- Feb 26, 2022
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The lack of emphasis on visual is dreadfully concerning.
In any case, good for you for getting off of text alone. Perhaps my troglodyte brain simply cannot comprehend such Shakespearean level of jerk off material.
In any case, good for you for getting off of text alone. Perhaps my troglodyte brain simply cannot comprehend such Shakespearean level of jerk off material.
- Aug 22, 2021
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The ratio of text to visuals is normal for a professional VN. Many of those start with the protagonist narrating over background art for the first ten minutes so if anything the number of event stills here is on the high side. Visual novels are novels enhanced with artwork and music. Not the other way around.
This VN was published on itch.io, which is not a porn game site. It clearly advertises itself as erotica and not porn or "jerk off material". You're complaining that it fails to be a thing it never claimed to be.
The ultimate way for her to live out both her exhibitionist and her bondage kink would be to get arrested butt naked in public.
I have to agree. It's not that I don't see the purpose and point of the preachy stuff as such, it's just that there's wayyyy too much of it. And also too much text in general. Despite their name, visual novels are not supposed to be merely novels that happen to come with pictures. A certain amount of introspection and mood-setting is much needed, but it should take a back seat to an actual story, with meaningful choices. Yes, clearly, this is very early days here, but I have to agree that the deluge of words is already overwhelming.
I liked it.
The dialogue explained and supplemented the graphics.
it is not an atheistic POV necessarily but an indictment of the narrow mindedness and hypocrisy in how the Christian faith is too often interpreted into practice.
Be nice to have more graphics- they a pretty hot.
Wonder how she is going to get out of the pickle...
The dialogue explained and supplemented the graphics.
it is not an atheistic POV necessarily but an indictment of the narrow mindedness and hypocrisy in how the Christian faith is too often interpreted into practice.
Be nice to have more graphics- they a pretty hot.
Wonder how she is going to get out of the pickle...
- Aug 10, 2019
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Graphically, this thing is awesome. The story is pretty nice too. Let's see what else is coming. I'm looking forward to it.
In any case, one should support the Good Man in his work.
In any case, one should support the Good Man in his work.
- Aug 22, 2021
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Yes.
There are two main routes through the game. One is a "safe", vanilla, Christian male love interest. It is "maledom" in a way, but only in the Biblical sense. There's no BDSM and no sex until marriage. The other is a lezdom, BDSM-focused love interest that, if Sophie pursues her, may result in her getting shunned by the town for being a sexual deviant.
You can also choose neither love interest. That'll probably be a very uneventful route.
It's well written. I think people need to step back from saying how Visual Novels are supposed to be. Make your own then.
The team, or person, creating this can do so how they wish. There is no convention they need to stick to. If you find it too wordy to enjoy then look at the different VN's you might prefer instead.
The team, or person, creating this can do so how they wish. There is no convention they need to stick to. If you find it too wordy to enjoy then look at the different VN's you might prefer instead.
Just found this little gem, and I must say, it's an amazing start. I love the entire premise, as well as the execution, and I am really looking forward to how this story develops.
One thing I wonder is, are there going to be meaningful choices and different paths to explore, besides just choosing between the main love interests? So far it doesn't seem as if the choices have much of an impact, but of course this is only the prologue.
Although I gotta say that I love this one so much that this might actually be a rare instance of me enjoying a VN that veers more into the direction of kinetic novel. So either way is fine, as far as I am concerned.
One thing I wonder is, are there going to be meaningful choices and different paths to explore, besides just choosing between the main love interests? So far it doesn't seem as if the choices have much of an impact, but of course this is only the prologue.
Although I gotta say that I love this one so much that this might actually be a rare instance of me enjoying a VN that veers more into the direction of kinetic novel. So either way is fine, as far as I am concerned.
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- Aug 22, 2021
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The plot has a double helix kind of structure. Choosing between the two love interests branches the story onto different paths, then afterward the paths rejoin since Sophie has to go to work the next day. It's more manageable that way.
- Aug 22, 2021
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Can she?
Yes.
Will she?
No.
It makes her feel more like a normal person, since she's not a professional porn star.
- Aug 22, 2021
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Compared to Steins;gate, there is an extremely high number of pictures for its current length.
This is v0.1. There's nine(-ish) more releases to continue the story.
I like the rhythm of the dialogue the way it is right now, sorry.
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