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done... @nam654 please remember to promote when you update to new versions...
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Gonna play your game after i make some dinner, i'll update my post after i am done and give your game a short review
-> 0.04 Version <-
* Update *
Playable so far, although ifind that it lacks content for it's current version but it is whatever, will wait for further updates
-> 0.04 Version <-
* Update *
Playable so far, although ifind that it lacks content for it's current version but it is whatever, will wait for further updates
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(This review has been moved to the review section above, for this thread)
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Goodness wtf is this sorcery
so it gives choice but you still get the worst thing possible lovely, thanks for this you made me avoided this and since i hate ntr im stayin awayYeah I too didn't see any bat and the choices are just....game really needs a walkthrough right now because its rather disturbing at the moment.
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So, should we criticize the game because we are not able to choose the right options? In all games, whether they are for adults or not, the wrong decisions lead us to bad endings and the correct ones to continue the game. People here are used to like easy and linear stories and happy endings with the MC fucking all women, all very easy, but when something different comes up they get angry and talk shit about the game.
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Try clicking the trunk of the car, that helps. The scene is avoidable. If you clicked a bit. Or moved your mouse a bit. Y'know. Beside, there's worse or even as bad things in games in general, Not sure what makes a suicide scene makes it more "awful" than a murder scene or even corruption in this case. Both are bad. But end of the day it's a story in a game. It's ment to tell a story, Wether that's visually represented in a VN or by text in a book. It's the same thing just in a different format.
I'm not angry, but its rather surprising. Like it goes from 0 to 100 in a second. Also despite it being a game these scenes are still disturbing to most people. Just like the kid orgy in IT was a huge what the fuck is this moment. Which is why walkthroughs for these types of games are valuable.
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Forums like this are for the purpose of getting feedback... Feedback will sometimes include criticism... Reviews are a form of feedback that are based on the person who's doing the review's own experience with the product being reviewed... Plus it just an opinion, so take it as such...
I always try to ensure that I'm being as honest and thorough as I can when reviewing these VN/Games, and base it off my personal experience with it... Plus I try to ensure if something I've run into seems like it might be over the top (like a drawn picture showing someone who commited suicide, blood and all), I will mention such things in my reviews, that way if other folks don't want to see that kind of stuff, like myself, they can be forewarned... And there is no harm in doing so...
If I don't absolutely need a walkthrough, I will go out of my way to ensure I don't use one if at all possible... And when I hovered over the car the whole car highlighted, which gives the reader no clue that there is a different highlight with the trunk as compared to the whole car... Which is another issue that may require re-strategizing, so as to not confuse the reader... How was I supposed to know the trunk could be selected separately? Why would I spend several minutes on every picture, doing a grid search with my mouse trying to enure I've scanned the entire landscape just to find a clicky that in some way wasn't a bit more obvious? I didn't see it, therefore I had no clue, hence I didn't experience anything other than what I reviewed already...
It is not my job as the reader/player to be clued in, during what from a story standpoint is a stressful moment of decision making, how do I stop the rapist, to know visually from my surroundings that a bat exists in the trunk of a car, which was never mentioned previously in the story so as to clue the read in about it's existance, when I have a big heavy bottle in my hand to use... I tried the bottle, it failed, I saw the whole car light up when I hovered over it, clicked the car, it failed... I didn't see any other obvious paths to take in that scene... I'm sorry that I didn't see the trunk was a separate clicky, what can I say? And that was just one piece of what I mentioned in my review...
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Wow, thanks for your feedback. The suicide scene received a lot of criticism, in the 0.03 version I wrote that I end this line, because I do not have the opportunity to develop all the lines, but the player's feedbacks made me change my mind, in version 0.05 this scene will not be. Also I added a selection system for the player to be more immersed in the game.
Please write your suggestions and wishes, I will consider them.
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Not a problem, glad to hear development is still on going, and I wish you luck in creating your VN/Game... I know it has to be tough to do all that is needed when making these things... And any kind of feedback is always good, so you can get different points of view on how the game panned out for folks trying it out... Best of luck...