VN Ren'Py Abandoned Rising Son [v0.2] [Masterlordflame]

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Calyps0

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I am excited to play more than what I got to in the first demo! :) it was short but sweet. Please make sure there is a MAC version. :)
 

Bird1019

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Alright, so there's no way to make this not sound like I'm attacking the dev here. I'm gonna sound like an asshole, and for that I truly apologize. Bc I do have tons of games that I give time until I truly judge them. So I'm not really gonna complain about the length. But in general - Why does it seem that non-English native devs make the best games? I'm not assuming this dev is English native or anything, but he seems to have a pretty good grasp on basic grammar. In all the games I can understand perfectly, it's literally all about sex (I mean, the first time we see mom awake, we already talk about her tits and we've seen MCs dick twice. Pretty sure the sex or rape or whatever is gonna come pretty early, no buildup) and seems lazily built. But when someone writes a line of dialogue as - "Mom over helping sis wit homework" , the game is outstanding.
Just something I've noticed over the past year and a half downloading these.
But all in all, I will redownload this far down the road. Maybe if I see it's been upgraded a few times around January or so.
 

Masterlordflame

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Alright, so there's no way to make this not sound like I'm attacking the dev here. I'm gonna sound like an asshole, and for that I truly apologize. Bc I do have tons of games that I give time until I truly judge them. So I'm not really gonna complain about the length. But in general - Why does it seem that non-English native devs make the best games? I'm not assuming this dev is English native or anything, but he seems to have a pretty good grasp on basic grammar. In all the games I can understand perfectly, it's literally all about sex (I mean, the first time we see mom awake, we already talk about her tits and we've seen MCs dick twice. Pretty sure the sex or rape or whatever is gonna come pretty early, no buildup) and seems lazily built. But when someone writes a line of dialogue as - "Mom over helping sis wit homework" , the game is outstanding.
Just something I've noticed over the past year and a half downloading these.
But all in all, I will redownload this far down the road. Maybe if I see it's been upgraded a few times around January or so.
Generally Non english speaking people are better at making games lol
 

exirock

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That was a great disappointment, 0.2 version with 0 content and less then 10 sec gameplay, not a great impression i might try again (or not) in about a year, probably by then we might have a minute of gameplay.
 

botc76

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Alright, so there's no way to make this not sound like I'm attacking the dev here. I'm gonna sound like an asshole, and for that I truly apologize. Bc I do have tons of games that I give time until I truly judge them. So I'm not really gonna complain about the length. But in general - Why does it seem that non-English native devs make the best games? I'm not assuming this dev is English native or anything, but he seems to have a pretty good grasp on basic grammar. In all the games I can understand perfectly, it's literally all about sex (I mean, the first time we see mom awake, we already talk about her tits and we've seen MCs dick twice. Pretty sure the sex or rape or whatever is gonna come pretty early, no buildup) and seems lazily built. But when someone writes a line of dialogue as - "Mom over helping sis wit homework" , the game is outstanding.
Just something I've noticed over the past year and a half downloading these.
But all in all, I will redownload this far down the road. Maybe if I see it's been upgraded a few times around January or so.

That's definitely not something I would subscribe to.
Rather it seems more people whose English is pretty bad are making porn games, so naturally some really good ones are made by them, but also most of the almost impossible to understand, buggy and grinding as fuck games, who are clearly made without love and just because the dev figures you can earn a quick buck on paypal are also made by those non-native speakers.

Most games I consider among my favourites have at least decent English and pretty good writing.
 

Amahl Farouk

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Emm, Ok so a demo shows something, what does this show? 4 or 5 slides with a glitch in the code when you choose shower? I hate being critical of someone's work, but can the dev please go away, spend a while rendering then come back with something that can actually be called a demo? because here we are at 0.2 and with this pace of development the sun will have burned out by the time we get to the front door
 
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Masterlordflame

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That was a great disappointment, 0.2 version with 0 content and less then 10 sec gameplay, not a great impression i might try again (or not) in about a year, probably by then we might have a minute of gameplay.
I'm Sorry :'( I'm still learning how to make the game
 

Masterlordflame

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Emm, Ok so a demo shows something, what does this show? 4 or 5 slides with a glitch in the code when you choose shower? I hate being critical of someone's work, but can the dev please go away, spend a while rendering then come back with something that can actually be called a demo? because here we are at 0.2 and with this pace of development the sun will have burned out by the time we get to the front door
Its my shit GPU that is to blame to how slow things are going
 

macadam

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I'm Sorry :'( I'm still learning how to make the game
dont worry, the mroe you learn, the faster you go and the more you put stuff in the game :)
its still true that its hard to get a new game and cant even get an idea of it because its very short. and on that you should have take your time to make a good amount of thing before releasing the first version.
but that not mean the game is shit , i saw some games starting from nothing ( or a few shit secondes of gameplay) and then become very popular.
 

Masterlordflame

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Right now I'm going to hold off on any further rendering till i get my new GPU in october. Until then I'm gunna use my writing skills and try and flesh out the story a bit more and general fixing of the game.
 
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Masterlordflame

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dont worry, the mroe you learn, the faster you go and the more you put stuff in the game :)
its still true that its hard to get a new game and cant even get an idea of it because its very short. and on that you should have take your time to make a good amount of thing before releasing the first version.
but that not mean the game is shit , i saw some games starting from nothing ( or a few shit secondes of gameplay) and then become very popular.
I didn't intend to disappoint anyone. I'm not even doing this for money.
 

macadam

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I didn't intend to disappoint anyone. I'm not even doing this for money.
oh its not about money ( i not doing that for money either )

but peoples are very.. ( dont know how you say that in english)... they want alots faster XD
 

Masterlordflame

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oh its not about money ( i not doing that for money either )

but peoples are very.. ( dont know how you say that in english)... they want alots faster XD
I believe the word you are referring to is Impatient
 
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