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Okay, This should be an improved version of the script, for version 0.2. I fixed many more things that I forgot to fix in the previous one.
What did I fix?
Installation? Same as the previous version. Replace the script.rpy file in the game folder with this one. This is for version 0.2, again. Hopefully this is the final one I can do, but I know this will probably get more and more updates, soon. Enjoy
EDIT: Oops! Sorry, the jump at the end is to a non-existent label, "sakurahouse2", which I removed. Install this version instead.
What did I fix?
- Fixed more indentation errors
- Fixed more spelling mistakes
- Changed the spelling of some Character names (I think the girl was named Hinata? It's been too long since I have watched Naruto so I'm unsure.)
- Fixed more grammar, changed some punctuation I had made
- Removed the "sakurahouse2" screen - you can just make more if statements instead of making a whole new entire duplicate screen for the Hinata training event
- Added an extra choice! Spoiler: When Hinata's top comes off, you have the choice to tell her something about it, or stare at it a bit longer. This doesn't affect any points with Hinata, as Hinata and Sakura currently don't even have Affection or Lust points.
Installation? Same as the previous version. Replace the script.rpy file in the game folder with this one. This is for version 0.2, again. Hopefully this is the final one I can do, but I know this will probably get more and more updates, soon. Enjoy
EDIT: Oops! Sorry, the jump at the end is to a non-existent label, "sakurahouse2", which I removed. Install this version instead.
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Make an MC that runs so fast when he's horny he ends up I n any weld you can imagine.
What patch? My patch? It should be at the main post in the thread. I'm sorry I wasn't able to apply sooner, unfortunately I was one of the "victims" of the Rogers internet outage.
You can also find it here - https://f95zone.to/threads/ninjaway-v0-2-lusteam.122164/post-8495788
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Yea.. Well, I literally linked the post on the front page..¯\(--')/¯
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Just checked again and nah.. got the right one, folks..
https://f95zone.to/threads/ninjaway-v0-2-lusteam.122164/page-3#post-8495788
post: 8495788:
...?!Okay, This should be an improved version of the script, for version 0.2. I fixed many more things that I forgot to fix in the previous one.
What did I fix?
While I could've tried to change the preferences screen, I'm too lazy to do that, and I would have to change the common.rpy file which is hidden in the actual Ren'Py code. You can only really find that common.rpy file in the translation files, or in the SDK folder.
- Fixed more indentation errors
- Fixed more spelling mistakes
- Changed the spelling of some Character names (I think the girl was named Hinata? It's been too long since I have watched Naruto so I'm unsure.)
- Fixed more grammar, changed some punctuation I had made
- Removed the "sakurahouse2" screen - you can just make more if statements instead of making a whole new entire duplicate screen for the Hinata training event
- Added an extra choice! Spoiler: When Hinata's top comes off, you have the choice to tell her something about it, or stare at it a bit longer. This doesn't affect any points with Hinata, as Hinata and Sakura currently don't even have Affection or Lust points.
Installation? Same as the previous version. Replace the script.rpy file in the game folder with this one. This is for version 0.2, again. Hopefully this is the final one I can do, but I know this will probably get more and more updates, soon. Enjoy
EDIT: Oops! Sorry, the jump at the end is to a non-existent label, "sakurahouse2", which I removed. Install this version instead.
If they come to our world instead, it's just a Marvel/DC story... If you *truly* want originality, you basically have to just watch/read/hear one story from each genre, then never experience that genre again (though even then there's no guarantee).
But in the end, using a common plot device isn't necessarily a bad thing. Tropes are tropes for a reason - they're generally a means to an end. But if the end in question is crap anyway (or doesn't justify the means, if you'll pardon the cliche in discussing cliches...), that's where you have a real problem. There are a million stories involving mutations making a person/population/animal different, particularly since the dawn of the nuclear age; some are entertaining, others aren't, and which is which has little to do with the exact manner in which they frame or explain the mutation.
There's no such thing as originality, but uniqueness exists. I mean, every story on here is probably most likely a porn movie script. Even the most well-executed and amazing stories started from a trope. To several. To hundreds. Every thing has been overused and done to death. So what's the point of trying to be original, when originality isn't really a thing? Using overused plot twists, plot holes, or anything in that fact - is not really a bad thing. What matters though is the execution, a story can be good even if it's just a basic porn movie plot. In this case, this plot just seems to be executed VERY poorly. It's utterly too basic.
Also, I think this game needs the "Sandbox" tag, as it seems to be taking that approach.
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Shhhh, they just can't accept the fact Naruto isn't a good show. And lacks depth and complexity, while pretending it doesn't. (doesn't mean you can't enjoy it though, I myself read many stories that aren't that great in a similar way, but are still entertaining and enjoyable, but I don't go saying they are great
But to whom else I should compare her? There is not much strong girls in this show.
).The only good thing about it was a villain or two. And the author made them too powerful and made another inferior (writing wise) villain just to kill the previous one off XD
And lets not even get started with the fact the world basically freezes in time when naruto isn't there XD and how much filler the show has.
Best thing to come out of naruto, is the parodies.
And lets be honest too... Sakura is just a red herring to distract the reader/watcher from how poorly written it is.
It's like how people think the old superman films were masterpieces of fiction... when if you look at them properly... they were quite bad XD
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seems only 1 out of 100 games on here ends up completed these days. so its no surprise
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