic.
If I didn't forget something, that would be all from me for now...
Most did say already the important stuff about the art, like that it should be getting better (is of course just concept art), but it has already good proportions, except some details (already mentioned).
My question is, if you do the original 2D color style, or go for a more 3D style with shadows and all like that you did with the Vickiy concept (well, for porn I guess the 3D one could be better, as it can offer more depth).
A problem with that could be partly the background, as you should keep in mind to edit it to match it to be more to the style.
But well, what do I know about art?
I would agree with an earlier post about wanda and her human look, that it somewhat doesn't fit if it is a parody, but maybe Timmy could have just done a wish for it, and maybe there could be an option in the game to reverse it for one or several scenes, or the other way around, that he can wish for the human form after some progression (but seriously, pls some scenes with the original form).
About content, most was already said as well, it being a corruption game and all, but maybe there could be some additional content with characters that don't get a full implementation, like making a wish for it to just do it, just as additional content or in an easteregg style mechanic.
If I didn't forget something, that would be all from me for now...
- Aug 28, 2017
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"Trainer, Parody, Corruption , Male Protagonist, Vaginal Sex, Masturbation, Sex Toys, Anal Sex"
And? What it Means? If all this tags not have in Current Version Game when Delete it!
And? What it Means? If all this tags not have in Current Version Game when Delete it!
- May 7, 2017
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Take a chill pill xD"Trainer, Parody, Corruption , Male Protagonist, Vaginal Sex, Masturbation, Sex Toys, Anal Sex"
And? What it Means? If all this tags not have in Current Version Game when Delete it!
- Jun 6, 2017
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You can say it more calm, but I have to agree, which I haven't paid attention to."Trainer, Parody, Corruption , Male Protagonist, Vaginal Sex, Masturbation, Sex Toys, Anal Sex"
And? What it Means? If all this tags not have in Current Version Game when Delete it!
Tags are only for content that got already released, so in this case it is no sexual content (for now).
Adding tags with no such actual content just confuses the community who use these to search for content,
but you could write it as an additional info for what content can be expected.
Edit: Just saw that not the dev made the OP
- Jun 20, 2018
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Lol'd a Parody of FOP hehe... eventually somebody had to touch that...
Well, the Art? looks good.. yes...
Now im curious about what you want to do about FOP, after all... you must try to do some story about the Corruption you want to put in your version, taking note of the Fairy's...
I mean, there has to be a STOP from some of them, like the Muscle one for example.. meaby put him like a Boss or something? because even as Parody...
The Corruption you will do it of course by taking advantage of your Fairy's (he had 2) then there are other characters of the Serie... and the Fairy's too... so i don't know how you want to do all that...
But i will be looking this one, it intrigues me...
Well, the Art? looks good.. yes...
Now im curious about what you want to do about FOP, after all... you must try to do some story about the Corruption you want to put in your version, taking note of the Fairy's...
I mean, there has to be a STOP from some of them, like the Muscle one for example.. meaby put him like a Boss or something? because even as Parody...
The Corruption you will do it of course by taking advantage of your Fairy's (he had 2) then there are other characters of the Serie... and the Fairy's too... so i don't know how you want to do all that...
But i will be looking this one, it intrigues me...
dont want to be bad but...
"This Build only has 4 images "
that some serious new level...
i dont know or understand how peoples can see some potential in this. its not enougth, seriously... how can you see potential that early ?? i m lost..
i prefer wait for more before giving an opinion, because for now, its nothing. far not enougth for me to give an thougth about the game or futur.
but again, no offense.. just an personal opinion.
"This Build only has 4 images "
that some serious new level...
i dont know or understand how peoples can see some potential in this. its not enougth, seriously... how can you see potential that early ?? i m lost..
i prefer wait for more before giving an opinion, because for now, its nothing. far not enougth for me to give an thougth about the game or futur.
but again, no offense.. just an personal opinion.
Developer to Developer, I think the concept itself would be good for a trainer game, but yeah a couple of notes.
Obviously, people might expect a bit more with regards to even a concept model for them to play with. Usually, you can get feedback from posting your art and models elsewhere as opposed to putting them all together, slapping some code in to make it function, and then go and upload it somewhere like a Patreon. People will automatically think "C'mon, this is nothing", which is part expectation, part lack of awareness to call this even an early build. To make a writing analogy, this is like the first sentence in a thesis of a paper you're writing and not an even grammatically correct sentence. Not to be too harsh, I just don't think that this should have come out just yet.
If it's just going to be these three characters to have as trainee's, I think you'd have a good start. There are at least a few more characters I could think of you adding from the FOP world, but this is a nice beginning. As many have said before, some stronger line work I think would be nice. I also think you need to start out with models where some of their physical attributes aren't as visible and left to the imagination for the time being, only for things to progress a bit more sluttily. I think I prefer games that transition trainer models from "standard clothing" outfits to "low hanging fruit cleavage" type stuff.
And yeah, MILF Wanda would be great, as opposed to using the same model for Trixie and just changing some elements. A little more curve and maturity to her design would be awesome. Wishing to see this progress in a great way, it just needs to take some different steps to improve itself!
Obviously, people might expect a bit more with regards to even a concept model for them to play with. Usually, you can get feedback from posting your art and models elsewhere as opposed to putting them all together, slapping some code in to make it function, and then go and upload it somewhere like a Patreon. People will automatically think "C'mon, this is nothing", which is part expectation, part lack of awareness to call this even an early build. To make a writing analogy, this is like the first sentence in a thesis of a paper you're writing and not an even grammatically correct sentence. Not to be too harsh, I just don't think that this should have come out just yet.
If it's just going to be these three characters to have as trainee's, I think you'd have a good start. There are at least a few more characters I could think of you adding from the FOP world, but this is a nice beginning. As many have said before, some stronger line work I think would be nice. I also think you need to start out with models where some of their physical attributes aren't as visible and left to the imagination for the time being, only for things to progress a bit more sluttily. I think I prefer games that transition trainer models from "standard clothing" outfits to "low hanging fruit cleavage" type stuff.
And yeah, MILF Wanda would be great, as opposed to using the same model for Trixie and just changing some elements. A little more curve and maturity to her design would be awesome. Wishing to see this progress in a great way, it just needs to take some different steps to improve itself!
Probably mix up the characters body build so they all don’t look the same. Change up their busts or shape their bodies differently so they don’t look like clones of the same character.
Ah i like trainer game.. the art's good. Maybe for the future add some animation of scene sex and more dialog..