Ren'Py Abandoned The Architect [v1.0] [Creiz]

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Loatgoan

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what was that other game, where the main character (female) looked like a doll... she was blonde, had a big head with huge eyes, it was your standard corruption game
who is that girl in your avatar.... like to meet here she looks real;P
 

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This was really too short even for a demo. And to be honest it wasn't very well done. I love the plot generally as I love NTR, but I don't think he will get much money given this first outing.
 

desmosome

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I dont think the girls look bad. Its a different style that looks like barbie. But then, the guy should also have a stylized appearance. He looks like a normal human so everyone is complaining that the dolls are scary lol
 

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you have babysitter as one of your favorite games but you dont like NTR? well thats interesting i mean thats the main reason why i stopped playing that game and the fact i had to draw attention to the mods to put a ntr tag on that thread
I hate NTR and I'm a fan of babysitter too, so far from my play-though all NTR has been 100% avoidable.

As for this game, yeah way too short to really even be a Demo and more like an ad.
 
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"For every 200$ I'll raise on here, I'll add a route with one of the women on the demo."
Does he mean like, for every 200 dollars he gets at the end of the month? Or does he mean in a system where, if he gets 200 dollars = +1 girl, 400 dollars = another girl?
Sorry. Yes, that's it. Whenever I get 200$, I add another girl. Up until around 10(or 12). Or else I will never finish that game.

i highly doubt with that attitude this creator is going to gain much supporters on top of the of unrealistic models unless they were supposed to look like blow up dolls XD
That's because when the gobbos are too realistic, it throws me off. I really like the cartoon appearance. I find it's a good compromise just before the uncanny valley.

I appreciate the inclusion of multiple character archetypes, but i really think there needs to be more of a base to a story than, "your wife cheated on you and, umm... we'll go from there..."
I have planned two different stories depending on the first choice. If you like being cucked, the story then goes to a path where you can choose if you're submissive or dominating. Do you decide who Donna fucks, or does she decides everything for you?

If you didn't like it, then it's either try to save your marriage or revenge time. Will you suck up everything and stay with Donna in order to salvage what's left of your life? Maybe you will divorce her and pursue one of her friends? Will you go on a rampage and fuck every single of them? Finally, will you go crazy and descend into debauchery and right out brainwash your trap niece/nephew into being your sex slave? Will you fully feminize her, revert her back to male, or something in between?

The reason this is so short is simply because I don't really have the time, right now, to be making games. I'm preparing to move, there's a lot of things I need to do. I'm publishing this in hopes I find some generous souls to help me out, so when I'm home over there, I can finally sit down and work on it. I will delay DoO to work on this full time. This demo is a taste of what to come. See those blinking eyes and moving mouths, along with the titties breathing? I also plan to have expressions and short blending animations.

After I'm done with moving, I will just make a Patreon and stop begging for money. Support and get goodies if you want to, don't support if you don't want to, no biggie. I'm doing this now out of necessity. Support me or not, the game will still be made. I already have a couple awesome guys who helped me out, so I have to finish the game for them, anyways. It'll just take a good while longer. Either way, I will be posting updates to the game on the itch page, so everyone who supported me can have them as soon as it's up.

The whole game should be maximum 2 hours. This is so I can make many of them. Think of it like comics where you choose your endings.

As for the main character, well he's also a cartoon. It's that his eyes are hidden because of the glasses. The other males are pretty cartoonish looking too, more so than James.
 
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it's all or nothing...

arf , :( .. i not like that kind of games where they are high chance to be abandonned if dev doesnt get the money.
 
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The humor in all of this is that NTR fans don't pay up for shit when it comes to funding projects.
 
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ViperDevlin44

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you have babysitter as one of your favorite games but you dont like NTR? well thats interesting i mean thats the main reason why i stopped playing that game and the fact i had to draw attention to the mods to put a ntr tag on that thread


i highly doubt with that attitude this creator is going to gain much supporters on top of the of unrealistic models unless they were supposed to look like blow up dolls XD
Ahhh but there is a major diffrence between babysitter and this in this the ntr is completely unavoidable in babysitter its more of a side path i could play the game and not ever have to deal with ntr thanks to my choices.
 

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Ahhh but there is a major diffrence between babysitter and this in this the ntr is completely unavoidable in babysitter its more of a side path i could play the game and not ever have to deal with ntr thanks to my choices.
thats the reason i tried this..NTR is a side path..not the forced path which is why i deleted babysitter..i'm not going to bash NTR..i just delete a game if it happens against my will..so if this is always a choice..i'll continue following this game..i like choice...it elevates a game.
 

ViperDevlin44

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thats the reason i tried this..NTR is a side path..not the forced path which is why i deleted babysitter..i'm not going to bash NTR..i just delete a game if it happens against my will..so if this is always a choice..i'll continue following this game..i like choice...it elevates a game.
To each his own though i have to agree if its optional then i will always give it a try i may not like it but i will try it at least
 

Creiz

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arf , :( .. i not like that kind of games where they are high chance to be abandonned if dev doesnt get the money.
No, there are people who already paid for it. I can't go back, now. This is also for my "street cred". I plan on making many of these short games to support me while over there, if I abandon my games because a couple dozen people don't like it, I won't go pretty far. The game will be done. The money I'm raising will decide how fast, though. It's near impossible to buy a powerful computer in a 3rd world country, so I want to bring mine. That way I can keep working with my set up, tools and pipeline.

The humor in all of this is that NTR fans don't pay up for shit when it comes to funding projects.
Yeah, well let's hope that's not true. Let's hope this time they will take a chance and fork up two fiddie so they can get their game faster.
 

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I dont think the girls look bad. Its a different style that looks like barbie. But then, the guy should also have a stylized appearance. He looks like a normal human so everyone is complaining that the dolls are scary lol
Agreed, they are not bad, it's the guy the one out of place, ruining the "style".

On a side note, the "trick" of calling the first proof-of-concept/alpha/demo as v1.0, instead of v0.1 (or v0.01, which should probably be the case, here), is getting really old now. And annoying.
I know: the fear that no one will even try to download it, if you put 0.01, is strong. On the other hand, if I download a v1.0 and then I realize the developer tricked me with a 0.01, well, I feel scammed. With all the consequences of the case.

(And I hope no one thinks to sell me the story that a dev doesn't know what a v1.0 is supposed to be. I'm pretty sure that when he buy tools, programs, applications and what not, he expects something pretty solid for a v1.0).
 
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