- Jul 17, 2021
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Bro, I thought you knew how to read? You took part of the convo and didn't finish it up with the second half that continued in another post. You need to be spanked.
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Bro, I thought you knew how to read? You took part of the convo and didn't finish it up with the second half that continued in another post. You need to be spanked.
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- Dec 24, 2019
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Why are there conversations we only hear one side of?
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Same thing happened with Aria and her conditions.
The dialogue is already tedious and annoying enough, what with all the "$renpy.pause(0.1, hard=True)" every other line and the weird "sayings" or idioms, do we really have to skip half of the conversation that seems like it might actually be important?
Speaking of the nonsensical sayings.
This isn't some profound idiom, it's something Hillary Clinton said, which was dumb then and no better now.
"Every moment wasted looking back, keeps us from moving forward." - Hillary Clinton
" Those who cannot remember the past are condemned to repeat it. " is an idiom translated to English that is widely known and is the opposite of "not looking back in order to move forward" and actually makes sense, because it alludes to learning from the mistakes of the past, not ignoring them.
Still, that isn't as egregious as this;
What?
The first part seems totally nonsensical, like some sort of strange translation and the second part seems like a really poorly formulated question. "If we go by that" ... why would we go by that?
The whole thing seems like a weird translation error.
Another poorly formulated question, would be much better as "Do you know what I mean?"
But then he says he isn't asking if she understands the meaning behind the words, but it'd make more sense if he wasn't asking if she understood the meaning of the words because he clearly is asking if she understood the meaning BEHIND the words.
And why does it seem like this is a secret coded conversation when they are in private? Just say what you mean, these strange overly verbose exchanges are not only written in an odd way, they are seemingly out of character for the protagonist who we've been told doesn't speak much up to this point.
Just say "The plan is to seem like I don't know what I'm doing, to seem dumb or naive, in order to lull her into a false sense of security".
Simple, succinct, to the point.
Bruh ...
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Same thing happened with Aria and her conditions.
The dialogue is already tedious and annoying enough, what with all the "$renpy.pause(0.1, hard=True)" every other line and the weird "sayings" or idioms, do we really have to skip half of the conversation that seems like it might actually be important?
Speaking of the nonsensical sayings.
This isn't some profound idiom, it's something Hillary Clinton said, which was dumb then and no better now.
"Every moment wasted looking back, keeps us from moving forward." - Hillary Clinton
" Those who cannot remember the past are condemned to repeat it. " is an idiom translated to English that is widely known and is the opposite of "not looking back in order to move forward" and actually makes sense, because it alludes to learning from the mistakes of the past, not ignoring them.
Still, that isn't as egregious as this;
What?
The first part seems totally nonsensical, like some sort of strange translation and the second part seems like a really poorly formulated question. "If we go by that" ... why would we go by that?
The whole thing seems like a weird translation error.
Another poorly formulated question, would be much better as "Do you know what I mean?"
But then he says he isn't asking if she understands the meaning behind the words, but it'd make more sense if he wasn't asking if she understood the meaning of the words because he clearly is asking if she understood the meaning BEHIND the words.
And why does it seem like this is a secret coded conversation when they are in private? Just say what you mean, these strange overly verbose exchanges are not only written in an odd way, they are seemingly out of character for the protagonist who we've been told doesn't speak much up to this point.
Just say "The plan is to seem like I don't know what I'm doing, to seem dumb or naive, in order to lull her into a false sense of security".
Simple, succinct, to the point.
Bruh ...
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agreed took too much time to try and parse all the idioms, allegory, and cloak-and-dagger speak. and all three of those seem out of character for mc and the mage girl
Be careful with this dev man he gets real sensitive about criticism.
Oh, this was good. Great graphics and interesting plot. Once we got it rolling. The beginning was bit slow and too wordy at times. MC and Lyria claimed to have been together for years, but only after that time talked about things you'd suppose they'd have talked within first couple weeks. Choices were often hard to decipher, as there wasn't big difference on what to choose.
Girls were lovely. Especially Aria, Lyria and Elvira. Truly great looking. Biggest graphical error I saw was
They must have spent minutes talking, but during all that time the girl on the background didn't move. And I got bit bothered by the lack on any armour on MC. I know it's fantasy, but still..
I really like the direction where game is heading. Harem of pretty girls while saving the world.
I noticed only one typo, so quality control was good:
Because what you're trying to do, is turn a sensless world that stands upon pillars...
ps. I suggest redoing banner. It's not very tempting. Add some of those hotties on it and game will get much more notice.
Girls were lovely. Especially Aria, Lyria and Elvira. Truly great looking. Biggest graphical error I saw was
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I really like the direction where game is heading. Harem of pretty girls while saving the world.
I noticed only one typo, so quality control was good:
Because what you're trying to do, is turn a sensless world that stands upon pillars...
ps. I suggest redoing banner. It's not very tempting. Add some of those hotties on it and game will get much more notice.
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There, updated banner.
Well... ''saving'' is kinda saving-ish. It is kinda more on a darker end I'd say... but end result nonetheless is same I suppose.
Interesting story. Looking forward to seeing where it goes.
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Story, renders, characters all are good so far but the most important thing i discovered while plying this is Aria cracking me up constantly, which is something very unexpected to me because i usually dislike this kind of personality oriented characters.
Her bratty-bitchy face or her expressions in general and the way she says stuff with that face just throws me off, i can't take it.
What have you done dev?Need more of that.
On other note, some choices regarding LI's would be wonderful because so far the only choices are dialogue choices which does not differ much but they are appreciated nonetheless, with one exception at the beginning of the game, Lyria's bathing scene.
Other than that i don't have much to nitpick about, i'm liking the VN thus far.
Good luck and keep at it.
Her bratty-bitchy face or her expressions in general and the way she says stuff with that face just throws me off, i can't take it.
What have you done dev?
On other note, some choices regarding LI's would be wonderful because so far the only choices are dialogue choices which does not differ much but they are appreciated nonetheless, with one exception at the beginning of the game, Lyria's bathing scene.
Other than that i don't have much to nitpick about, i'm liking the VN thus far.
Good luck and keep at it.