VN Ren'Py Abandoned The Breaker [v0.5.1] [Corrupt King]

[Umbra214]

Where did you get this pink-haired girl?

 

[loikl]

I really appreciate the constructive criticism, thanks. While I won't "correct" everything you've mentioned, it's not because I haven't considered it.

A couple of counterarguments:
- Karin Base Sprite - This is the most consistency I'm willing to sacrifice for the sake of getting certain scenes and effects in the game (the other one being Asuka, but to a slightly lesser degree), and... spoiler alert for v0.2: it is not permanent. That said, even though I'm working with mixed source art, I'm trying my best to make everything consistent, to a point I edit almost every image I use.
- The Story - The pacing will change a bit, but the game's going to remain near the border between VN and Nukige. I'm going to add game play elements, which should affect the player experience in a positive way, and the story will obviously get more complex with time. The current version is an intro.

I made some progress with v0.2, by the way. You can expect some fixes to the current content (typos mentioned in PMs - thanks for that; backgrounds for some sex scenes; the heaviest censorship will be removed - the game won't ever be fully uncensored, though), a simple money management will be added (it will be affected by the in-game choices), and players will be able to make their first decisions.

Cheers!

Thank you for considering my comment you see the interest in the ideas you have about your game.

I don't think there are problems to use other people's art (I already mentioned it), "haramase simulator" does it and the truth is a great game, I don't see why it can't be a similar case, it's just that the karin character looks a bit weird , but outside of that it's not bad.

I wish you luck, sure with time the story and the extra details of the game will be polished.

 

[RandyPhoenix]

Not animated?

 

[El Perverso]

it's just that the karin character looks a bit weird

She looks pretty fitting her role, nothing weird. In fact, I even like that different style of her emphasising her distinction from the rest of the family.

 

[Gattaca1997]

The MC is from:

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[x0run]

Well this looks like fun corruption

 

[Whiteleaf Studio]

I think it's fine as long as you don't make a patreon to make money off someone else work.

 

[BoohooBitch]

wow , the art looks really amazing. Great job!

Nevermind, the art is from other games.

 

[abhi1180]

Is there a blowjob scene...

 

[juniusfate]

Finally a game that I became that "guy" - btw love the artstyles

 

[ProofreadingRUS]

I like the story short but the gameplay was easy to follow.
I hope in the next version there are more girls or the Harem.
I also hope to see some choices and alternate paths ....peace

 

[KoldTK]

Where did you get the loli girl? I want some info

 

[Leviweeb]

like it so far keep it up

 

[TNVL]

Hey, love them pills that makes that loli get some shapes, hope we will see more of those pills, also when do u think it's possible for next update?

 

[Sinned]

The main source of the assets are from orcsoft, these guys are doing some great artowork/games. Mate i understand what you're trying to do but please do not start a patreon on somebody else art cheers.

 

[Kuro~saki]

Well,I'd like to see the more games with Japanese style characters，even that's stolen arts.
Generally speaking the Japanese style games would have a long long story that's not suitable for for a developing games，too much text would make the game a bit boring.（I think that's why most of them only have a full release）
I don't offten have time to read a long story so i think this story is advance in a suited way（maybe a bit too quickly to those who like a more reality story）
And i think the details need more attention，such as some background and the ear sutd of the MC

 

[Thatguy]

Great game. For people who can't let it go that the art is stolen, I wouldn't put it past half of the games on this site are using stolen assets. All Real porn, all Honey Select/Illusion based 3DCG and a good chunk of Daz are stolen. Pretty much a lot of Patreon devs are using stolen assets.

 

[55tyu]

Stolen art from some popular ADV games and some of them have already released animation, what a shame, you shall add "Stolen art" in front of the title.

 

[55tyu]

Great game. For people who can't let it go that the art is stolen, I wouldn't put it past half of the games on this site are using stolen assets. All Real porn, all Honey Select/Illusion based 3DCG and a good chunk of Daz are stolen. Pretty much a lot of Patreon devs are using stolen assets.

you shall understand the difference between derivative work and stolen art.
This game is piracy.

 

[Thatguy]

Did the devs use the same exact story for the origin of the art? Didn't think so cause if they did then we'd have a complete game here. It's not like the dev is asking for you to pay money to play as there's no Patreon or other donate money links for the dev, they are trying to make something they want for free and all you are doing is arguing semantics while bitching and moaning. Look at the site you are on for fucks sake, it's a pirate site and if you got a problem with piracy gtfo.