Ren'Py Abandoned Jack Hall Revenge [v0.4.0] [Praline]

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AGoodDay2Die

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I understand doing the translation yourself may not be the easiest thing: I know I'd do far worse trying to go from English to the French, Spanish, or German I took in high school. Later on you'll probably want to get some help with that, though. At least it's far better than what Google does with Russian-to-English or Japanese-to-English!
 

macadam

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i bet you are french :p

i can guess that from your nickname ( i also bet you like it and the chocolate around XD )

if you need a bit of help with english, just use google and search for "dictionary cambridge" .. its a website with a nice dictionary for multiples languages into english or reverse.

its not the best of the best, but its very helpful and way more correct than google translate .
 
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anne O'nymous

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Like it's talking about translation, the cat's still have a strong french accent :D They meow in English.
 

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Well this visual novel/game has gone through a lot of changes, both in it's introduction/back story, as well as story setup... Much of the prior grind content is no longer there, yet the new content still acts like it happened... Which threw the continuity off... The visuals for the old content are still not that good, and although the new visuals are better, they still are only average in quality... The text is still as hard to read as it was before, even with the new content... The story concept has changed slightly, and is interesting, but the story execution feels a bit out of sorts... The new grind system now involves multiple women, and shows their relationship stats on the UI now, which was a nice addition... There are some improvements, but still many issues... I went ahead and updated my review...
 
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Woolfie

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The next update will take longer than expected.
The reasons are :
- adding more contents : the story will move until the first cliffhanger
- write in a better english

see you soon
 

Woolfie

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Great news !
The last scene is underway.
The game has been test so far without it and some bugs must be correct.

Here the changelog for the version 0.3 :
the week-end with Eli
Advance of event chain with Mary
You can now jog on the morning alongside with Alice it will begin his event chain
You can begin the investigation until the cliffhanger who will be in the 0.4 release
 

Razielprince

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How the heck do you even get these scenes? I tried like so hard I started over 3 times and only got a bit of the yoga one.
 

rogosh

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The dialog is so funky, like is he her cousin or sister or what. Elli calls her mom "aunty" constantly which is confusing. She also talks about a blowjob that the MC got in the dressing room that I never saw.
 

TiffanyMonroe

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The dialog is so funky, like is he her cousin or sister or what. Elli calls her mom "aunty" constantly which is confusing. She also talks about a blowjob that the MC got in the dressing room that I never saw.
Yeah, I noticed that too. Had me confused. She even said she blew him in the morning to her aunt/gf? but I didn't see it.
 
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I.W.

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I thought I was the only one going insane about these lol. I got massively confused by aunt/cousin conversation then I got to therapy and I'm even more confused.
 
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Dipsode

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Juste okazou : pourquoi ne pas proposer une version française ? ça pourraiot intéresser des gens ..

Just okazou (in case) : why not propose a French version? it can interest people ..

oui traduction google .. petite crise de flemmingite
yes google translation .. little flemmingitis crisis
Yeah .. what's flemmingitis ?! quite french private joke .. nevertheless, nice Google AI
 

XKimky

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Juste okazou : pourquoi ne pas proposer une version française ? ça pourraiot intéresser des gens ..

Just okazou (in case) : why not propose a French version? it can interest people ..

oui traduction google .. petite crise de flemmingite
yes google translation .. little flemmingitis crisis
Yeah .. what's flemmingitis ?! quite french private joke .. nevertheless, nice Google AI
Flemmingitis is like lazyness basically the same things. Avoir la flemme is being lazy, just a slang word for it.

And why are french lazy because they like to go on strike for litteraly anything or so the stories says. So that's why french people are seen as flemmard "lazy people" from the country surrounding them. When they dont want to work or go to school they strike (I live 1 km to the french border so yeah XD).

Back to the game, I would strongly advise you to learn a bit about image compression or image rendering because it looks like a game from 2010 even if the engine can produce much better stuff. Far too much noise on the pics for me to go to the end. The game looks promising but I just can't skip on the bad graphics in 2018.
 
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