VN Unity Onhold PMC: Private Military Cuties [v0.1 Teaser] [Oper4tor]

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Overview:
Through sheer luck, a young man wins a tour around a military base, but fate has one more present for him.
Willingly or not, dive into a life in a powerful Private Military Company, full of dangerous and beautiful women. Meet our battle hardened operators and find their soft spots - it's up to You to protect or exploit them. With the balance of international powers hanging at a thread, use this new found power to achieve greatness or bring a downfall all around you. Beware though - this is not the only PMC lurking around... Use guile, force, persuasion or companionship, any means to reach Your ends.​

Thread Updated: 2022-04-05
Release Date: 2022-04-05
Developer: Oper4tor

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Version: Teaser 0.1
OS: Windows, Linux, Mac.
Language: English
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[jonteboy]

Alright fuck it, might as well give it a look

Edit: Review written for the teaser.
TL;DR It requires quite a bit of polish but it's an interesting premise

 

[keterboy]

good luck, will try it in a bit

 

[Demoness_Kiss]

unity...is it a bit heavy on the requirements?

 

[rKnight]

It has potential. Interesting plot with a nice variety of characters and some nice background story, but there are also minor parts which don't make much sense and detract from the immersion.
I hope the game will gain more content in the near future.
*edited after downloading*


HEADPATS... Dear God, anything but that,
I'm a very sensitive guy, I'M NOT SURE I CAN HANDLE, what's going on in this forum? only the classiest PORN is used to be allowed here.

 

[Kinky Bully]

 

[Dementor_ene]

The only good thing about the game is the story.

Everything else raises a lot of questions.
1) Why Unity? Unity is disgusting, especially for a VN's. There's nothing in the VN's that Renpy can't do.
2) The quality of the models and screenshots from HS. Let's be honest, they don't stand out from the mass of other games. Some of the characters look very questionable at all.
3) Lack of animation. This is not even serious.
4) Locations. Just empty boxes.
5) Loli. Where is the loli in this game? This is no longer funny. There are a lot of games with this tag lately, but the game itself has not even a hint of them. Taking a character model that looks 18+ and writing that she's actually less than that doesn't make her loli.

Developer, if you want to wow the audience, in a nice way, I suggest you pay more attention to your skills in HS. Watch more tutorials, practice, talk to people who work in it, see other successful games that use HS models.
It's also better to switch to Renpy. Unity as an engine is very good, but definitely not for a VN's. I haven't seen a single VN's on Unity that makes sense with it.

In any case, I wish you good luck and creative development!

 

[Deleted member 229118]

How is the mind control?

 

[Saint Blackmoor]

Through sheer luck, a young man wins a tour around a military base

My idea of sheer luck is that car that just misses hitting you by an inch in the crosswalk.

 

[xmilteach]

thx

 

[Oper4tor]

The only good thing about the game is the story.

Everything else raises a lot of questions.
1) Why Unity? Unity is disgusting, especially for a VN's. There's nothing in the VN's that Renpy can't do.
2) The quality of the models and screenshots from HS. Let's be honest, they don't stand out from the mass of other games. Some of the characters look very questionable at all.
3) Lack of animation. This is not even serious.
4) Locations. Just empty boxes.
5) Loli. Where is the loli in this game? This is no longer funny. There are a lot of games with this tag lately, but the game itself has not even a hint of them. Taking a character model that looks 18+ and writing that she's actually less than that doesn't make her loli.

Developer, if you want to wow the audience, in a nice way, I suggest you pay more attention to your skills in HS. Watch more tutorials, practice, talk to people who work in it, see other successful games that use HS models.
It's also better to switch to Renpy. Unity as an engine is very good, but definitely not for a VN's. I haven't seen a single VN's on Unity that makes sense with it.

In any case, I wish you good luck and creative development!

Hi! Thanks for checking out the game and giving feedback!
I wanted to answer some of the questions you had about it.
1. I chose Unity because I had some experience in it and basic knowledge of how c# works, to make it/port it to renpy I would have to learn a new programming and a new language but I'm thinking about it.
2. & 3. This is the first time I used HS to do anything creative, I will spend more time learning and improving, same with animations, but that will also need separate implementation.
4. 99% of locations are, and will be created by me, I know they don't look very appealing right now but it will improve later.
5. I consider the small albino girl a loli, because of her childish looks and demeanor most of the time, it will be more fleshed out in next builds.

Conclusions: I promise, it will improve lots, right now it's only a teaser, a light toe dip into the world and characters, and for me to learn what to improve and what works.

Once again thank you very much for feedback!
Cheers.

 

[Oper4tor]

How is the mind control?

For now there are few moments of "soft" mind control in story, no full mind control yet.

 

[Daehorn]

I hate unity. Its so random on my pc and some times load without problem and some times crash again and again.
While im someone who was in military i dont think this game even touch theme of PMC. Its all about contracts and regulations with loopholes. As visual novel i can stomach all these cute operators but in life most of them are damn lawyers and voice actors with some psychopathic tendencies or pedants with crazy eyes for detalils. Their job is heavy and not cute. Multitasking, fast and clear commands plus stress because lives of others rely on them is norm for them.
As for graphics in game its little bland. All PMC company has high efficiency with rooms and all their buildings has much more equipment in rooms. Servers, maps, projectors and all kinds of reports fill their bureaus. All because more space means less money to gain. I will wait for next updates because its has something that makes me thinking about game, but please dont destroy it. Ah. I forgot about mind control. Mixing music in background, light and even somethimes even smell of cleaning agents can put someone in specyfic mood. Well we have also drugs, food and massage chair so which route MC will follow to make all these cuties his?

 

[Crow Armbrust]

THX

 

[♍VoidTraveler]

Through sheer luck

Maybe this should be the title.

 

[Oper4tor]

Maybe this should be the title.

Hey! Title is clever, I made it myself!

 

[Dementor_ene]

Hi! Thanks for checking out the game and giving feedback!
I wanted to answer some of the questions you had about it.
1. I chose Unity because I had some experience in it and basic knowledge of how c# works, to make it/port it to renpy I would have to learn a new programming and a new language but I'm thinking about it.
2. & 3. This is the first time I used HS to do anything creative, I will spend more time learning and improving, same with animations, but that will also need separate implementation.
4. 99% of locations are, and will be created by me, I know they don't look very appealing right now but it will improve later.
5. I consider the small albino girl a loli, because of her childish looks and demeanor most of the time, it will be more fleshed out in next builds.

Conclusions: I promise, it will improve lots, right now it's only a teaser, a light toe dip into the world and characters, and for me to learn what to improve and what works.

Once again thank you very much for feedback!
Cheers.

It's nice to see a man who adequately accepts criticism from players!

If you don't mind, I'll give you some tips:
1) About Unity. Most importantly, add the most important features for a visual novel. Namely - rewind text, the ability to rollback, hide textbox, quick save and load.
2) 80% of a beautiful picture is the right light. Line up light, shadows, accents. You may even need to process the image in photoshop (top developers with models from HS do so).
3) I think it's worth adding a gallery to the game early on.

 

[Oper4tor]

It's nice to see a man who adequately accepts criticism from players!

If you don't mind, I'll give you some tips:
1) About Unity. Most importantly, add the most important features for a visual novel. Namely - rewind text, the ability to rollback, hide textbox, quick save and load.
2) 80% of a beautiful picture is the right light. Line up light, shadows, accents. You may even need to process the image in photoshop (top developers with models from HS do so).
3) I think it's worth adding a gallery to the game early on.

Thanks for the helpful tips!
I'm not a fan of rollback, but I will implement rewinding text.
Save and load are 90% complete, next build should have them.
Hiding textbox is working, press the middle mouse button to hide.
Not much for gallery right now but for sure it will be available later on.

 

[SuzukiPK]

HEADPATS? REALLY?

I'm so happy

 

[Deleted member 229118]

For now there are few moments of "soft" mind control in story, no full mind control yet.

Thanks for saving me the dispointment.