This game has both some very good, and very bad attributes. I'll list some of them here. Here comes my book report...
Good: The renders are nice. You open the gates with a sex scene, it's a pretty nice quickie. The story-line could be fantastic if it were well written. The game has a built in wiki so that's good for identifying characters. The family is full of hotties. It seems like it may be a fun game, and has some serious potential. Perhaps something like "Good girl gone bad" but, you are a guy instead.
Bad:
Missing wiki links
Missing backgrounds on some scenes
The MC seems like he is going to be a chad thundercock. Basically like all he gotta do is be like "Hey let me get some of that pussy." and any of the females in the game are gonna jump on that dick... He should have to work for it more.
The lack of options that should really be options. I'll give you some prime examples:
1) When you are with your personal trainer she is getting a bit hands on. At this point you should be able to choose to tease her a bit, or push her off of you.
2) Sofia the milf gets drunk, and tries to smooch you. Again, you should be able to choose here to kiss her, maybe grab a little ass too, or totally rebuff her.
3) The little sister is laying on her bed when you are chatting with her. Her titty pops out. You should be able to say something like "You may want to cover yourself better" or inversely stare at that nip slip.
Furthermore in the bad sector the wiki section lacks images. A base image of the character on their wiki page would be useful. Their age should also be in there as well as occupation, education, relation to main character.
Lastly in the bad sector the game mentions early on "There is gonna be like 20 characters..." I think that quality instead of quantity is what is needed. Lets see who there is so far...
1) Main Character Miles the guy
2) Ella MC GF
3) Sofia Ella's Mom
4) Alberto Ella's Dad
5) Carina Ella's sister
6) Serafina Ella's sister
7) Malcolm token black guy friend of MC
8) Dumpster wigger guy friend of MC (The fuck kind of name is that?)
9) Miss Greenwood black teacher lady
10) Katya some red headed slut that is friends with some of the sisters
11) Raquel personal trainer / mc friend with the micheal jackson disease
12) Naomi hot asian chick friend of MC?
13) Mark Serafina's boyfriend, basically a jock / chad thundercock?
14) Jess Webster, not yet seen but the ex of Mark
Are 6+ more people REALLY needed?
Thanks for playing and taking the time to write all that out!
So to address the bad. I don't expect you to go through 30 pages of the thread. The wiki thing might get abandoned, for now, until I can get a working codex or wiki with images. I'm very new to coding, and I'd rather have no wiki than a bad one at this moment. The backgrounds thing will be addressed in 0.3, all characters are rendered in scene now without layering. I'm not a writer either, though I am working on it. I'm self aware enough to know my weaknesses, but the render quality and original Daz characters (all custom) I feel are the biggest strengths of game.
For Miles being a 'Chad Thundercock', I don't think many people would be happy if Carina, Serafina, Sofia, or Raquel weren't available romance options.
And yes, the game does need more options. But for now, it wouldn't feel right just yet for Miles to feel up Raquel or Sofia. I wouldn't want to give an option to do that just yet. I don't want to do gameover scenes, because there shouldn't be a way to 'lose' the game.
And as for the character list:
Dumpster is inspired by a real-life person I knew who went by 'Dumpster'
What Raquel has is called vitiligo
Naomi is Ella's friend
Mark is jock, but I wouldn't call him a Chad.
6 others include Dumpster's sister, Sofia's sister and her daughter (Ella's cousin) and a few others who won't be introduced anytime soon.
