First thing I've noticed and it is bugging me.
Hitting escape by mistake completely closes the game.
Any way to not have an accidental key stroke end the game?
Secondly typos... typos in a VN drive me up the wall. While there are graphics a lot of what is here is the written word.
Typos
Other bugs/issues
talking to sofia in house by stairs, her text is yellow
overall it is interesting, 800+MB for not really getting into the game concerns me though, this game is going to be several GB by the time you are done and will probably turn people off (unless a majority of the images are already downloaded and all you are updating is story)