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outbalancing

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So out of curiosity, I know this was supposed to have been translated, but it still reads like it was machine translated only, is an actual translation being made?
Bro, this is not readable at all, I haven’t finished the game yet, but the quests themselves for killing monsters are old-fashioned and the plot seems to be translated normally and shows normally, but the dialogues in the H-scenes are just terrible, because the text is completely mixed up, both with other scenes and just randomly the text from the beginning of the event appears in the middle or end of the scene, it is impossible to play, this, by the way, becomes noticeable after the second scenes in events, because in the first it seems almost not noticeable, and then it’s complete horror, it’s easier to download and play the Japanese one, and the up scale is very I recommend it, because it works the same way on this version as on the Japanese one.
 
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Bro, this is not readable at all, I haven’t finished the game yet, but the quests themselves for killing monsters are old-fashioned and the plot seems to be translated normally and shows normally, but the dialogues in the H-scenes are just terrible, because the text is completely mixed up, both with other scenes and just randomly the text from the beginning of the event appears in the middle or end of the scene, it is impossible to play, this, by the way, becomes noticeable after the second scenes in events, because in the first it seems almost not noticeable, and then it’s complete horror, it’s easier to download and play the Japanese one, and the up scale is very I recommend it, because it works the same way on this version as on the Japanese one.
I agree, its really bad. Which is why I was asking if there was an actual translation coming instead of someone claiming to have translated it after only having a machine do the work. Its crazy to think that anyone put work into this. Unless they know absolutely nothing about the english language.
 

akhulu

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I agree, its really bad. Which is why I was asking if there was an actual translation coming instead of someone claiming to have translated it after only having a machine do the work. Its crazy to think that anyone put work into this. Unless they know absolutely nothing about the english language.
You are not wrong. I'm not a native english speaker. I actually learn most of my english from internet. So it's likely that what seems to be normal, passable english to me could be terrible to fluent native people.

I think the confusion here is you think I actually manually translate by hand whatever the machine doesn't do. But the "edited" work here are manually checking the errors/hallucination and correct it myself or with machine again, since I wouldn't dare to rewrite the whole paragraph myself with my limited english at the first place. The hallucianation issue is unavoidable to an extent even if I improve my script because it's the limited of the AI technology today. However chatGPT literary are way smarter and better readable than the old MTL by miles, for most people.

The only issue that I could fix is people reporting of mixed up texts, which is weird because I do not see it when playing the game myself. I guess it's either some mistakes when combining all translation texts together or I simply uploaded the wrong, not latest version. But I have to look it up myself to identify and fix the issue, which requires me to translate another Enuemu games so I can arrange a week of focusing on game translation and new chatgpt API fund.

Translation with proofreading and related tasks are really time consuming even with machine, that's what I learn from the group who does White album 2 work. I promise I will try to release a fix for this game once I manage to find time for another game translation+ API fund, but I can't promise that it will be soon tomorrow or within this week.
 
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akhulu

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I've also noticed errors like dialogue of what appears to be scene titles in the scene text, or splices of what seem to be different scenes at the beginning or end of scene text.
I've attached one example. Some of the lines in this scene also seem to be out of order.
yeah very likely of the script mixing up the text file order. I will try to fix it even it's already been long time. Sorry for that, I don't have helps like proofreading this is fan work so it's in my hobby time mostly.
 
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You are not wrong. I'm not a native english speaker. I actually learn most of my english from internet. So it's likely that what seems to be normal, passable english to me could be terrible to fluent native people.

I think the confusion here is you think I actually manually translate by hand whatever the machine doesn't do. But the "edited" work here are manually checking the errors/hallucination and correct it myself or with machine again, since I wouldn't dare to rewrite the whole paragraph myself with my limited english at the first place. The hallucianation issue is unavoidable to an extent even if I improve my script because it's the limited of the AI technology today. However chatGPT literary are way smarter and better readable than the old MTL by miles, for most people.

The only issue that I could fix is people reporting of mixed up texts, which is weird because I do not see it when playing the game myself. I guess it's either some mistakes when combining all translation texts together or I simply uploaded the wrong, not latest version. But I have to look it up myself to identify and fix the issue, which requires me to translate another Enuemu games so I can arrange a week of focusing on game translation and new chatgpt API fund.

Translation with proofreading and related tasks are really time consuming even with machine, that's what I learn from the group who does White album 2 work. I promise I will try to release a fix for this game once I manage to find time for another game translation+ API fund, but I can't promise that it will be soon tomorrow or within this week.
Man, i can respect you responding and the fact you took the critisicm with such dignity. A lot of people tend to get overly offended from critiques. For not being a native english speaker you certainly did a prettt good job. :)
 

outbalancing

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You are not wrong. I'm not a native english speaker. I actually learn most of my english from internet. So it's likely that what seems to be normal, passable english to me could be terrible to fluent native people.

I think the confusion here is you think I actually manually translate by hand whatever the machine doesn't do. But the "edited" work here are manually checking the errors/hallucination and correct it myself or with machine again, since I wouldn't dare to rewrite the whole paragraph myself with my limited english at the first place. The hallucianation issue is unavoidable to an extent even if I improve my script because it's the limited of the AI technology today. However chatGPT literary are way smarter and better readable than the old MTL by miles, for most people.

The only issue that I could fix is people reporting of mixed up texts, which is weird because I do not see it when playing the game myself. I guess it's either some mistakes when combining all translation texts together or I simply uploaded the wrong, not latest version. But I have to look it up myself to identify and fix the issue, which requires me to translate another Enuemu games so I can arrange a week of focusing on game translation and new chatgpt API fund.

Translation with proofreading and related tasks are really time consuming even with machine, that's what I learn from the group who does White album 2 work. I promise I will try to release a fix for this game once I manage to find time for another game translation+ API fund, but I can't promise that it will be soon tomorrow or within this week.
I personally am satisfied with the quality of the translation, the only problem is that the texts are very mixed up.

By the way, I still haven’t finished it, so I’ll wait then)) because changing this version and the Japanese one is still not convenient for the game.
 

akhulu

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Sorry for the long update. My PC got damaged and it took me few days to get it back. No data loss fortunately.

Here the translation fix v1. It's all LLM hallucination as the culprit of the errors and it was possible that the error parts occur in the routes that didn't appear in my playthrough before so I missed them. That's why I check all the H-scenes in the full save this time to ensure no errors in those scenes at least (which is majority and important parts of the game). It's almost impossible to find a pattern for all possible hallucinations the LLM may make so I gotta manually check them this time until I have time to improve my scripts to catch all hallucination variations in future. This took me 12 hrs working non stop so lets hope there won't be errors left :LOL:. But if you notice any feel free report to me in this thread I will fix it. I believe if there are any it won't be easy to notice however. E.g: few dialogues of some sex scenes swapping to each other won't make a big difference unless it's a series.

Lets see if someone finds a major texts swap error so I can fix it, then we can bother Sonu The Pilot to update the final fix at #1 post.

Regarding new game translation, I want to translate old titles like "A tale of two swords" but here is the bad news. TIL openAI has discontinued the free trial API feature since just few weeks ago. So I need to find new alternatives that offer free trial API for the translation. It also doesn't help the fact that "A tale of two swords" uses different old RPGM engine than the recent works so I need more time to figure out ways to extract the game data. I will update whether I should or how translate next Enuemu games after I can find solutions for these 2 problems.
 
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BurnRaijin

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Sorry, but the files in this game are corrupted. I downloaded this game from different sources, but all the files are equally corrupted.

It looks like you didn't completely download these files from mega and sent them here.
Screenshot_20240528-183536.jpg
 

akhulu

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Sorry, but the files in this game are corrupted. I downloaded this game from different sources, but all the files are equally corrupted.

It looks like you didn't completely download these files from mega and sent them here.
View attachment 3679660
Did you try to run it on mobile phone? Afaik this game is on windows only.
Btw try downloading from different hosts other than mega to see if it works.
 

BurnRaijin

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Did you try to run it on mobile phone? Afaik this game is on windows only.
Btw try downloading from different hosts other than mega to see if it works.
I wrote that I tried downloading it from other hosts and those broken files are everywhere. The game works on my phone, I'm just worried about possible errors due to the lack of a large number of files.
 

JackCayman

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I wrote that I tried downloading it from other hosts and those broken files are everywhere. The game works on my phone, I'm just worried about possible errors due to the lack of a large number of files.
Pretty sure those are just failed downloads and not broken files.
The ".mega" extension is what Mega uses for temporary files.
 

BurnRaijin

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Pretty sure those are just failed downloads and not broken files.
The ".mega" extension is what Mega uses for temporary files.
Yes, I know. The fact is that I do not have the original file from mega, I downloaded the archive posted here. The problem is that I can’t re-upload the files so that they are complete since I don’t have them and I didn’t post this archive here.
Actually, I had in mind your idea when I called the file “broken”. Mega uses this extension to mark temporary files that are not fully downloaded, and I can’t download them completely because I was downloading an archive, not files.
 

JackCayman

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Yes, I know. The fact is that I do not have the original file from mega, I downloaded the archive posted here. The problem is that I can’t re-upload the files so that they are complete since I don’t have them and I didn’t post this archive here.
Actually, I had in mind your idea when I called the file “broken”. Mega uses this extension to mark temporary files that are not fully downloaded, and I can’t download them completely because I was downloading an archive, not files.
Ah, sorry, when you said that "the files were corrupted" I thought you meant the zip file.
But yeah, it seems like there are some unfinished download files from mega in the links.
I'm guessing the best way to solve this would be to contact the translator and the original poster maybe?
akhulu
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Can we ping them like this?
 

BurnRaijin

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Ah, sorry, when you said that "the files were corrupted" I thought you meant the zip file.
But yeah, it seems like there are some unfinished download files from mega in the links.
I'm guessing the best way to solve this would be to contact the translator and the original poster maybe?
akhulu
Sonu The Pilot
Can we ping them like this?
Should I message them then? Sorry, I'm new to this site and don't know all the functions.
 

akhulu

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Yes, I know. The fact is that I do not have the original file from mega, I downloaded the archive posted here. The problem is that I can’t re-upload the files so that they are complete since I don’t have them and I didn’t post this archive here.
Actually, I had in mind your idea when I called the file “broken”. Mega uses this extension to mark temporary files that are not fully downloaded, and I can’t download them completely because I was downloading an archive, not files.
I still don't understand whats exactly your issue tbh. Assuming the mega link is broken, have you tried downloading the game from other mirror hosts to see if that works? You may also try running it on PC and transfer it to your phone later.

I actually don't upload the game. I sent the mods/uploaders the game, they scannned for virus and uploaded it onto multiple mirrors. It's strange if one of the links suddenly have broken files because people played it since the release and no reports so far.
 

BurnRaijin

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I still don't understand whats exactly your issue tbh. Assuming the mega link is broken, have you tried downloading the game from other mirror hosts to see if that works? You may also try running it on PC and transfer it to your phone later.

I actually don't upload the game. I sent the mods/uploaders the game, they scannned for virus and uploaded it onto multiple mirrors. It's strange if one of the links suddenly have broken files because people played it since the release and no reports so far.
But I already wrote that I downloaded not only from Mega. These ".mega" files are available in all mirrors. I don't have any problems, I'm just worried about the amount of content that has disappeared from the game, since these files are located in the "img", "data" and "audio" folder.
 
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