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Not bad for an initial release. I absolutely love the music heightening the drama right off. You also did a great job with the introductory text — credits, warnings, etc. (And, of course, the Anchorman cameo was a nice touch.) This very much plays like an interactive tragedy film, at least in many ways. There are many games that stick to typical tropes and approaches, which isn't necessarily bad (the formula is repeated in the first place for a very good reason). But I greatly appreciate uniqueness and an artistic approach to things. This game demonstrates your own experience (current or past) with film and/or theater. And that is a great thing.
One small thing I thought I would mention is that when the MC is thinking, you have the name as Jack Thinking (or whatever). I'd suggest that the "Thinking" be parenthetical, start with a lowercase letter, and be italicized as well: Jack (thinking)
I've enjoyed the beginnings of this game so far. Well done, and thanks for sharing your vision with us here.
One small thing I thought I would mention is that when the MC is thinking, you have the name as Jack Thinking (or whatever). I'd suggest that the "Thinking" be parenthetical, start with a lowercase letter, and be italicized as well: Jack (thinking)
I've enjoyed the beginnings of this game so far. Well done, and thanks for sharing your vision with us here.
While I'm glad to hear this, the other side of me wishes you would write an alternate dark hardcore NTR path, (where Big John comes out all
) to go along with your hero path.With a story line like this, Big John could be the new "Eric" of NTR if it gets written well enough
Saint Blackmoor
Patreon doesn't lose money if they are seen supporting incest if they were seen supporting incest all that would happen would be that they would lose paypal who is the one who forced patreon to remove incest rape bestiality. All they would have to do is find a different provider to use instead.
Patreon doesn't lose money if they are seen supporting incest if they were seen supporting incest all that would happen would be that they would lose paypal who is the one who forced patreon to remove incest rape bestiality. All they would have to do is find a different provider to use instead.
More acceptable than congratulating a game that has rape in it on tuesday and bashing a game for the same tag on thursday, don't you think?
Oh, and this is an excerpt from the email that patreon sent me threatening of killing my account:
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- Aug 10, 2018
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I'll wait a few updates before I play. Looks like the dev doesn't know what he wants in his story. Either say yes it will have ntr or no it will not. No need to get the hopes of either side up. Right now he's saying he will add it if he feels like it needs it. So no positive or negative answer either way.
- May 29, 2018
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Tbh, it just sounds like you're in the closet.
- May 29, 2017
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Why do we always have to play as the guy? Why couldn't we play as the girl in the Dark Myth t-shirt?
(Facepalm if you like this idea!)
(Facepalm if you like this idea!)
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- Sep 10, 2019
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Dark subject but pretty well written and decent graphics. Not a game that pulls in the masses like some.. but I'm sure you will get your followers. Good luck.
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What potential. The premise is a straight up rip off of Big Brother, and all the other clones it spawned from devs who couldn't be assed to come up with their own idea.
- May 17, 2018
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It's not for you? Congratulations.
However, I really don't have to agree with your interpretation.
- May 29, 2017
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would be much more interesting to play as the girl instead of the guy.
Then we could try to fight off 'big john' and only succeed in annoying him a lot and then need to be 'punished'. I feel like that would be much more entertaining.
(facepalm if you like this idea!)
Then we could try to fight off 'big john' and only succeed in annoying him a lot and then need to be 'punished'. I feel like that would be much more entertaining.
(facepalm if you like this idea!)
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How this ever got past the F95 watchdogs is beyond me? The story is hitting a new low with an orphanage and big ugly fuckers having there way with them. Totally unnecessary from any point of view, so I am staying away from this one. You guys take care now.
- Nov 20, 2018
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It's actually not unheard of for someone who was abused or molested when younger to engage in the same thing as an adult. I don't find this ironic at all. I do find it horrific and a tragedy when that happens, but this isn't ironic. Given the choice, I won't engage in sleep sex. But having it as an option does, oddly, make some degree of sense.
I've played it now and can offer my 2 cents. It's certainly different and exploring some uncharted territory. If there was some more attention to detail and some more planning behind the script, it could be much more impactful.
The problems I see are mainly in the tone, pacing, and the MC.
Tone. It can't quite settle on a tone. The subject matter is extremely dark. It's probably one of the more fucked up situation we can find in a porn game that tries to keep a semblance of realism. It would likely benefit from a more consistent tone that captures the dire and abhorrent conditions the family has been put through. Dread, anger, hopelessness, fear, sadness, coping, perseverance, depression, trauma. These are some of the terms that spring to mind when considering the subject of this game in a realistic setting, but the game takes a rather nonchalant approach. The way it's presented now doesn't put nearly enough weight to the atrocities that are coming to light. This issue isn't helped at all by the possible choices at the MC's disposal.
MC. This could be the most glaring issue at this point. The rapey actions that the MC can take cannot be justified at all by his characterization thus far. He is all intent on protecting his family and saving them from Big John. He is sorry about the things he was forced to do as a child and the things he had forgotten. Yet, he can sleep rape his mom and sis, and coerce the youngest one into sexual acts. There is nothing in the script that reconcile this discrepancy. More care needs to be put into the code to create a viable path towards a rapey MC. His intentions and motivations need to change to match the choices he makes. If you are rapey, the MC should frame his battle against Big John as a way to claim the girls for himself. "These bitches are mine!" There is some established backstory that makes this possible already. MC was abused as a child just like the others. He could have a warped mind due to this ordeal.
And finally, the pacing has some big problems. This is a prologue, and a very short one at that, but you've already dropped incredible bombs that would have been better served as something that is insidiously brewing in the background. It could have explored the missing memory and the true nature of their situation over the course of a few updates. The situation with Maria(?) also seems extremely rushed. We went through an entire arc resulting in reconciliation in the span of like 10 minutes.
Other than those 3 points, there are oddities in the plot and character actions that don't seem too logical. Dissociative amnesia is not unheard of, but how come nobody explored their experiences with him until now? If he was being abused by himself in a controlled environment, I can see that he might keep it buried. In a household of this many people with everyone having gone through some fucked up shit, it seems quite unlikely that this whole situation is just coming to light right now. Also, is there no safety nets for abused foster children? I'm not an expert, but calling CPA seems like the logical thing to do as soon as any of the kids became old enough to understand the gravity of what they went through.
That's my 2 cents for what it's worth. Good luck. I do appreciate any dev that tries to tell a unique story.
The problems I see are mainly in the tone, pacing, and the MC.
Tone. It can't quite settle on a tone. The subject matter is extremely dark. It's probably one of the more fucked up situation we can find in a porn game that tries to keep a semblance of realism. It would likely benefit from a more consistent tone that captures the dire and abhorrent conditions the family has been put through. Dread, anger, hopelessness, fear, sadness, coping, perseverance, depression, trauma. These are some of the terms that spring to mind when considering the subject of this game in a realistic setting, but the game takes a rather nonchalant approach. The way it's presented now doesn't put nearly enough weight to the atrocities that are coming to light. This issue isn't helped at all by the possible choices at the MC's disposal.
MC. This could be the most glaring issue at this point. The rapey actions that the MC can take cannot be justified at all by his characterization thus far. He is all intent on protecting his family and saving them from Big John. He is sorry about the things he was forced to do as a child and the things he had forgotten. Yet, he can sleep rape his mom and sis, and coerce the youngest one into sexual acts. There is nothing in the script that reconcile this discrepancy. More care needs to be put into the code to create a viable path towards a rapey MC. His intentions and motivations need to change to match the choices he makes. If you are rapey, the MC should frame his battle against Big John as a way to claim the girls for himself. "These bitches are mine!" There is some established backstory that makes this possible already. MC was abused as a child just like the others. He could have a warped mind due to this ordeal.
And finally, the pacing has some big problems. This is a prologue, and a very short one at that, but you've already dropped incredible bombs that would have been better served as something that is insidiously brewing in the background. It could have explored the missing memory and the true nature of their situation over the course of a few updates. The situation with Maria(?) also seems extremely rushed. We went through an entire arc resulting in reconciliation in the span of like 10 minutes.
Other than those 3 points, there are oddities in the plot and character actions that don't seem too logical. Dissociative amnesia is not unheard of, but how come nobody explored their experiences with him until now? If he was being abused by himself in a controlled environment, I can see that he might keep it buried. In a household of this many people with everyone having gone through some fucked up shit, it seems quite unlikely that this whole situation is just coming to light right now. Also, is there no safety nets for abused foster children? I'm not an expert, but calling CPA seems like the logical thing to do as soon as any of the kids became old enough to understand the gravity of what they went through.
That's my 2 cents for what it's worth. Good luck. I do appreciate any dev that tries to tell a unique story.
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- Jul 13, 2018
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I'll show Big John my johnson! Get it because he's my dad and i added son to his name(right?). Is he even our dad? Well anyway this looks good and the tags look appropriate for the details of the story so I'm down to play this and see where it goes.
- Nov 20, 2018
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Rape is from the past, so not any part of the story you control after starting the game, at least as of this release. Sleep sex is possible as a choice during the game.
- May 8, 2019
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So false Rape tag and it should be removed for now?
Only pointing it out cause I've been rejected a few times trying to get Rape tag on another game that was Sleep Sex.. Though that girl woke up and hits you with a lamp..
The girls in this wake up?
- May 9, 2018
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I played five minutes of the content and it's a hard pass for me. Too many cuckish vibes, plus the Dev doesn't seem to know whether he's coming or going. Don't understand the trend with new Devs that seem allergic to giving people straight answers. There shouldn't be multiple questions in every thread asking if there's going to be NTR or not. And you the Dev need to either say yes there are plans of that particular content or nip it in the bud right away like most sensible Devs tend to do.
No more "I hate that content but will consider...". Yes or no answers only, it'll save everyone time and energy.
No more "I hate that content but will consider...". Yes or no answers only, it'll save everyone time and energy.