Unity Abandoned Traveller's Tale [v0.04] [Cloudlet]

[EZ8lt]

I really wanted to like this, but it's a huge letdown. We have nice looking MILFs as neighbours, whom we can't do anything, not even with the one that's clearly interested in us, not even flame option.

We have these magical powers, to give random strangers a funtime, except for the supposedly dicksucking scene in the park, which isn't even a proper sucking. Beside that, a teasing from the bookgirl, meh. Then we have Nicole, whom the suit guy almost fucks at the table, but we get cockblocked in a groping situation.

The horny blonde sucks off the fat motherfucker, nothing with the MC of course because why would be anything, after all we're the Red Cross of flamers, and when we'd join in, we get the supposedly funny scene from the dev about it being a WIP, which at that point isn't funny but annoying as fuck.

Beside that, it's a grindfest, which seems pointless since that caffe machine couldn't even be used, the hint system gave zero hint beside "It's not that easy", and what's the most annoying is the lack of an option to save the game beside some autosave, that put me back for half of my progress because why not after the game crashed without any reason.

 

[LaserSaysPew]

I really wanted to like this, but it's a huge letdown. We have nice looking MILFs as neighbours, whom we can't do anything, not even with the one that's clearly interested in us, not even flame option.

We have these magical powers, to give random strangers a funtime, except for the supposedly dicksucking scene in the park, which isn't even a proper sucking. Beside that, a teasing from the bookgirl, meh. Then we have Nicole, whom the suit guy almost fucks at the table, but we get cockblocked in a groping situation.

The horny blonde sucks off the fat motherfucker, nothing with the MC of course because why would be anything, after all we're the Red Cross of flamers, and when we'd join in, we get the supposedly funny scene from the dev about it being a WIP, which at that point isn't funny but annoying as fuck.

Beside that, it's a grindfest, which seems pointless since that caffe machine couldn't even be used, the hint system gave zero hint beside "It's not that easy", and what's the most annoying is the lack of an option to save the game beside some autosave, that put me back for half of my progress because why not after the game crashed without any reason.

1. Actually, you're not being cockblocked with Nicole. There are currently 8 levels of this action(with 2 blowjob animations), what you're describing sounds like level 3.

2. Coffee machine is a placeholder for actual shop that comes in 2 weeks, maybe, a month.

3. Hint system, if you click on it, it actually tells you that it needs to be a double click to get a hint. Done so for future shenanigans with achievements and secrets.

4. MC not getting any action - he does. With Carol, with Nicole, somewhat with Ashley during Carol's event. Jessica and Susan - not yet, I can't create everything instantly, you know. If you don't like that you don't get everything right from the start - well, nothing I can do about it, I want my game to flow more realistically.

5. Grindfest - yeah, it appears to be a bit extreme in the Nicole's action. But those trainings and jobs etc. are meant as a background. Seeing stuff there is just a flavour, not the goal. That, once again, falls into "I can't create everything instantly".

6. Losing your progress due to a crash - that's really shitty, sorry about that. I don't like that one bit and will make the game autosave frequently based on time or, perhaps, every morning.

Thanks for your feedback!

 

[eddie987]

I really wanted to like this, but it's a huge letdown. We have nice looking MILFs as neighbours, whom we can't do anything, not even with the one that's clearly interested in us, not even flame option.

We have these magical powers, to give random strangers a funtime, except for the supposedly dicksucking scene in the park, which isn't even a proper sucking. Beside that, a teasing from the bookgirl, meh. Then we have Nicole, whom the suit guy almost fucks at the table, but we get cockblocked in a groping situation.

The horny blonde sucks off the fat motherfucker, nothing with the MC of course because why would be anything, after all we're the Red Cross of flamers, and when we'd join in, we get the supposedly funny scene from the dev about it being a WIP, which at that point isn't funny but annoying as fuck.

Beside that, it's a grindfest, which seems pointless since that caffe machine couldn't even be used, the hint system gave zero hint beside "It's not that easy", and what's the most annoying is the lack of an option to save the game beside some autosave, that put me back for half of my progress because why not after the game crashed without any reason.

Same here. The models are great, but the game seems to be focused on voyeurism. Nothing wrong with that for those who like it or don't care about the story and just want sex scenes for a quick fap, but personally if I want to see random people fucking, I'll just watch porn. I don't see how I can enjoy a game where you have to grind for the MC to jerk off in a corner, while everyone around him is getting some. Oh yeah if you grind your ass off you might get a bj... Wow... It's like the MC is not the main character. Oh, I also agree about save system. It's really annoying. After the game crashed I just gave up.

 

[Deleted member 563623]

You mean you'd like some sort of immediate control over stuff that is happening? Like "slap", "change position" etc.?

Ah, no. Sorry for being unclear. Basically what i mean is i don't like mind control at all. I like stories about characters making their own choices. For example, if a character had some magical ability to make others do what they want, i wouldn't be interested in that at all. Might as well be playing with barbies and ken dolls at that point imo.

I was wondering if that was the kind of thing going on in this game.

 

[LaserSaysPew]

Ah, no. Sorry for being unclear. Basically what i mean is i don't like mind control at all. I like stories about characters making their own choices. For example, if a character had some magical ability to make others do what they want, i wouldn't be interested in that at all. Might as well be playing with barbies and ken dolls at that point imo.

I was wondering if that was the kind of thing going on in this game.

You don't really tell them what to do. Basically, you can enhance fetishes they already have(or implant them later on), what they do with them is out of your control. They won't run to you to fuck immediately, hence people complaining about voyeurism and other characters getting laid.
There is no actual mind control but I didn't see any other genres that suggest this type of stuff.

 

[RottenPlum]

Please tell me save from previous version is working this time? Because in previous updates i had to start from the beginning due to bugs or couldn't load the save at all.

 

[EZ8lt]

1. Actually, you're not being cockblocked with Nicole. There are currently 8 levels of this action(with 2 blowjob animations), what you're describing sounds like level 3.

2. Coffee machine is a placeholder for actual shop that comes in 2 weeks, maybe, a month.

3. Hint system, if you click on it, it actually tells you that it needs to be a double click to get a hint. Done so for future shenanigans with achievements and secrets.

4. MC not getting any action - he does. With Carol, with Nicole, somewhat with Ashley during Carol's event. Jessica and Susan - not yet, I can't create everything instantly, you know. If you don't like that you don't get everything right from the start - well, nothing I can do about it, I want my game to flow more realistically.

5. Grindfest - yeah, it appears to be a bit extreme in the Nicole's action. But those trainings and jobs etc. are meant as a background. Seeing stuff there is just a flavour, not the goal. That, once again, falls into "I can't create everything instantly".

6. Losing your progress due to a crash - that's really shitty, sorry about that. I don't like that one bit and will make the game autosave frequently based on time or, perhaps, every morning.

Thanks for your feedback!

1. I see now, although the fact there's only 3 bar that gets filled up while there's actually 8 level that goes by 10 points/level is confusing as hell. Also the thanks for suit guy being the only one that can raise her corruption and it is rng as hell, I had 4 days in a row when he never appeared makes this needlessly grindy. You should either raise his chance to appear, or have the others raise her corruption as well to shorten that grind. Skipping text is something doable in Unity as well, you should implement that at least if you want to keep the pacing for the grind.

3. It doesn't do anything like that. What it does is giving me responses like "Not that easy", Too slow, I should give you a hint or not", etc. Nothing actually useful.

4. Couldn't even get to the Carol part because of the crash. I did it now but finding the night scene was only by chance because of the lack of hints. I get that you won't be able to create everything all at once, but even with the Nicole scenes, the tip of the scales is still off. Prioritizing is important, and if you serve the side dish before the main course, that won't sit well with the playerbase.

6. Honestly, a save function, or at least a frequent autosave should've been implemented from the very first version, especially when you create something that heavily relies on grind without the option of skipping through fastly.

 

[LaserSaysPew]

Please tell me save from previous version is working this time? Because in previous updates i had to start from the beginning due to bugs or couldn't load the save at all.

They work! Although tracker will be empty and will start tracking only now.

1. I see now, although the fact there's only 3 bar that gets filled up while there's actually 8 level that goes by 10 points/level is confusing as hell. Also the thanks for suit guy being the only one that can raise her corruption and it is rng as hell, I had 4 days in a row when he never appeared makes this needlessly grindy. You should either raise his chance to appear, or have the others raise her corruption as well to shorten that grind. Skipping text is something doable in Unity as well, you should implement that at least if you want to keep the pacing for the grind.

3. It doesn't do anything like that. What it does is giving me responses like "Not that easy", Too slow, I should give you a hint or not", etc. Nothing actually useful.

4. Couldn't even get to the Carol part because of the crash. I did it now but finding the night scene was only by chance because of the lack of hints. I get that you won't be able to create everything all at once, but even with the Nicole scenes, the tip of the scales is still off. Prioritizing is important, and if you serve the side dish before the main course, that won't sit well with the playerbase.

6. Honestly, a save function, or at least a frequent autosave should've been implemented from the very first version, especially when you create something that heavily relies on grind without the option of skipping through fastly.

1. It will have 9 levels. 8 currently implemented. 3 levels are for the first level of corruption, 3 for the second, 3 for the third. There are filling bars at the top of the screen, they indicate levels of corruption. Yeah, I agree it's too grindy and something has to be done about it. At least for now until it's not a main goal anymore. I'll tone it down in 2 weeks with the addition of level 9.

3. It does for me, maybe not clicking fast enough. Anyway, it will also be changed to a right click for hint, left click for taunting you. Or I'll just make it a default left click. Will change it back when I add secrets.

4. The problem here is that if I add all flame events first and people will be just walking around watching/fucking/dominating/etc. and THEN I add grind it will look weird. Plus I wanted some gameplay. I'm new to all of this gamedev and I'm trying to learn not only rendering but actual coding, creating systems, balancing. I want to improve.

6. I agree. That's an oversight mostly caused by lack of experience in such projects. But now I know and I will fix it!

 

[Lonewolf007]

Could you please change the story some .I don't like watching other guys in the game getting lucky with the lady's the m.c is trying to hook up with. just not my thing and I am sure some others think the same thing . [I not asking 4 a skip fetcher ] I am asking the dev to please make a separate route for the m.c to get the lady's to only xxx stuff with ONLY the m.c except for the marred lady I under stand why that part cant be changed for story reasons. It ticks me off see the Lady's blowing other dudes or worse ya know. I lost interest in the game some becouse of that kinda stuff . Just please change the story were the player can chose to share or not to share with other dudes right of the bat . The way the script is written know it feels like your forcing the [The player]m.c. to corrupt the lady's for other guys to have fun with them instead of the m.c . Over all the games good But the sharing stuff kinda kills the game for me as well as some others I reckon . I am just trying to be honest with you so if I were to write a review it would only be 2 and a half stars minus stars becouse of forced sharing content being forced on the player . If it weren't for that I would give you 4 and a half starts in review . I just don't want to help other dudes in the game to get lucky .why should the m.c corrupt the lady's only to watch helplessly as other guys tap them when the m.c could just as easily corrupt all the lady's Just for himself ?

 

[Pigfarmer]

Some notes about the game.

1. Advancing dialogue with spacebar was buggy. First advance always had to be done with the mouse. Also after a choice you'd have to click once before the spacebar started working again. Some encounters were really hit-or-miss like the ones with the sadist store manager. Skip button would be nice too.

2. I kept accidentally clicking the exit button in the top-right side of the screen when I was trying to get to the map. Maybe move the exit button to the top-left, next to the date, since it gets used less often.

4. Character sprites in park are invisible, unless hovered upon, at least on Linux build.

5. Would it be possible to display the flame requirements for a scene in the content menu? Would help figuring out how to find unseen content.

6. Some UI elements didn't scale down to 1366x768 very well.

 

[eddie987]

Could you please change the story some .I don't like watching other guys in the game getting lucky with the lady's the m.c is trying to hook up with. just not my thing and I am sure some others think the same thing . [I not asking 4 a skip fetcher ] I am asking the dev to please make a separate route for the m.c to get the lady's to only xxx stuff with ONLY the m.c except for the marred lady I under stand why that part cant be changed for story reasons. It ticks me off see the Lady's blowing other dudes or worse ya know. I lost interest in the game some becouse of that kinda stuff . Just please change the story were the player can chose to share or not to share with other dudes right of the bat . The way the script is written know it feels like your forcing the [The player]m.c. to corrupt the lady's for other guys to have fun with them instead of the m.c . Over all the games good But the sharing stuff kinda kills the game for me as well as some others I reckon . I am just trying to be honest with you so if I were to write a review it would only be 2 and a half stars minus stars becouse of forced sharing content being forced on the player . If it weren't for that I would give you 4 and a half starts in review . I just don't want to help other dudes in the game to get lucky .why should the m.c corrupt the lady's only to watch helplessly as other guys tap them when the m.c could just as easily corrupt all the lady's Just for himself ?

He can't make changes at this point. Most of the game is about voyeurism, if he makes the scenes with the other dudes avoidable, the content won't be enough not even for a v0.01, or he'll need months to create alternative scenes for a "no-cuck" path. Because the MC is definitely a cuck. He isn't sharing the girls like you said, but he's basically making them horny, so they can fuck other guys (amazing super power!) and once in a while he might get a sympathy bj... I gave this game more than enough chances, but it's clearly not for me (the crushes didn't help) and obviously not for you either. And that's ok, there are a lot of other games that are focused on the MC.

 

[LWtbo]

I don't play this game I haven't since the early days of it when I wished the Dev good luck with this Game despite the fact I wouldn't play it again because it was primarily a Voyer game.
And the reason I wont play it is because by your own actions you cause a possible love interests or even just shag interests to get it on with other's.
Even if thats only at first and even if its just the one time thats allready one time to many in my book and I no longer have interest in said Girl.
An example I dont even like the husband why would I help him shag his young blond neighbour.
I mean MC's not even geting paid for his help.
That said though its Dev's game and I think lonewolf007 its a little unfair to ask him to change it in such a large way.
I wouldn't ask the Dev to do that I just chalked up as another game to avoid and moved on.
Before anyone ask's I may have moved on but I still like to check forums on how a game going especialy if it has promise as this one has.
The game maybe not be for me but definatly for most here.

Just sayin.

 

[LaserSaysPew]

Could you please change the story some .I don't like watching other guys in the game getting lucky with the lady's the m.c is trying to hook up with. just not my thing and I am sure some others think the same thing . [I not asking 4 a skip fetcher ] I am asking the dev to please make a separate route for the m.c to get the lady's to only xxx stuff with ONLY the m.c except for the marred lady I under stand why that part cant be changed for story reasons. It ticks me off see the Lady's blowing other dudes or worse ya know I lost interest in the game some becouse of that kinda stuff but please change the story were the player can chose to share or not to share right of the bat it feels like your forcing the [The player]m.c. to share so far

It is in fact planned to add different routes for player. For instance, Ashley flame will have more iterations where you'll be able to block Fred from appearing. And you'll be acting yourself. Routes just take a more developed world which I am working on.
Another example. Susan. Soon you'll be able to have fun with her. She's quite adamant about not cheating right now, which you can guess from the intro, and Fred taking Ashley's pictures will play a role in changing that. And in my vision of the game, since you'll be able to not let Fred take pictures, you'll have to find another way of "unlocking" Susan. Perhaps, taking Ashley's pictures yourself and planting them into Fred's phone which will be a lot harder to do.

Some notes about the game.

1. Advancing dialogue with spacebar was buggy. First advance always had to be done with the mouse. Also after a choice you'd have to click once before the spacebar started working again. Some encounters were really hit-or-miss like the ones with the sadist store manager. Skip button would be nice too.

2. I kept accidentally clicking the exit button in the top-right side of the screen when I was trying to get to the map. Maybe move the exit button to the top-left, next to the date, since it gets used less often.

4. Character sprites in park are invisible, unless hovered upon, at least on Linux build.

5. Would it be possible to display the flame requirements for a scene in the content menu? Would help figuring out how to find unseen content.

6. Some UI elements didn't scale down to 1366x768 very well.

1. I...never implemented space bar skipping... How the hell did you do that?! xD I never actually even tried it since I didn't implement hotkeys yet, some work needs to be done first.

2. Good thinking! I'll figure the right place for it.

4. You mean all you can see are grey figures and they turn into characters when you hover? That's intended. If grey characters are not seen - then that's a bug. Elaborate.

5. Sure! I just didn't have much time to do this panel and visual stuff is really hard for me, aphantasia. So it takes extra time. But yeah, I'll work on that!

6. 1280x720 is the native resolution of the game, scale up? Can you provide a screenshot here or in discord, please? I'll try to adjust it.

 

[EZ8lt]

They work! Although tracker will be empty and will start tracking only now.



1. It will have 9 levels. 8 currently implemented. 3 levels are for the first level of corruption, 3 for the second, 3 for the third. There are filling bars at the top of the screen, they indicate levels of corruption. Yeah, I agree it's too grindy and something has to be done about it. At least for now until it's not a main goal anymore. I'll tone it down in 2 weeks with the addition of level 9.

3. It does for me, maybe not clicking fast enough. Anyway, it will also be changed to a right click for hint, left click for taunting you. Or I'll just make it a default left click. Will change it back when I add secrets.

4. The problem here is that if I add all flame events first and people will be just walking around watching/fucking/dominating/etc. and THEN I add grind it will look weird. Plus I wanted some gameplay. I'm new to all of this gamedev and I'm trying to learn not only rendering but actual coding, creating systems, balancing. I want to improve.

6. I agree. That's an oversight mostly caused by lack of experience in such projects. But now I know and I will fix it!

1. The filling bars got full way before I reached level 8. I'd get the logic behind it if one bar would mean 3 level, but that's not how it works right now, hence the confusion.

3. I have an action switch on my mouse that clicks 2-3 depending on the setup, at the same time, so not being fast enough isn't the problem.

 

[LaserSaysPew]

1. The filling bars got full way before I reached level 8. I'd get the logic behind it if one bar would mean 3 level, but that's not how it works right now, hence the confusion.

3. I have an action switch on my mouse that clicks 2-3 depending on the setup, at the same time, so not being fast enough isn't the problem.

1. I meant there are 3 levels of Nicole's corruption and there are 8(9) parts of Nicole's action. Corruption levels affect Nicole's behavior(how she treats customers, how she reacts to your actions) At corruption level 1 you can't get past part 3 of action, level 2 unlocks 4-6 parts, level 3 - 7-9.

3. Maybe you're too fast? xD I don't know, I didn't have any problems while testing it, didn't fail even once. But I'll remove that double click requirement, it adds unnecessary complexity while providing nothing in return. Well, it gives you +5 power if you keep single clicking it but that's not it's purpose.

 

[Deleted member 563623]

You don't really tell them what to do. Basically, you can enhance fetishes they already have(or implant them later on), what they do with them is out of your control. They won't run to you to fuck immediately, hence people complaining about voyeurism and other characters getting laid.
There is no actual mind control but I didn't see any other genres that suggest this type of stuff.

Appreciate the clarification. Def gonna check this out when i get a minute.

 

[kjhadfjkle]

Game doesn't work. I press continue and nothing happens on the first screen. Not a good sign.

 

[Pigfarmer]

Game doesn't work. I press continue and nothing happens on the first screen. Not a good sign.

You should probably post the log file here to help the dev debug the issue. The file is located at
C:/Users/<username>/AppData/LocalLow/Cloudlet Games/Traveller's Tale/Player.log if you're on windows. The AppData folder may be hidden.

 

[Zoro45]

his wife definitely cheated on him

 

[pastera]

Is there a way to progress with the jogger?
Currently I sometimes see her at the cafee (last things with her was when she ran naked in the park and I "went to her") but she panicks and leave and my dude says "What should I do about her" but I can't seem to find out what.