I swear at first I was like "yey, sexual encounter" and then my blood froze when I saw what was going on back there, I almost reversed time to decline
Go for it....the result is the same, just a different road to get there.
Tell the MC I know of a boat that is getting sunk seen, Mr Campbell is welcome to join the crew.
Another antagonist that makes my skin crawl and like others have said....on hell of a cliffhanger.
Good work!
I think the second has the most appeal. I like the third too, more so if you drop the "colder." I enjoyed the dominant choices with Susan.
Personally I like the...sort of 3rd route. Sort of because, you can mix it up a bit and, except for the 1st encounter with Grace, there have been options to show some aftercare. This is vital to that being an acceptable route. Personally, I don't like the 'bitch', 'whore', 'slut' shit in the language. But I do like priming Grace and Susan for more
If it proves you can't have a D/s love route I will be disappointed.