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I forgot what part of the story he ask Erynn I want to say at the start during the pool scene with her mother. I think why she didn't want to answer could be for a few different reasons. Maybe cause of the trauma she has and Zane brings those bad memories back and doesn't want to make scene and crying Infront of the MC just thinking about a bad time in her life. Maybe while she still loves the MC he could of changed alot in 5 years. so she is uncertain if she still does want to be romantically involved with him just yet because of how Ethan changed to be nice and friendly and went back to his old ways when she wouldnt date him. So maybe her trauma is causing her to be hesitant and doesn't want to send any signals that she is available just yet. Could be a number of reasons really but those are the ones that stand out the most to me why she wouldn't want to answer that question.
yeah, it's in the pool scene. so, basically, for you, it's also because the question is romantically charged and has a hidden intent coming from a boy usually. As she is a popular girl, she is very often asked that question with the intent of then following up with being asked out, I guess. so, maybe her "reflex" is shooting down the guy immediately, but she can't do it with MC and doesn't know how to react as her feelings prevent her from having her usual response ?

I think Zane should be a good enough memory for her, if it got serious enough for him to be her first boyfriend and sexual partner. maybe only the end of the relationship was very messy. they most likely had a huge argument, and he probably said nasty things to her.
honestly, it's weird that she didn't tell Zane about the video, as he is in the video, so he is supposed to be a victim too. she should have liked/loved him enough for that. except if she suspects that he could be an accomplice and helped Ethan.
 
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yeah, it's in the pool scene. so, basically, for you, it's also because the question is romantically charged and has a hidden intent coming from a boy usually. As she is a popular girl, she is very often asked that question with the intent of then following up with being asked out, I guess. so, maybe her "reflex" is shooting down the guy immediately, but she can't do it with MC and doesn't know how to react as her feelings prevent her from having her usual response ?

I think Zane should be a good enough memory for her, if it got serious enough for him to be her first boyfriend and sexual partner. maybe only the end of the relationship was very messy. they most likely had a huge argument, and he probably said nasty things to her.
honestly, it's weird that she didn't tell Zane about the video, as he is in the video, so he is supposed to be a victim too. she should have liked/loved him enough for that. except if she suspects that he could be an accomplice and helped Ethan.
Yeah cause she loves the MC and is very fond of him probably why she didn't know how to answer that question would be my guess. I think Zane would be a bad memory more cause it is was led up to the blackmail and trauma even if it started sweet. But also there is probably more to Zane than we know. Is it possible he had a part to play in the blackmail and Ethan double crossed him? How else would Ethan know when and where they were going to have sex? Is there more to Zane that Erynn has yet to tell us? I feel Zane is to much of a unknown at this point in the game, other than he is the butterfly effect that started Erynn down the road of blackmail , escorting , trauma , going to Prom with Ethan. That's why I feel Zane would only be a bad memory for her cause I would think be hard not to think of all the negative and it lead to as she would recall Zane is the first boy she had sex with and regret she did because of what it lead it. That would out way any positive or good memories she would have of Zane.
 

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That's a good question... Just confused feelings on her part maybe? She doesn't yet know what she's doing/going for with this kid.
Slightly later if she cacthes the MC having a look she's somewhat flustered, it surprises her but also makes her happy... and now we know she diddled her cunny(in his honor) that day...

Like many things Erynn it doesn't make much sense because eventually he would eventually find out.
Even Melissa knows it's no big deal, but Erynn makes it so...


Probably Zane, yes.
Brooke having a brother named Zane who happens to be a surfer is too much of a coincidence for it not to be him.
I feel we can't be certain that was Valeria(though it did look like her), with a beach date on the way it's a great opportunity for Zane to be there and we will probably have the answer to this question and what are they to each other, does Valeria flirt with him too? Is Zane also Gym bro?
Valeria had already met Nikki(with the MC) so even if she caught a glimpse it's nothing new for her, plus the make out didn't happen at that spot, they went behind some trees(weird if she kept following).
We also can't be sure who Val likes better yet, she might be playing the field just like a fuckboy MC(a little less eager to jump into bed).
But things like being latino, speaking spanish and a pretty good sprinter work in his favor with Val.

Also a good chance for an awkward encounter between Erynn-Zane-MC if you are taking Erynn to the beach instead, opportunity for us to "mark our territory".
I don't feel like Erynn dating him needs much justification, the MC was gone, he's good looking, he's forward(and she wasn't traumatized back then) and most importantly he isn't Ethan, everyone looks like a great option in comparison lol.

I wonder if the girls will learn of our plans to visit Nikki/Cara on saturday? And how they will react to that, also "marking their territory" or disappointed?
Can we lie about where we are going? "Oh i'm gonna visit my guy Nathan, haven't seen him in a while" technically true but big omission here lol.
lots of very good points, dude !

if it is Valeria, it means she lied to MC when she said she never went to the beach before he brought her. so that would be an interesting development, as she seems to be also lying, or at least hiding stuff, to her other male candidates. though it seems Nyx said it isn't her. honestly, I would actually like it to be Valeria, as it could add to a potential "broken" girl persona, with how her romantic views were warped by the relationships of her mother and her mother's best friend, and with daddy issues. there is no cliché "i can fix her" girl in this VN, even Tori doesn't fix the bill here :D

Val said that she is ok with people dating multiple people at once, but not when they are already serious with someone. so she is practicing what she preaches. she is most likely dating the gym bro, heavily flirting at the very least. and she doesn't like when he lifts her up :D
even if she met Nikki before, she didn't know for sure if MC dates Nikki, or if they are just friends. she suspected something only. being on the beach and seeing how they behave confirms they are dating. and if she didn't see the full make out session, she could see what lead to it.

Erynn was traumatized, in my opinion. Her first love (even if she realized it only later down the lane), and best guy friend, ignored her, left and cut her off overnight. then the bullying and becoming even more isolated. that's pretty traumatizing, honestly, for a teenager. so finding someone that paid attention to her, and behaved like MC, would make a pretty big impression on her, no need to e good looking at this point, only as a bonus :D so actually seeing that relationship grow and how she perceived it would be pretty interesting, at least to me.

i think we visit riverside on friday, maybe even thurday, and leave to visit Nathan on saturday. the only way for the girls to learn that MC went to visit Nikki and Cara would be if MC or his mom tells them. they could learn it later if Nathan tells Lakeyn who then tells Alexis and Layla, but Nathan is not the kind to snitch on MC even by accident.

Damn, I would love to see a confrontation between Nathan and Zach after MC told Nate what Zach did... xD Also, when the whole school learns what Zach did to MC. I wonder how Layla and Elena and Val will react, especially in the cases of MC not being friends with them anymore :D
 
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Yeah cause she loves the MC and is very fond of him probably why she didn't know how to answer that question would be my guess. I think Zane would be a bad memory more cause it is was led up to the blackmail and trauma even if it started sweet. But also there is probably more to Zane than we know. Is it possible he had a part to play in the blackmail and Ethan double crossed him? How else would Ethan know when and where they were going to have sex? Is there more to Zane that Erynn has yet to tell us? I feel Zane is to much of a unknown at this point in the game, other than he is the butterfly effect that started Erynn down the road of blackmail , escorting , trauma , going to Prom with Ethan. That's why I feel Zane would only be a bad memory for her cause I would think be hard not to think of all the negative and it lead to as she would recall Zane is the first boy she had sex with and regret she did because of what it lead it. That would out way any positive or good memories she would have of Zane.
good point, bro!
I think, it could also be a bad memory because she actually hurt him a lot... she basically dumped him after their first time, out of nowhere, not giving any reasonable explanation. and going to the guy she said she hated the most. she might feel very guilty about that too.
also, starting dating Zane means that she gave up on her hope of MC coming back and forced herself to move on even though she could not without having real closure. so she is stacking trauma upon trauma there. when she discovered he was back for real, her reacting seemed pretty tame. We might get a scene with her real reaction later, from her POV, I think, when we get further down her path.
 
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bleh, I kinda don't like that we're going back to riverside...
someone has a favorite !! :D

Nikki might be the most compatible girl for MC. they banter as equal. she gives MC a run for his money. by contrast, he seems to have to carry all the other relationships. Iris could be a close second, but we don't have enough scenes in the present.
 
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someone has a favorite !! :D

Nikki might be the most compatible girl for MC. they banter as equal. she gives MC a run for his money. by contrast, he seems to have to carry all the other relationships. Iris could be a close second, but we don't have enough scenes in the present.
The only thing Nikki is compatible with is a meat-grinder... :sick:
 

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lots of very good points, dude !

if it is Valeria, it means she lied to MC when she said she never went to the beach before he brought her. so that would be an interesting development, as she seems to be also lying, or at least hiding stuff, to her other male candidates. though it seems Nyx said it isn't her. honestly, I would actually like it to be Valeria, as it could add to a potential "broken" girl persona, with how her romantic views were warped by the relationships of her mother and her mother's best friend, and with daddy issues. there is no cliché "i can fix her" girl in this VN, even Tori doesn't fix the bill here :D

Val said that she is ok with people dating multiple people at once, but not when they are already serious with someone. so she is practicing what she preaches. she is most likely dating the gym bro, heavily flirting at the very least. and she doesn't like when he lifts her up :D
even if she met Nikki before, she didn't know for sure if MC dates Nikki, or if they are just friends. she suspected something only. being on the beach and seeing how they behave confirms they are dating. and if she didn't see the full make out session, she could see what lead to it.

Erynn was traumatized, in my opinion. Her first love (even if she realized it only later down the lane), and best guy friend, ignored her, left and cut her off overnight. then the bullying and becoming even more isolated. that's pretty traumatizing, honestly, for a teenager. so finding someone that paid attention to her, and behaved like MC, would make a pretty big impression on her, no need to e good looking at this point, only as a bonus :D so actually seeing that relationship grow and how she perceived it would be pretty interesting, at least to me.

i think we visit riverside on friday, maybe even thurday, and leave to visit Nathan on saturday. the only way for the girls to learn that MC went to visit Nikki and Cara would be if MC or his mom tells them. they could learn it later if Nathan tells Lakeyn who then tells Alexis and Layla, but Nathan is not the kind to snitch on MC even by accident.

Damn, I would love to see a confrontation between Nathan and Zach after MC told Nate what Zach did... xD Also, when the whole school learns what Zach did to MC. I wonder how Layla and Elena and Val will react, especially in the cases of MC not being friends with them anymore :D
I think it would actually be an interesting twist if Val knew Zane too and has been flirting with him at the same time she flirts with the MC.
Not really a hoe but someone who keeps her options open and talks to multiple guys, make it interesting for a while instead of a girl that just thinks about this one guy.

The guy is likely to be at the beach when we go there tommorow, regardless of who is accompanying us, so let's wait and see if they interact... is it gonna be like people who know each other, have been talking to each other? Or maybe he's gonna make a pass at another stranger like he did with Nikki?
With Erynn it's of course former BF/GF that haven't seen each other in a long while type of encounter.
Different from you, i don't really care what attracted her to Zane, but maybe we will get a chance to ask "what did you see in this guy?" and your curiosity will be answered lol.
Never actually considered that his behaviour being similar to the MC might've helped him before.

If Val had saw anything in regards to Nikki she could've said something, she speaks in regards to Alexis, but nothing about Nikki, this would indicate that indeed it wasn't her, or she needs to buy glasses lol.

Current day is thursday night(in game) we are going to the beach friday, right now i don't remember if the travel is scheduled for friday night or saturday morning.
One way either girl could know is if they ask "so what are you doing tommorow/what are your weekend plans?" and that would give us the option of saying the truth or going with "visiting Nathan".
When it comes to Erynn i can totally see Emily barging into the room just to say "do you need me to drive you to airport?" and Erynn learning of the trip this way, Emily specialties are cockblocking and putting her foot in her mouth after all.

Val is a bit more difficult logistically, she has never been to our home, unless the aftermath of the beach is gonna be the first time...

I agree that Nathan is a guy who seems smart enough not to blow our cover and would deny knowledge of any wrongdoing even under torture:p.
Even without a "stay sharp" he wouldn't go babbling...
Many people suspect Lakeyn is visiting Alexis and Layla with their "mysterious" trip to the airport, so he won't have anyone to babble to.
Curious timing with us going to Alvarado when Lakeyin isn't there... maybe it's someone else they are picking up at the airport?

Zach... if we open our mouths about the altercation pretty much all the girls will shun him away, his joker origin story lol.

Yeah cause she loves the MC and is very fond of him probably why she didn't know how to answer that question would be my guess. I think Zane would be a bad memory more cause it is was led up to the blackmail and trauma even if it started sweet. But also there is probably more to Zane than we know. Is it possible he had a part to play in the blackmail and Ethan double crossed him? How else would Ethan know when and where they were going to have sex? Is there more to Zane that Erynn has yet to tell us? I feel Zane is to much of a unknown at this point in the game, other than he is the butterfly effect that started Erynn down the road of blackmail , escorting , trauma , going to Prom with Ethan. That's why I feel Zane would only be a bad memory for her cause I would think be hard not to think of all the negative and it lead to as she would recall Zane is the first boy she had sex with and regret she did because of what it lead it. That would out way any positive or good memories she would have of Zane.
good point, bro!
I think, it could also be a bad memory because she actually hurt him a lot... she basically dumped him after their first time, out of nowhere, not giving any reasonable explanation. and going to the guy she said she hated the most. she might feel very guilty about that too.
also, starting dating Zane means that she gave up on her hope of MC coming back and forced herself to move on even though she could not without having real closure. so she is stacking trauma upon trauma there. when she discovered he was back for real, her reacting seemed pretty tame. We might get a scene with her real reaction later, from her POV, I think, when we get further down her path.
I agree, it happened early enough that she wasn't sure about how she felt about this boy, did she want just her little friend back or maybe more? She's a closed off person and the MC is getting personal right away.

Zane of course is a sensitive topic for her, but she didn't need to tell the MC about him to say "i'm single", specially since their break up happened years ago, mentioning "i had a boyfriend but we broke up years ago" wasn't necessary yet, maybe in a subsequent question we could've put her on the spot.
It's possible that simply the word BF might make her trauma flare up (BF>there was only Zane>what happened afterwards).

But yeah Zane is a sensitive topic for her in a number of ways, what happened afterwards, the break up that she wasn't ready for... and even how she lied to him.
Let's see what more there is to him than a guy who flirts with accompanied girls and surfs lol.
Does he have yet unknown connections to Ethan and the Blackmail? Who knows?
 

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Zach... if we open our mouths about the altercation pretty much all the girls will shun him away, his joker origin story lol.
Yeah if we don't get into a fight or anything with Zach I want this to happen at the very least. As be entertaining at least to see all the girls Zach is chasing to shun him away and not even talk to him over what he did, when they find out. But I much rather both happen, something like like one of the girls sees us getting into a fight with Zach and finding out the reason during or after the fight.
 
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Yeah if we don't get into a fight or anything with Zach I want this to happen at the very least. As be entertaining at least to see all the girls Zach is chasing to shun him away and not even talk to him over what he did, when they find out. But I much rather both happen, something like like one of the girls sees us getting into a fight with Zach and finding out the reason during or after the fight.
might be the start of his character development. MC needs a real bro at this side, and Nathan doesn't show any sign of moving closer. maybe that was supposed to be John's role in an indirect way, but he is more the temporary fatherly figure for now. Maybe Zane will replace Zach ? that would be funny as hell.
 
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I think it would actually be an interesting twist if Val knew Zane too and has been flirting with him at the same time she flirts with the MC.
Not really a hoe but someone who keeps her options open and talks to multiple guys, make it interesting for a while instead of a girl that just thinks about this one guy.

The guy is likely to be at the beach when we go there tommorow, regardless of who is accompanying us, so let's wait and see if they interact... is it gonna be like people who know each other, have been talking to each other? Or maybe he's gonna make a pass at another stranger like he did with Nikki?
With Erynn it's of course former BF/GF that haven't seen each other in a long while type of encounter.
Different from you, i don't really care what attracted her to Zane, but maybe we will get a chance to ask "what did you see in this guy?" and your curiosity will be answered lol.
Never actually considered that his behaviour being similar to the MC might've helped him before.

If Val had saw anything in regards to Nikki she could've said something, she speaks in regards to Alexis, but nothing about Nikki, this would indicate that indeed it wasn't her, or she needs to buy glasses lol.

Current day is thursday night(in game) we are going to the beach friday, right now i don't remember if the travel is scheduled for friday night or saturday morning.
One way either girl could know is if they ask "so what are you doing tommorow/what are your weekend plans?" and that would give us the option of saying the truth or going with "visiting Nathan".
When it comes to Erynn i can totally see Emily barging into the room just to say "do you need me to drive you to airport?" and Erynn learning of the trip this way, Emily specialties are cockblocking and putting her foot in her mouth after all.

Val is a bit more difficult logistically, she has never been to our home, unless the aftermath of the beach is gonna be the first time...

I agree that Nathan is a guy who seems smart enough not to blow our cover and would deny knowledge of any wrongdoing even under torture:p.
Even without a "stay sharp" he wouldn't go babbling...
Many people suspect Lakeyn is visiting Alexis and Layla with their "mysterious" trip to the airport, so he won't have anyone to babble to.
Curious timing with us going to Alvarado when Lakeyin isn't there... maybe it's someone else they are picking up at the airport?

Zach... if we open our mouths about the altercation pretty much all the girls will shun him away, his joker origin story lol.
Val is definitely not a hoe. and I agree, a popular girl actively playing the field is interesting. especially since she also needs it to rebuild a social life in a new city she might have been forced to move to. It even seems like her relationship with MC is the most advanced one, and the quickest one, to her own surprise.

oh, interesting idea that Zane would be the fixed element in the beach date we get with everyone. I like that a lot.

yeah, the schedule of MC is weird during the phone call with Nathan. it is thursday night as the end of the update, and MC says he will visit Nikki/Cara for a couple of days and drive to visit Nathan on Saturday, spend the day and spend the night. so to be able to actually do that he would have to fly there on the thursday :D but it's already too late. and he has the beach date the next morning too, so he can't leave before the afternoon and with a 6 hour flight, he'd arrive only Friday night. if he wants to spend quality time with his girl, he would have to spend the whole saturday with her. so maybe he will go visit Nathan with her? or move Nathan to sunday.

MC has to go running with Layla to make plan for a future date too, so he might have to cancel on Layla and tell her about visiting Riverside there. maybe even just after telling Erynn he loves Layla more :D cascading drama xD

Nathan could talk to Lakeyn after MC visits and after she comes back. it can be a delayed revelation, like Nyx often does.
Also, Lakeyn and MC can meet in the airport when he comes back and she returns to Alvarado if she only came to spend the weekend.
I also think Lakeyn is the one being picked up at the airport. it could be their dad, but it's more likely to be a drama catalyst for MC. both sisters have the day already reserved for that mysterious person. if it was their dad, they wouldn't spend it all on him. but their cousin coming to visit for the whole end of spring break would definitely be a good reason.
I would add that knowing that her favorite canvas now lives in Madison Springs could be a trigger for Lakeyn to decide to move and open her personal shop in the same city. :D coming to visit for many days would also allow her to scout for potential spots. or plot twist : she could become the new manager for Emily's café xD

it's rather surprising that MC kept his mouth shut about Zach. Val even helped MC during that fight, it could have easily come up. Layla was very curious about their destination. if John is the one that saved MC, it should have been mentioned without naming Zach. Erynn learns what happens in detail, Zach being the one that brought MC there should have been discussed. MC dodging the subject is very weird and unnatural. I'm guessing there will be some form of forgiveness pinning everything on Ethan being manipulative. if it does happen that way, I would be very disappointed.


I agree, it happened early enough that she wasn't sure about how she felt about this boy, did she want just her little friend back or maybe more? She's a closed off person and the MC is getting personal right away.

Zane of course is a sensitive topic for her, but she didn't need to tell the MC about him to say "i'm single", specially since their break up happened years ago, mentioning "i had a boyfriend but we broke up years ago" wasn't necessary yet, maybe in a subsequent question we could've put her on the spot.
It's possible that simply the word BF might make her trauma flare up (BF>there was only Zane>what happened afterwards).

But yeah Zane is a sensitive topic for her in a number of ways, what happened afterwards, the break up that she wasn't ready for... and even how she lied to him.
Let's see what more there is to him than a guy who flirts with accompanied girls and surfs lol.
Does he have yet unknown connections to Ethan and the Blackmail? Who knows?
I'm willing to believe that Erynn actually fantasized about having a romantic relationship with MC during all the years after Zane. Probably even shared that with Alexis. In that case, she most likely built up an ideal version of MC in her head. not actually believing it would happen, as she gave up on his return. and when he really came back, it brought back that fantasy and all the associated potential feelings in full force all at once. and hence, she does know what she wants out of MC, but having been burnt once, she could be wanting to check if MC is anything like her ideal version. and because her first contact with him after he came back was to discover that he DIDN'T contact her right away and didn't seem in any hurry to do it, and that he was forced to breakup with a loving girlfriend with lingering feelings, it's a huge stepback compared to the ideal reunion.

you make a good point there about just the word "boyfriend" being a trauma for her.
 
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Val is definitely not a hoe. and I agree, a popular girl actively playing the field is interesting. especially since she also needs it to rebuild a social life in a new city she might have been forced to move to. It even seems like her relationship with MC is the most advanced one, and the quickest one, to her own surprise.

oh, interesting idea that Zane would be the fixed element in the beach date we get with everyone. I like that a lot.

yeah, the schedule of MC is weird during the phone call with Nathan. it is thursday night as the end of the update, and MC says he will visit Nikki/Cara for a couple of days and drive to visit Nathan on Saturday, spend the day and spend the night. so to be able to actually do that he would have to fly there on the thursday :D but it's already too late. and he has the beach date the next morning too, so he can't leave before the afternoon and with a 6 hour flight, he'd arrive only Friday night. if he wants to spend quality time with his girl, he would have to spend the whole saturday with her. so maybe he will go visit Nathan with her? or move Nathan to sunday.

MC has to go running with Layla to make plan for a future date too, so he might have to cancel on Layla and tell her about visiting Riverside there. maybe even just after telling Erynn he loves Layla more :D cascading drama xD

Nathan could talk to Lakeyn after MC visits and after she comes back. it can be a delayed revelation, like Nyx often does.
Also, Lakeyn and MC can meet in the airport when he comes back and she returns to Alvarado if she only came to spend the weekend.
I also think Lakeyn is the one being picked up at the airport. it could be their dad, but it's more likely to be a drama catalyst for MC. both sisters have the day already reserved for that mysterious person. if it was their dad, they wouldn't spend it all on him. but their cousin coming to visit for the whole end of spring break would definitely be a good reason.
I would add that knowing that her favorite canvas now lives in Madison Springs could be a trigger for Lakeyn to decide to move and open her personal shop in the same city. :D coming to visit for many days would also allow her to scout for potential spots. or plot twist : she could become the new manager for Emily's café xD

it's rather surprising that MC kept his mouth shut about Zach. Val even helped MC during that fight, it could have easily come up. Layla was very curious about their destination. if John is the one that saved MC, it should have been mentioned without naming Zach. Erynn learns what happens in detail, Zach being the one that brought MC there should have been discussed. MC dodging the subject is very weird and unnatural. I'm guessing there will be some form of forgiveness pinning everything on Ethan being manipulative. if it does happen that way, I would be very disappointed.
Zane's primary reason to be at the beach is surfing, hooking up with chicks who happen to be there is a bonus.
So no matter who we are taking with us it makes sense that he's at beach no matter what.
Obviously the interactions should change from Erynn to Val.

Val would be the most realistic girl around if it's proven that she shops around instead of putting all her eggs in the MCs basket, a girl this hot would have her DMs full 24/7.
The other girls of Intertwined are all about this one boy and shut everyone else out, on some cases it makes sense due to prior history, or because they are inexperienced... but it would be interesting if Val was different from this mold.

Also not too sure about the schedule for the next few days, morning>beach, where i'm from a beach day usually pushes into the afternoon, dinner time or even a bit past that, specially "problematic" with Erynn who likes to hang out at the MCs room after the planned events, MC is gonna need to kick her out lol.
The reasonable time to set a flight would be late afternoon so arriving at night in Riverside.
I guess it's spend the day with Nikki/Cara and see Nathan during the night, double date style.
The return trip is also very vague, sunday morning or afternoon?

Since Alvarado is suppoused to be a shithole, according to Iris, MC and Nathan, not much in the way of entertainment, no good clubs, just that lake that seemingly no one goes to(Iris and MC were alone there) i can see Lakeyin moving for good to Madison Springs, the fact that she has family here gives her solid footing to start over find a job while she gets money for another shop... or "Uncle Santiago" can give her an advancement since he seems to be swimming in money.
I'm curious how the next interaction of the Layla path will be, we haven't talked to her at all after taking her cherry, not even a how are you feeling phone call... and likely the MC still freaked out thinking she's his sister.
If the MC keeps acting distant after that it's sure to make her feel "used".

The MC is keeping his mouth shut about Zach so far, and i don't think it's unnatural, he just doesn't feel like sharing... maybe with Erynn since he does talk about having fought Ethan.
But when school re-starts surely the girls are gonna notice the frosty relationship... perfect timing.

I'm willing to believe that Erynn actually fantasized about having a romantic relationship with MC during all the years after Zane. Probably even shared that with Alexis. In that case, she most likely built up an ideal version of MC in her head. not actually believing it would happen, as she gave up on his return. and when he really came back, it brought back that fantasy and all the associated potential feelings in full force all at once. and hence, she does know what she wants out of MC, but having been burnt once, she could be wanting to check if MC is anything like her ideal version. and because her first contact with him after he came back was to discover that he DIDN'T contact her right away and didn't seem in any hurry to do it, and that he was forced to breakup with a loving girlfriend with lingering feelings, it's a huge stepback compared to the ideal reunion.

you make a good point there about just the word "boyfriend" being a trauma for her.
I don't know, Erynn in that first day at Melissa's pool seems to just want to be friends like before and the fact that the adult MC makes her wet :cool: , might be slightly disturbing to her.
Between that day in the pool and the point when the Alexis betrayal gets revealed the split between "i just want my friend back" and "we could be more than friends" is increasing all the time.

Erynn is perpetually worried about not "blowing it" and pushing things in the "wrong" direction, at least until recently, her recent episode where she suggest the bath and is comfortable making out is a new thing for her.
Heck 2 days ago, she freaked after the make out session.

I do think the MC that exists in her head is very idealized perfect man(that doesn't really exist) so everytime she sees him do "wrong" it hurts her.
 
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Erynn is perpetually worried about not "blowing it" and pushing things in the "wrong" direction, at least until recently, her recent episode where she suggest the bath and is comfortable making out is a new thing for her.
Heck 2 days ago, she freaked after the make out session.
Which was a surprise for me since it felt like they kissed so often in the recent update almost as much as the MC slaps her ass throughout the entire game :). It was a welcomed surprise tho. I do think her sudden change is because while she freaked out prior to that , she might start to think she needs to allow things to move forward if she doesn't want to lose him and get out of her own head for and not to worry so much around him. After the end of episode 11 I feel she started to realized he does actually care for her and respect her boundaries .
 

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Which was a surprise for me since it felt like they kissed so often in the recent update almost as much as the MC slaps her ass throughout the entire game :). It was a welcomed surprise tho. I do think her sudden change is because while she freaked out prior to that , she might start to think she needs to allow things to move forward if she doesn't want to lose him and get out of her own head for and not to worry so much around him. After the end of episode 11 I feel she started to realized he does actually care for her and respect her boundaries .
I agree, she freaks out in that scene, afraid that what just happened might hurt change their relationship.
But the MC manages calm her down and convince her this was a good thing, a natural thing, and the scene ends with her happy and playful, teasing each other and sharing secrets.
Which carries on into episode 12 and how she's a lot more relaxed about these things.
 

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Val would be the most realistic girl around if it's proven that she shops around instead of putting all her eggs in the MCs basket, a girl this hot would have her DMs full 24/7.
The other girls of Intertwined are all about this one boy and shut everyone else out, on some cases it makes sense due to prior history, or because they are inexperienced... but it would be interesting if Val was different from this mold.
which proves that if the MC falls for this he is an idiot...

 
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Been a while since i'd played. Very happy to see lots of progress since then with 'Elena'.(Up at the top in both looks and personality) Not sure if it is just my memory playing tricks but has the hottub scene radically changed from before for the better. Definitely felt like i was on her path rather than on Laylas, which bothered me early in the game. Hopefully the final Layla roadblock can be cleared in the next update.
 
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It's shocking to see there are still people who try to make sense in this story. Let me do you a favour guys, whatever you are wondering about this game think about the most drama filled way, that will be your answer, don't go seek logic behind it. (y)
logic and nyx aren't walking together by holding hands and not even on same path.
 
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