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I liked the original Minna model much more than the new one. In fact, I don't see the need to change it.
I liked the original Minna model much more than the new one. In fact, I don't see the need to change it.
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Old Minna was way cuter. Shouldn't have included the old Minna on the intro though, now you're just gonna get people arguing over which is better
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I really enjoy the story so far.
Since this is a Kinetic Novel, before I buy this I have a question, few comments.
Are the tags listed all the planned tags? It's very important to know what I'm getting into before I put my money into something.
You can list planned tags in the Developer Notes section if you want to do so.
Your writing is pretty good, I like the style. Just needs more attention to some grammar and typos... maybe a little bit on translation.
Okay instead of just saying I don't like the new Minna I'm gonna say what's wrong with her, give some constructive criticism about it. Her eyes look terrible. Those lower eyelids look like she's on drugs or hasn't slept in a year. They puff out badly and stand out so badly that they make her whole face look misshapen. Looks like a fish face. I can't tell if you made her nose skinnier or just the rest of her face longer but it looks completely off.
Her shoulders are fucking MASSIVE. She would look like an offensive linebacker if not for her disproportionately small waist and stomach. Her biceps are completely out of proportion to the rest of her arms, makes her elbows and forearm look comical. I like big boobs but again, her's are just completely out of proportion to the rest of her.
I sort of get why you'd want to change the old model because she did look kinda generic but there's a reason it's a common look. Her original model is actually super cute and doesn't look like a Frankenstein of 3 different sized girls mashed into one. Her original face is cute, her body proportions fit each other, nothing stands out badly on her. I'd highly suggest either straight up reverting to the old model or at least overhauling basically every single proportion of the new one. I hate to say it but the new Minna is straight up ugly.
I'm not far in but I do like the writing so far. I can only speak for myself but I'd hate to drop this game just because the girls end up looking bad.
Not to mention we're already getting to know them as they are, it's not a good move for the fans you'll gain right now to change the things they like about your game. There's nothing stopping you from bringing in new characters that look different but significantly changing the one's that are already here will alienate your current fan base.
Her shoulders are fucking MASSIVE. She would look like an offensive linebacker if not for her disproportionately small waist and stomach. Her biceps are completely out of proportion to the rest of her arms, makes her elbows and forearm look comical. I like big boobs but again, her's are just completely out of proportion to the rest of her.
I sort of get why you'd want to change the old model because she did look kinda generic but there's a reason it's a common look. Her original model is actually super cute and doesn't look like a Frankenstein of 3 different sized girls mashed into one. Her original face is cute, her body proportions fit each other, nothing stands out badly on her. I'd highly suggest either straight up reverting to the old model or at least overhauling basically every single proportion of the new one. I hate to say it but the new Minna is straight up ugly.
I'm not far in but I do like the writing so far. I can only speak for myself but I'd hate to drop this game just because the girls end up looking bad.
Not to mention we're already getting to know them as they are, it's not a good move for the fans you'll gain right now to change the things they like about your game. There's nothing stopping you from bringing in new characters that look different but significantly changing the one's that are already here will alienate your current fan base.
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I don't find the new model attractive either, and I agree with much of what you've said. The first time she appears in the intro, I got the impression that she has turned to drugs. In fact with her current appearance she seems ugly to me, as you already said.
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I just started playing, but I always look through the forms. Is this what your referring to...the new version kicks the old model in the face, and off the screen?
If so, then I agree...she went from a young pretty girl, to someone older and not so pretty girl, with huge bags under her eyes.
Since she asks about a sensitive stomach right after, I'm assuming booty to be intentional. It certainly fits his terrible sense of humor.
Hey Rai.Shu, I enjoyed your game so far. Seems like a really nice laid-back story with great girls. If you'd be interested, I could offer my professional proofreading services free of charge. Since it's a kinetic novel with a relatively short script, I could probably have it edited in about an hour.
There are a lot of glaring spelling and grammar mistakes, as well as a lot of unnatural sounding dialogue. All very common for non-native English speakers, but they do tend to hurt the players' immersion. Send me a DM if you'd like me to take a crack at it. Proper English is a huge factor in the overall quality of the game, and I think your players will really appreciate the extra polish.
There are a lot of glaring spelling and grammar mistakes, as well as a lot of unnatural sounding dialogue. All very common for non-native English speakers, but they do tend to hurt the players' immersion. Send me a DM if you'd like me to take a crack at it. Proper English is a huge factor in the overall quality of the game, and I think your players will really appreciate the extra polish.