Ren'Py Abandoned Jack Hall Revenge [v0.4.0] [Praline]

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Dipsode

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And why are french lazy because they like to go on strike for litteraly anything or so the stories says. So that's why french people are seen as flemmard "lazy people" from the country surrounding them. When they dont want to work or go to school they strike (I live 1 km to the french border so yeah XD).
Dieu que de considérations oiseuses .. comme dire que les Belges sont sales et arrogants, les suisses pingres et lents, les américains des enfants gâtés et irresponsables .. Sans parler des arabes, des juifs, et autres joyeusetés... ceci dit, je vis en France mais je ne suis pas français, alors ... :)
Maybe non estoy bien de la cabesa aber é muyto possivel
So just bullshit saying people are just this or that ..
 

Woolfie

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For the bug I see where the error is, it'll be corrected in the next version or a patch asap.
For a french version maybe,
About the misunderstood, i'll correct that too.
 

dbp5ca

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Dieu que de considérations oiseuses .. comme dire que les Belges sont sales et arrogants, les suisses pingres et lents, les américains des enfants gâtés et irresponsables .. Sans parler des arabes, des juifs, et autres joyeusetés... ceci dit, je vis en France mais je ne suis pas français, alors ... :)
Maybe non estoy bien de la cabesa aber é muyto possivel
So just bullshit saying people are just this or that ..
Reminds me of the joke that heaven was a land where the cooks are French, the police are British, the mechanics are German, the lovers are Italian and everything is organized by the Swiss. Hell is a land where the cooks are British, the police are German, the mechanics are French, the lovers are Swiss, and everything is organized by the Italians. *Disclaimer* this is not intended as a slam against any particular nationality nor ethnic grouping. It was intended as a light hearted jab at how the age old differences are characterized and satirized between nations. Myself I am from Canada which, contrary to sterotype, is neither boring nor excessively polite :)
 

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Code:
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
  File "game/routine.rpy", line 66, in <module>
AttributeError: 'Girl' object has no attribute 'Lust'

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
  File "loop.rpyc", line 85, in script call
  File "routine.rpyc", line 66, in script
  File "C:\JackHallRevenge-0.3.0_Part_1-pc\renpy\ast.py", line 1702, in execute
    if renpy.python.py_eval(condition):
  File "C:\JackHallRevenge-0.3.0_Part_1-pc\renpy\python.py", line 1835, in py_eval
    return py_eval_bytecode(code, globals, locals)
  File "C:\JackHallRevenge-0.3.0_Part_1-pc\renpy\python.py", line 1828, in py_eval_bytecode
    return eval(bytecode, globals, locals)
  File "game/routine.rpy", line 66, in <module>
AttributeError: 'Girl' object has no attribute 'Lust'

Windows-7-6.1.7601-SP1
Ren'Py 6.99.14.3135
Jack Hall Revenge 0.3.0_Part_1
the ignore function seems to work, it continued after this error
 

XKimky

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Dieu que de considérations oiseuses .. comme dire que les Belges sont sales et arrogants, les suisses pingres et lents, les américains des enfants gâtés et irresponsables .. Sans parler des arabes, des juifs, et autres joyeusetés... ceci dit, je vis en France mais je ne suis pas français, alors ... :)
Maybe non estoy bien de la cabesa aber é muyto possivel
So just bullshit saying people are just this or that ..
Well you're the one that started with flemmard and said it was a private joke, I just explain it so that everyone gets it.

And you seems to have taken it badly, which I dont get. Weird people I swear...

Anyway moving on, nothing to see.
 

anne O'nymous

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@Praline
It's an interesting story and globally the game mechanism isn't bad but, sorry, there's a real mess in the way the game goes. By example, you take in count the way MC react when offering the possibility to kiss his cousin in the clothes store, but :
1) You reused the same "tc" variable many time and in the end even if you don't have the clothing store scene (and in fact any scene with her), "tc" will still be True. So it will reflect a situation which don't happened and display the wrong dialogs between the cousin and the aunt.
2) If you don't have enough points in the store, she don't even ask for your help with her dress. Still it's what she'll tell her aunt ; well, what she's supposed to tell since anyway it will not works.

The attempt is good, but the realization near more attention and a few more knowledge.
You shouldn't assume that if "this" happened, then "that" will also happen. You shouldn't reuse a variable unless it's totally a temporary one which will loose all meaning really quick. And finally you must take more care of the offered possibilities to stick to them when you branch the dialog according to the player choice.
 
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Woolfie

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@anne O'nymous
Yes I see that during my test session, but it happened just one time so I figure out that it was due to a bad test on my side.
After reading some posts and reading again my dialogue, it seems that what was clear to me wasn't clear enough for others.
I'm preparing the 3.1 release (a short one) in witch I'll correct those elements.
 

Hermit76

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Just a basic rule of programming as a well meant hint: Never assume the state of a variabel - be sure! And never reuse is for other purposes than the intended one. The minimal memory save is never worth the troubles you get with unexpected errors.
 

Luziferii

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Il y a très peu de jeu en français ici, j'ai juste trouvé man the house .
Pas la pririo des jeux en français, mais on s'adapte.
 

Hermit76

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Now I have played it two times, and every time the talk between cousin and aunt was about things that never have happend. Is it actually possible to see the scenes described by the cousin? Besides, after the talk the love/lust stats of the cousin have changed dramatically. And now to the story:
Cars don't explode just because a bullet has hit the tank. It has been proven by the Mythbusters (TM). It only happens in movies, and only, if they use special effect for it to happen. The uncle being shot dead instead of the MC would be much more plausible.
The MC appears to be not even close to any state that would suggest a psychiatric clinic.
When the cousin is angry about the MC for not having attended her mom's funeral, she has no gun in her hand, even though a short time later she is asked to put it down. You might want to fix that.
That the protection program (you might want to fix the typo, by the way) allows the cousin to work in her home town, is extraordinarily unbelievable.
But nevertheless - the idea of also doing some investigations instead of only getting into as many panties as possible is a nice one!
 

Woolfie

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@Hermit76 First of all thanks for playing my game and for your comments
I've take a break and now I'm back.
For the exploded car, yes I know, but let say that it is part of the drama even if it is not realist.
You're right for the MC but it is difficult to describe his state even in french, I will try in future release to explain more that state, in the first version MC begin to drink but I removed that because it doesn't fit with the story.
For the protection program, maybe there is a lack of explanation. It ended after her entrance in the police.

Anyway thanks again for playing and for the advice. The next version (0.3.1) will be release, I hope, soon.
It will contain :
the week-end by the Aunt

After that, and until the first cliffhanger, week-ends will be more generic and the player will have choice between :
- stay home (week-end bypassed)
- share his w-e with Mary or Eli
- join Eli at Aunt house

Tips : Your choice in the clothes store is important. If you don't go further with Eli, the path with her (sexe ....) will be closed, it will be the same with her aunt in the next release. Thus you can choose either the incest way or not.

And so I have a question for you players :
Do you want a setup at the begining of the game to choose between those two choices :
1/ Adventure mode :
- play as a sexy thriller : sexe scene reduce to the neccessary one (some scene can be incest scene, rape, ...), but nudity still in the game
- play as a porn thriller : MC will have a real influence on the sexe scene
2/ Relationship mode :
- incest
- no incest
Your vote will be include in the 0.4 release
 

Hermit76

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@Praline: My pleasure! :)
Regarding the car explosion: As you like. You are the narrator. But the uncle also could have jumped into the fireline and caught a bullet that would have killed the MC instead. Some non lethal injuries could have kept the MC in hospital for some time. The drama and the result both would be the same.
Regarding your questions: More choices for the player are always welcome! :)
 

Woolfie

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Hi,
I've been very busy the last two months.
I'm back so I can work again on the game.
Sorry for the delay ...
 
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Woolfie

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Here are some news
the next version (0.3.2) is almost ready
it will include the first cliffhanger : At the end of it the game will stop waiting the next version
You can active the cliffhanger as soon as you've dinner with your cousin but it will be played on the 16th day not before.
the week-end with the aunt
and the beginning of the french translation : almost all the dialogue from the first day to the end of the 1st week + the cliffhanger will be translate
yet the game is in the test phase.

to anwer an old question from @PRINCE2126 :
the game has 3 male character (including the MC) one of them has not been seen yet
and 6 girls (Eli the cousin, Sophie the aunt, Alice the policewoman, Mary the therapist, Julia the reporter and the waitress) the last one, I don't know if she will appear in futur release, I'm not quite satisfy by the figure.

What for the future ...
The 0.3.3 will add : the jog event phase 2 with Alice, new clues for the investigation and a first possibility for the week-end (in fact 2, the second will be just skip the week-end) and the remaining of dialogue translate in french.

Some preview of the next version
auntweHorse13.jpg sauna03.jpg RE-00-9.jpg
RE-003.jpg
 

macadam

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lol good thing the first pic show 2 girls... overwise it would be something pretty HOT XD

(unless one of these girls have a "special" thing ...hmmmm...maybe its the case. i like to imagine that actually :p )
 
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