Ren'Py The Witch [v0.1-Intro] [allion_Ell]
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- Jul 13, 2018
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Well, what do we have here? I came across this today and it looks pretty interesting. I'll check it out.
- Nov 22, 2018
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Well, I haven't played very far. It became obvious pretty quickly I'm not going to enjoy this game very much.
Regardless, I do want to point out a few problems.
In the beginning, you get to name the MC and his parents. Unfortunately, they don't have default names... or so I thought. Looking into the script, the parents do have predefined names, but they're overwritten by whichever name you enter, even if you enter nothing. That's not great. Default names are really useful to prevent accidentally having two characters with the same name, so I suggest giving the player a way to use them.
Rollback is disabled. I don't think I need to explain why that's unpleasant.
The English is a bit rough around the edges, but not overly so. A noticeable issue was that 'do' and 'make' are seemingly used interchangeably. Also, 'please' is misspelled as 'pleace' in the first section, the one where you name the MC and his parents.
There are a few lines that start with a random letter (from the Latin or Russian alphabet) or number and then just continue as normal. Also, there are some lines where the Russian text is still there, followed by the English translation.
Regardless, I do want to point out a few problems.
In the beginning, you get to name the MC and his parents. Unfortunately, they don't have default names... or so I thought. Looking into the script, the parents do have predefined names, but they're overwritten by whichever name you enter, even if you enter nothing. That's not great. Default names are really useful to prevent accidentally having two characters with the same name, so I suggest giving the player a way to use them.
Rollback is disabled. I don't think I need to explain why that's unpleasant.
The English is a bit rough around the edges, but not overly so. A noticeable issue was that 'do' and 'make' are seemingly used interchangeably. Also, 'please' is misspelled as 'pleace' in the first section, the one where you name the MC and his parents.
There are a few lines that start with a random letter (from the Latin or Russian alphabet) or number and then just continue as normal. Also, there are some lines where the Russian text is still there, followed by the English translation.
- Feb 24, 2019
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Hello, there's a nice, interesting game coming up, but the next update has to be in half a year
At the start of the game - why does every house have a fire hydrant outside it? Dangerous neighbourhood much?
- Sep 8, 2021
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The game has been out for 1 year but still no "sex" tags 
After 1 year of development the version here is still "Intro"
In addition the author already has another game in the state of version 0.1a with the last update 1.5 years ago
After 1 year of development the version here is still "Intro"
In addition the author already has another game in the state of version 0.1a with the last update 1.5 years ago
- Jul 10, 2017
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What a game ...
Drag princessy sissy MC meets mafia exception: this game of crash and burn out:
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- Sep 8, 2021
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Yeah, Version 0.1 game was out exactly a year ago.At the time thought it was pretty good but after a year instead of getting new material and updated to V 0.2 there's now a new demo 0.1 that needs a start over.. Glad it's not totally abandoned but a
V 0.1 remake after a year doesn't inspire confidence about the story continuing.
V 0.1 remake after a year doesn't inspire confidence about the story continuing.
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The premise of the game is very weird. "Your dad borrowed a ton of money and fled the country, so we'll make you pay instead of chasing him down. You will pay all of it over 10 months or else... And don't bother going to the police, we're a perfectly legitimate bussiness and individual bankruptcy laws no longer exist, so have fun paying."
I'd say the game needs a lot more exposition on how this world operates, at least to bring us up to what the MC knows before the action starts. I'm not buying it that everyone knows about the Nexus Corporation and how it operates, except the MC.
Fatal crash:
Russian translation fail?
I'd say the game needs a lot more exposition on how this world operates, at least to bring us up to what the MC knows before the action starts. I'm not buying it that everyone knows about the Nexus Corporation and how it operates, except the MC.
Fatal crash:
Russian translation fail?
