VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Welcome to Temptation [v0.3] [CarnalCardinalGames]

The game is super short and abandoned. Story and plot is inconsistent and keeps jumping around. Renders and CGs are just placed on top of background without any blend, which feels like out of place. There is couple of scenes to enjoy, but not worth investing too much time into the game as there is not much content or fetishes covered.

nice game good renders and even though it in the first steps of developing, has alot of potential with ntr incest and all around fetishes hope it will update sooner and alot more fetishes will be added to it

Really good stuff imo.
Models were good.
The story line was interesting.
There were only 2 cons for me, 1 being the the dialogue had a couple mistakes, where the game would incorrectly label that certain people were saying something when it looked like it was intended for another character to be saying it.
The other being that the story felt a little jumpy, not incredibly smooth transitions to the next scene.
All that said I still gave it a 4/5 and am gonna follow it moving forward.

I think this could be pretty decent game, but it has some silly and pretty evident flaws that make it way worse than it could be.

First of all, the chaotic order of the scenes. The dev doesn't success in create the sense of time and spaces. Some of the scenes don't even have a backdrop and the text doesn't help a lot.

There is no real story so far. Just the MC charming all the girls and women around without any effort. He's like James Bond 007, the girls just fall for him at first glance, apparently.

Decisions without any sense. If the MC says a girl is the sexiest, his girlfriend becomes a jealous bitch, if he names another one, she becomes lesbian, and if he says she's the sexiest of the three, becomes a cheater... Why? It doesn't make any sense. I hate games that give you decisions without giving clues about the consequences.

Some of the characters are pretty insubstantial and even annoying, like Malcom and Dumpster, or Gilipollas y Atontado, as I call them in spanish.

Too much insubstantial chit chat. At first, I suppose it's needed because that chit chat provides information about character's personality, but once the characters are been presented and players know them, long dialogues, if aren't really interesting, are just something to skip fast, especially when it comes from characters as M&D.

There is a variety in faces, and that's a really cool thing. The dev is not using the same default models already seen in a hundred of porn games, and that's great. But the result is not always good. Some of the characters are great, like the girl with vitiligo, but other ones have weird faces because the eyes are displaced, the bridge of the nose is too prominent, or something I can't explain. When I saw Carina first, I thought that if she were blue, she would be one of those aliens of Avatar. Or the lips of the mother, that seem to be the result of too many botox and silicone injections.

A strange granulate in some of the images of a scene that disappear in the next image, models at different scale, being girls bigger than men, several sex scenes too dark to see something, even in a good screen... things like those.

All the bodies look similar. Even the mother, a women in her 40´s and mother of three looks like a supermodel in yoga pants. I don't say there should be obese models, but a bit (just a bit) of fat in belly, hips, waist and butt doesn't make less sexy a girl or a woman. Too much perfection does. Realism is a kink as any other.

One great thing without "but": the dialogues during the sexual scenes. For example, the scene between the MC and the mother is too dark to see something, but the dirty talk of the dialogue totally saves the scene.

Anyway, I think the game is going to improve. I think that the dev is learning how to do a game by doing one, and the next updates are going to be better than the first ones.

The art is pretty awesome and it's nice to see some new models that don't look exactly like all the other games out there. The biggest problem is the way the narrative jumps, especially between episodes. There's no sense for what day or time it is at any point. There's some context clues to pick up on, but it would be nice if there were more clear cut transitions of time, like a running date and time throughout and not just sprinkled into a couple random title cards.

My Ratings for this Game:
Pro:
-Great Renders
-Story Line Nice
-No Dull moments (Always Something Happening)
-Update takes longer Than 30 min. to Play
-Different Locations.
Cons:
-too many characters (Gets me Lost Sometimes)

Good start, 3 episodes in and its not a cock tease game. Lots of potential and caters for a lot of different tastes, a horny milf, ntr only if you want it (But easy to fall into it by accident.), best part in my mind is Carina blackmailing you. Love a bossy, dominant woman ;-)

While I do like the Renders and the Characters are quite varied in looks, the story is really a mess. It throws Character after Character add you and switches Scenes so fast that it feels really disjointed.

I just wanted to say that I finally got around to playing this game and I really enjoyed it. I've been reading through the comments and considering this is your first attempt/first game- I would have to say that it's turned out really well. There is a lot of variety with the characters and the character models. The renders are done beautifully- none of the girls look like the same character with different hairstyles/skintones. The writing gives them distinct and unique personalities. I would definitely like to see more Merida, er Katya, (definitely) Bin*,Naomi, and Carina.

I love cheating, I love exhibitionism, and I love NTR. This game is definitely for me.I have to say this game is getting wonderful...many ways to go different choices I'm loving her imagining betraying the MC with another man ntr and cuck it getting hotter I loved mama especially she talking to mc call me a puta;;dios mio.... I loved the way she talked in another language definitely one of the best games I'm playing if not the best congratulations soon I'll be helping your patron

Pretty short game right now but the renders are really good and the story seems to be good so far. I seen only one bug so far and can't wait for more!



Sex 7/10
Art/renders 8/10
Story 8.5/10
characters 8.5/10

Poorly written and extremely disjointed. Randomly jumps between scenes and characters before the current scene seems complete and without anything in between. Good artwork but just not very much fun to play.

Excellent Start, good blend of humour and raunchiness. Renders are done to a great standard, and this has the makings of a great game. A game is only as good as its developer, and Carnal_Cardinal is a great one, constantly engaging with fans, for bug fixing and constructive criticisms.
If your tired with the incest plot lines, may be give this a try.