Others Onhold Love Inn [v0.1.5] [croco_nsfw]

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khallyl

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Hello, croco_nsfw i would like first to congratulate you for how you began the story, it was really organic and i was suprised after playing a little, i thought this did feel like love hina with Yusuke as the protagonist. and to my suprise when i came to read the thread beggining in page 2, Love Hina and YuYu Hakusho was what was asked and you confirmed it, so if this was your intention, you nailed it!

I hope in the future you can create more bonding scenes, they make the Ecchi/(future) sex scenes more meaningful, i´m curious how you gonna do the harem and what is your intentions for the plot.

And i would like to make a critic of Ume, you see, i put my save(config) from v0.1.3 on v0.1.4b and just began playing again to see the new events, and the first scene where she gives us the spy cams was nice, being the perveted sister of Keiko, i wanted to see how things would begin, but i din't not expected that after kenta saw the spy cam, she would be first girl he would have sex in the inn...
you see there was not really a big development or good buildup for her, one or two more scenes of teasing, talking or something. so that feeled really cheap and lifeless, felt like porn without plot and i know i sound harsh but it´s because i had fun seeing Aya naked in the Onsen and Keiko handjob with the minigame was really hot, i really loved it, was like a new chapter or episode of the anime/manga i like just dropped. But Ume felt like she was just throw there for the first sex scene and the spy cam, i know you can fresh her up better and also make future sex scenes still perveted but with more buildup or development, i like her archetype, i just think you can do her better.

And the most import thing i want to ask you and that i'm suprised nobody asked it yet, coming after i din't had anything left to do on v0.1.3, is Memories/Recollection. My man you created some Hot game arts CGs and moments and the only way to see/read them again is beginning the game again? so i would like to give 2 examples if you could implement one of them?

1-the standart for VNs, you put a gallery/Scene replay on the main menu based on what events you unlocked with each of the girls.

2-when you interact with one of the girls aside from small talk, time together, lewds, gift or nevermind, you could also put a memories option where you could see the scenes again.
i was sad when i noticed i couldn't replay the scenes i wanted because i wanted to spent a little more time with the game.

Man overall you did a amazing job, i feel like i found a hidden jewel to play that i will remenber foundly even though for now is a Beta, and the art and ambient is fire! so again congrats! i'm hyped to see your future updates and i wish you sucess! :]
 

croco_nsfw

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Hello, croco_nsfw i would like first to congratulate you for how you began the story, it was really organic and i was suprised after playing a little, i thought this did feel like love hina with Yusuke as the protagonist. and to my suprise when i came to read the thread beggining in page 2, Love Hina and YuYu Hakusho was what was asked and you confirmed it, so if this was your intention, you nailed it!
Hey!! I really really appreciate your comment! Yeah, I grew up watching both (Love Hina was my first nonTV anime, I had to watch through YouTube haha), so I'm glad you felt the inspiration!!


I hope in the future you can create more bonding scenes, they make the Ecchi/(future) sex scenes more meaningful, i´m curious how you gonna do the harem and what is your intentions for the plot.
Yeah, I'll be sure to do that! I have a major plot lines for all actual major characters, so hope you like it! And I agree the build up is what makes things great, which is the contrary to what I did with Ume as you mentioned.

So to me this game is a typical lewd doujin mixed with a normal ecchi / fun harem manga. This gets two opposite philosophies, one of the normal doujin, where the sooner the sex starts the better (sometimes you start on page 1 and there's already sex), and the other one of the ecchi slice of life manga, where the characters spend 100 chapters together and the most you see is a nipple.

I agree that it is a bit rushed, but it's kind of my intention with it. In the first version I planned, before even sharing the game, Ume was supposed to be first encountered to be having sex with another guy, before even speaking to her. Since I know it's a VERY unpopular topic and a lot of players would hate her, I decided to go for the very rushed sex with the MC. Since I first envisioned her, she started as a "whore", but then I fell in love with her and she got a nice plot. I'll wait a bit for more content, and play calmly from the start to see how I feel about it after some time, and then mayyyybe reconsider altering the pacing and adding some more middle ground.
But for now, I hope I can turn your mind around her tho, she will win your heart I'm sure :)

And the most import thing i want to ask you and that i'm suprised nobody asked it yet, coming after i din't had anything left to do on v0.1.3, is Memories/Recollection. My man you created some Hot game arts CGs and moments and the only way to see/read them again is beginning the game again? so i would like to give 2 examples if you could implement one of them?
Ah! The first option you provided is the one I was planning all along :giggle: There's going to be a menu for replayable events yes, divided by characters. Even though the 2 option is a nice one, I prefer that you can replay them anytime and not wait for guests or such.
The events can be started already with command lines, I just didn't come around yet to implement it in a nice way. But I'm really glad you like the game enough to replay them, that makes me happy.

Man overall you did a amazing job, i feel like i found a hidden jewel to play that i will remenber foundly even though for now is a Beta, and the art and ambient is fire! so again congrats! i'm hyped to see your future updates and i wish you sucess! :]
Again, thanks for such a nice comment, I really appreciate this kind of feedback. A lot of things are missing and some things might be wrong or need revisiting, and I consider that a good thing, since I want to make this project better ever update.
 

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love the game, just a suggestion the text for choices is pretty much unreadable, changing text or background for the text would be good
 
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croco_nsfw

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love the game, just a suggestion the text for choices is pretty much unreadable, changing text or background for the text would be good
Thank you for playing! And yeah, I completely agree. Will change the color scheme, I've already changed some things for the dialogue box so it's also more readable. (y)
 
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HailToTheDock

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Played for a little bit, so far the game seems great and I'm really interested in where things go. One thing I'm curious about is if you can miss content by not doing things properly. I kinda just half brained grind and I noticed the couple who joins is gone now so did I miss an event I was supposed to follow up on?
 
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Vergi|

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Really great game. Especially when you monitor the industry for over 6 years. It's like a fresh air in the can.
It has the plot, which intrigues, the interesting characters - if you're an otaku like myself - and, the most interesting, it has the limitless potential. Congratulations, Croco.
 
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croco_nsfw

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Played for a little bit, so far the game seems great and I'm really interested in where things go. One thing I'm curious about is if you can miss content by not doing things properly. I kinda just half brained grind and I noticed the couple who joins is gone now so did I miss an event I was supposed to follow up on?
Hello! I'm glad you find it interesting :giggle: You can't miss content permanently! The couple comes back after a short while repeatedly (soon I'll start adding more guests so there's some rotation). I dislike skippable content, so everything can be accessed in one save (this means there won't be any big decisions that change the path of the story, that's the only sacrifice).

Curious what engine this is on and if it is able to be ran on android
Sorry friend, but no android in the foreseeable future. I'm alone and don't want to commit to keep up multiple versions of the game while I'm developing it, it's a huge time investment.

Really great game. Especially when you monitor the industry for over 6 years. It's like a fresh air in the can.
It has the plot, which intrigues, the interesting characters - if you're an otaku like myself - and, the most interesting, it has the limitless potential. Congratulations, Croco.
Thank you :) I've been playing eroges, reading doujins and manga for so many years now that I really wanted to give it a go, like a love letter to the genre. I appreciate the kind words :oops:
 

croco_nsfw

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It's that time again! Love Inn 0.1.5 Public Release.

Win: MEGA - - - PIXELDRAIN
Linux: MEGA - - - PIXELDRAIN

CHANGELOG
  • Follow and new lewd system, with repeatable and selectable positions, with different options. This has to be unlocked with each character by the new events. If you experiment with it, let me know what you think!
  • 6 new events, 3 for Chiharu and 3 for Keiko (you spend more time with Aya tbh, but still the event advances Keiko's plot). 3 CGs (2 Chiharu, 1 Keiko). One ecchi, rest wholesome. Keiko has two chained events, and took a bit of experimentation to do right. The game will let you know when you have to buy something to continue.
  • Gallery. You can both replay events done in the save, plus see CG from those events.
  • Dialogue button to hide dialogue, and button for showing all current dialogue in a menu. Only contains the current "dialogue" for now, so if the dialogue closes it starts over. Multiple ways to hide text (Middle mouse button, letter H, Tab...).
  • An icon shows up when inside an area, indicating what type of action the area is about.
  • Tons of small changes in UI and dialogue / character portraits (fading). When the ryokan stats are very low, a popup will appear at night telling you that residents stats will lower.
  • You can now change the tasks for the next day on the night screen. Unlocked by buying an alarm clock from Mugi (Mondays, Wednesdays and Saturdays morning).
  • MC looks tired when stress over 8.
  • ???
BALANCE CHANGES:
  • When character's mood are over a threshold (75%), their mood will stabilize over time, decreasing only until that point. So they won't go mad if you don't talk to them, but if they are very happy with you, they will go to "ok" status over time.
  • If you go to sleep at night, your stress lowers by 4, if you go to sleep earlier it lowers by 7.
  • Less punishment when advancing days for the ryokan stats.
  • Slightly better stats when working on tasks. Also better stats going to the onsen to chill.
BUGFIXES FROM 0.1.4:
  • Fixed areas trying to add to group while already in the group && removing from group when not in group.
  • New game now loads correctly default values, instead of stats from previously played save file.
  • Fixed a chance to crash when characters reschedule bc of new load.
  • Fixed a bug that made events finish twice, triggering its effects.
FIXES FROM 0.1.5 EA:
  • Fixed that the first time opening dialogue both character portraits were highlighted instead of the one talking.
  • Fixed bug that dialogue could start before finishing lewd (at least one of the instances it appeared in).
  • Added support for variants in CG, viewing in Gallery.
  • Fixed some portraits not showing up on Misaki returning. Fixed typos.
  • Added a dialogue before buying milk so you can refuse to do so.
 

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It's that time again! Love Inn 0.1.5 Public Release.

Win: MEGA - - - PIXELDRAIN
Linux: MEGA - - - PIXELDRAIN

CHANGELOG
  • Follow and new lewd system, with repeatable and selectable positions, with different options. This has to be unlocked with each character by the new events. If you experiment with it, let me know what you think!
  • 6 new events, 3 for Chiharu and 3 for Keiko (you spend more time with Aya tbh, but still the event advances Keiko's plot). 3 CGs (2 Chiharu, 1 Keiko). One ecchi, rest wholesome. Keiko has two chained events, and took a bit of experimentation to do right. The game will let you know when you have to buy something to continue.
  • Gallery. You can both replay events done in the save, plus see CG from those events.
  • Dialogue button to hide dialogue, and button for showing all current dialogue in a menu. Only contains the current "dialogue" for now, so if the dialogue closes it starts over. Multiple ways to hide text (Middle mouse button, letter H, Tab...).
  • An icon shows up when inside an area, indicating what type of action the area is about.
  • Tons of small changes in UI and dialogue / character portraits (fading). When the ryokan stats are very low, a popup will appear at night telling you that residents stats will lower.
  • You can now change the tasks for the next day on the night screen. Unlocked by buying an alarm clock from Mugi (Mondays, Wednesdays and Saturdays morning).
  • MC looks tired when stress over 8.
  • ???
BALANCE CHANGES:
  • When character's mood are over a threshold (75%), their mood will stabilize over time, decreasing only until that point. So they won't go mad if you don't talk to them, but if they are very happy with you, they will go to "ok" status over time.
  • If you go to sleep at night, your stress lowers by 4, if you go to sleep earlier it lowers by 7.
  • Less punishment when advancing days for the ryokan stats.
  • Slightly better stats when working on tasks. Also better stats going to the onsen to chill.
BUGFIXES FROM 0.1.4:
  • Fixed areas trying to add to group while already in the group && removing from group when not in group.
  • New game now loads correctly default values, instead of stats from previously played save file.
  • Fixed a chance to crash when characters reschedule bc of new load.
  • Fixed a bug that made events finish twice, triggering its effects.
FIXES FROM 0.1.5 EA:
  • Fixed that the first time opening dialogue both character portraits were highlighted instead of the one talking.
  • Fixed bug that dialogue could start before finishing lewd (at least one of the instances it appeared in).
  • Added support for variants in CG, viewing in Gallery.
  • Fixed some portraits not showing up on Misaki returning. Fixed typos.
  • Added a dialogue before buying milk so you can refuse to do so.
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croco_nsfw

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waiting for the vaginal sex tag
Oh I haven't updated the tags in a while, there's actually 1 PIV sex event already in the game.

Does anyone know how to do Keiko's events 7 and 8?
The hint should show up on the Relationship menu, you should work on cleaning duty and then Event 7 will trigger.

Looks great, croco_nsfw and can't wait to try it. Any chance you might put pregnancy into the game, either in-game or as ending(s)?

A quiet hot springs inn is just the place to raise children, I hear...
I love pregnancy in hentai! Even the messed up pregnancy stuff from artists like ShindoL or Xration haha. Love the concept of a girl being inseminated + the physical changes and milking tits.
I'd like to implement it and have been thinking about it since the beginning basically, but I don't want to half ass it, so most probably will be end game stuff.
 
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