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damn thanks for that. saved me a download. looking at the comments kinda feel like dev might need to remake this game. read a comment of his a while back saying he's gonna go for avoidable NTR but if you dont got that at the beggining then its pointless. havent played it in a long while but a weak MC isnt for me. having a mom who kicks you in the balls really aint for me.
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There's a path where you join the villain as a fellow corrupter (only one scene after the path split so far but maybe check it out a bit later?), pick that and mom kicking him in the balls should be a one time thing.
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the game had problem nobody can deny it. but the idea is very good. with
little bit much effort you can make really good games.
can I give you some advice I think you would need to improve your patreon to ensure. You have nothing inside the page. you need to introduce people with an idea of an attractive product to ensure that they are interested and donate you.
and you need to remove kick scene It's too early for that
the game had problem nobody can deny it. but the idea is very good. with
little bit much effort you can make really good games.
can I give you some advice I think you would need to improve your patreon to ensure. You have nothing inside the page. you need to introduce people with an idea of an attractive product to ensure that they are interested and donate you.
and you need to remove kick scene It's too early for that
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Pardon for early femdom, i know that it's not everyone taste, but call my stupid or without research, femdom is one to show how the mom is corrupted as the build up in story,sure maybe there is other way that i'm not thought about it, feel free to tell me how should the corruption be shown. As for weak MC, the MC in this story is actually blank MC which as the story start,got under the influence of the villain so he get docile personalities, and then as the stories progress and branched, as in 2 out of 3 branch, the MC have break from the villain influence, the MC personalities will grow as strong good guy/ strong bad guy, and in other branch, the MC will stay wimpy
thank for the advice, i appreciate that, yeah,, i'm bad at marketing lol, but before next year, i will ensure to improve my patreon page. And for removal of content, probably yeah,will replace the harsh femdom to be later in the story in Daz Remake that still in my WIP,hopefully, i can release the Early Daz Remake in December.
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a part of me thinks it's too late for changes. and im kind of picky when it comes to corruption games, so dont take my opinion to seriously.
if mom's corruption was slightly less corrupted or MC's family in general i prolly would like this game more. why? the reason is so you can see some of the good still left in MC's family and player have more chance to get in touch with characters. if Mom is corrupt from the beggining all im gonna see is the bad and then i'm just thinking. "wow i don't know why i wanna save mom."
also it gives MC more awareness. he'll notice that his family is changing especially mother making it easier for him to develop a personality. (good guy, bad guy, wimpy). it will also fix the kick in the balls scene cuz since she's not heavily corrupted yet she would slap him or punch him first before she resorts to kicking in the balls.
Again this is just my opinion. i haven't played in a long time so i dont know alot of what's goin on. and of course it's your game so you should make it as you want. if you're open to suggestions great if not also great. good luck to you.\
also have you thought about making MC's name optional? last comment i read said you cant change it but i dont know about the current version. billy is just not the best name
a part of me thinks it's too late for changes. and im kind of picky when it comes to corruption games, so dont take my opinion to seriously.
if mom's corruption was slightly less corrupted or MC's family in general i prolly would like this game more. why? the reason is so you can see some of the good still left in MC's family and player have more chance to get in touch with characters. if Mom is corrupt from the beggining all im gonna see is the bad and then i'm just thinking. "wow i don't know why i wanna save mom."
also it gives MC more awareness. he'll notice that his family is changing especially mother making it easier for him to develop a personality. (good guy, bad guy, wimpy). it will also fix the kick in the balls scene cuz since she's not heavily corrupted yet she would slap him or punch him first before she resorts to kicking in the balls.
Again this is just my opinion. i haven't played in a long time so i dont know alot of what's goin on. and of course it's your game so you should make it as you want. if you're open to suggestions great if not also great. good luck to you.\
also have you thought about making MC's name optional? last comment i read said you cant change it but i dont know about the current version. billy is just not the best name
well...there Daz remake on WIP that have room of storyline tweaking...by the way, good suggestion, so yeah, many of us agree and i convince that i really need to tone down the early femdom and probably playing around the corruption of mother, and i will sure do it in Daz remake, worry not, i'm cool with suggestion, as this is my first attempt of making games, and what I learn is feeding my own ego is a bad thing to do,and i need to heard people... about MC name as optional,actually making it's not optional in this first attempt is to help me visualize the character easier in my planning stage, so, probably in the Daz Remake i will change it to optional name.
Good suggestion, I just thinking to tone down the femdom to be more on tease and humiliation rather than straight up CBT, and seem like it will have better reception from player
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It would be cool to have a route that's soft femdom, without masochism or humiliation, just the MC hypnotised and mind-blanked and obedient. Maybe have her call him a good boy from time to time. Domination being treated as synonymous with sadism and degradation is a pet peeve of mine.
Good suggestion, I just thinking to tone down the femdom to be more on tease and humiliation rather than straight up CBT, and seem like it will have better reception from player
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you can use the introduction to establish how wimpy and pathetic the mc is real easy just tell the how weak and lame the mc is in the introduction. also you can use the therapist for establish mc insecurity and how his want to be appreciated. because the women in he living don't see his as men
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you can use the introduction to establish how wimpy and pathetic the mc is real easy just tell the how weak and lame the mc is in the introduction. also you can use the therapist for establish mc insecurity and how his want to be appreciated. because the women in he living don't see his as men
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you can use the introduction to establish how wimpy and pathetic the mc is real easy just tell the how weak and lame the mc is in the introduction. also you can use the therapist for establish mc insecurity and how his want to be appreciated. because the women in he living don't see his as men
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i would agree with this if it was a full blown NTR game. but this game seems to want to give you the option to save family go corrupt or be wimpy. if the character was already wimpy from the start then routes where he rises to power seem unbalanced.
however if YO/u want a full blown NTR game i can understand where ur coming from.
you can use the introduction to establish how wimpy and pathetic the mc is real easy just tell the how weak and lame the mc is in the introduction. also you can use the therapist for establish mc insecurity and how his want to be appreciated. because the women in he living don't see his as men
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i would agree with this if it was a full blown NTR game. but this game seems to want to give you the option to save family go corrupt or be wimpy. if the character was already wimpy from the start then routes where he rises to power seem unbalanced.
however if YO/u want a full blown NTR game i can understand where ur coming from.
i would agree with this if it was a full blown NTR game. but this game seems to want to give you the option to save family go corrupt or be wimpy. if the character was already wimpy from the start then routes where he rises to power seem unbalanced.
however if YO/u want a full blown NTR game i can understand where ur coming from.
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no i fact i don't not eve like NTR in the fist place but i believe conflict is necessary for tell a good story. i don't like do death in dark souls but is you remove that part for the game lost all meaning. but i get it your point i think the game also needs to establish how you can win maybe in the same intro. i think will be easy just put one render with mc and couple women characte with the text you will manager do win i become playboy of something in that line. and another with the opposite that way you give the player a reason to play
for the wimpy part i think is important for character arc
- Sep 12, 2018
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The Web We Weave [v0.6.9] [Balladiasm] market (pc&mac): 110 mb:
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Ver 0.6.9 is now public, enjoy!
and for this month plan, as I said from several month ago, i will try my hardest to release the Daz version of this VN at least ver 0.0.1 before next year , and i quite bent with this,and after several month of learning Daz, i'm finally have confident on pursuing the daz version, so aside from completing ver 0.7 Honey select version this month which picking what not yet implemented from the roadmap, there will be ver 0.0.1 Daz version , the Daz version is my chance to backpedaling my mistakes and fix long list of stories element that invite complaint, which not limited to:
1. Story pacing
2. Early inevitable hard femdom.
So, there will be fresh slightly different stories for the reader aside from different graphic, you will heard again from me about this later.
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:Ver 0.6.9 is now public, enjoy!
and for this month plan, as I said from several month ago, i will try my hardest to release the Daz version of this VN at least ver 0.0.1 before next year , and i quite bent with this,and after several month of learning Daz, i'm finally have confident on pursuing the daz version, so aside from completing ver 0.7 Honey select version this month which picking what not yet implemented from the roadmap, there will be ver 0.0.1 Daz version , the Daz version is my chance to backpedaling my mistakes and fix long list of stories element that invite complaint, which not limited to:
1. Story pacing
2. Early inevitable hard femdom.
So, there will be fresh slightly different stories for the reader aside from different graphic, you will heard again from me about this later.
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Overall I'm enjoying this route very much, the only negative I would say is pacing; this is all excellent material for once we start to take control, but it would be nice to have a route where Dr. Lili doesn't just give him this power so easily. I'd like to see him spend some time as her pawn first before gaining status, and for her to only teach him how to hypnotise girls by himself after he's spent some time assisting her with brainwashing girls. It's always hot when brainwashing involves sexual elements; that could be him fucking her victim while Lili hypnotises her so she'll associate Lili's voice with pleasure, rubbing her to the edge and denying her over and over until she'll agree to anything Lili wants just to finally be allowed to cum, or just fucking a girl to orgasm after orgasm until she's broken and will just lie there limply and accept Lili's words without thinking.
It's a tough one I know, because a lot of people are going to want to go straight to Billy being in charge, but I think that going straight from Billy the bitch to being big Billy badass so quickly is jarring, and hurts the story. Doing it this way would stretch out the story a little, while hopefully being satisfying for people not into being kicked in the balls.
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- Jul 10, 2017
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Pretty close to source material ... former slaves are quick to chop their masters ...
Just remember your G0T gamers!
Just remember your G0T gamers!
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wooow this game is litterly getting worse with every update, just in short it's a waist of time.
I remember this game before, I tried to join the doctor but that choice was a false one and you were forced sub anyway, did that ever change? I immediately quit after that scene as two "choices" being still one choice at the end is a pet peeve of mine personally.