VN Ren'Py Abandoned My New Home [v0.3] [AMN]

[drifter139]

what if i'm looking for "https://f95zone.to/threads/my-new-life-revamp-v0-93-beggar-of-net.30576/" ? u know, the esbalished, more popluar game that has a large following? do i find this game instead? seems wrong. like if i make a game and name it "summertime saga"

please understand this is dev's first project and likely didn't intend for it to be confused with other games. dev has said they will change the title to prevent further confusion

 

[Prokopije]

Hello. Monogamy route possible?

 

[Deleted member 5640726]

i was prepared to give this a go despite the lack of a harem, but NTR/sharing, no thanks. that being said if the screen shots are anything to go by, for a first game the renders look good and and i wish you well

Hi, as I said the NTR scenes can be disabled or skipped, but in any case the story doesn't revolve around an NTR plot.

what if i'm looking for "https://f95zone.to/threads/my-new-life-revamp-v0-93-beggar-of-net.30576/" ? u know, the esbalished, more popluar game that has a large following? do i find this game instead? seems wrong. like if i make a game and name it "summertime saga"

I'm uploading the new version with the name change, once uploaded the thread will be modified.

 

[Deleted member 5640726]

Hello. Monogamy route possible?

Hello,

Except for the threesome scene at the beginning, yes afterwards you will have the choice to have only one sexual partner or not.

 

[Crow Armbrust]

THX

 

[Call of Booty]

Damn,another one with foot fetish no optional.Straight to ignore. Shame,girls look fine.

 

[hyfka]

This is indeed my very first project, and the game is already in its very early stages.
The MC will evolve over time, the characters will evolve, more characters will arrive, the possibilities will increase (yes, there will be some NTR/Sharing content.)

Don't hesitate to give me feedback, but the second version will be out very soon!

Without restarting the whole discussion, I'd warn you that even if that kind of content is optional, the inclusion in a game where it's not the focus is, in my opinion, not the best of ideas.
One, you will never get rid of the drama if you go down that route. People will complain that it's in the game, while others will complain it's not hardcore enough or not available for all LIs.
Two, because of how divisive this kind of content is, you will essentially be making two games, and a good chunk of your work will be lost on the majority of players.

 

[killed_kaykay]

Looks good​

 

[OleJackRipper]

That doesn't give me a good impression of Mc, is this the typical loser who says yes to everything?



I guess if the dev lurks f95, it would be nice if he could say if that means that X content is avoidable (doesn't happen in the story according to player choice) and not skippable.

Leaving that aside, this got interesting
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Good luck dev.

Huh,
So I guess we don't get to ask if there will be a harem ending as the dev's not here?

 

[Deleted member 5640726]

Damn,another one with foot fetish no optional.Straight to ignore. Shame,girls look fine.

Your choices influence whether MC has a foot fetish or not, if you don't have any interest in foot fetish in your choices then in the future you'll see very very little of it.

Without restarting the whole discussion, I'd warn you that even if that kind of content is optional, the inclusion in a game where it's not the focus is, in my opinion, not the best of ideas.
One, you will never get rid of the drama if you go down that route. People will complain that it's in the game, while others will complain it's not hardcore enough or not available for all LIs.
Two, because of how divisive this kind of content is, you will essentially be making two games, and a good chunk of your work will be lost on the majority of players.

I completely understand why people are put off by the mere idea of seeing the NTR label.

That's why I'm going to poll people who pass by here, on whether or not it's worth putting NTR content in the game.

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[juice2000]

Without restarting the whole discussion, I'd warn you that even if that kind of content is optional, the inclusion in a game where it's not the focus is, in my opinion, not the best of ideas.
One, you will never get rid of the drama if you go down that route. People will complain that it's in the game, while others will complain it's not hardcore enough or not available for all LIs.
Two, because of how divisive this kind of content is, you will essentially be making two games, and a good chunk of your work will be lost on the majority of players.

Believe it or not theres alot of people who enjoy both contents mixed together they just dont come crying on forum boards all the time. Pure NTR games are boring and Pure harem are boring as well, mixing and having options is what makes the game interesting. The content is only divisive to the people that dont like it the non NTR/sharing. The other side dont complain even half as much. They accept that different people have different tastes and enjoy whatever content there is. Where as the other side have no tolerance for anything that isnt what they want. People just need to play the game how it is, give feedback if its constuctive to the game as a whole not to their specific feelings. Theres hundreds of games i dont play and i dont go into their threads to say sorry ide love to play but you include blahh blahh blahh gl. Theres no gl wished there at all. It just a thinly veiled attempt to influence the dev they would better off listening to them. So just let the dev do what he wants

 

[Call of Booty]

Your choices influence whether MC has a foot fetish or not, if you don't have any interest in foot fetish in your choices then in the future you'll see very very little of it.



I completely understand why people are put off by the mere idea of seeing the NTR label.

That's why I'm going to poll people who pass by here, on whether or not it's worth putting NTR content in the game.

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I wasn't offered any choice to skip it,so it's not optional. Enough to be put off if you know what I mean.I love some kinks,but not all of them and feet are the biggest no no. I will check if something will be re-done in first chapter so I can finish it and have better opinion on game in general. Like this I stopped on first sex scene and give up.

 

[xXwankerXx]

5 stars from me.

Wait... so, you mean to tell me that those are not the criteria based on which ppl give 4/5-star reviews to all those 'masterpieces' ?? Damn, I feel like I lived in a lie all this time.

yes, there will be some NTR/Sharing content

It was obvious. I kinda figured that out after I read about the lil sister fucking with a wannabe gang leader.I appreciate the honesty tho.

Like most NTR/Sharing games, you'll be able to choose whether or not to activate this content.

Hi, as I said the NTR scenes can be disabled or skipped, but in any case the story doesn't revolve around an NTR plot.

This sounds good in theory, but in reality, it's not such a good idea. Personally, I don't mind the idea of using NTR as a form of punishment for the players who fuck around and get caught by the LIs or make their MCs act like complete idots/wimps to get this type of content, but those scenes need to be completely avoidable if you don't want ppl to complain, otherwise it's best to make the game a full-on NTR game, coz most non NTR fans will avoid it anyway after they read the overview and see how much of a spineless idiot the MC is.

 

[Willy1975]

Footjob? Downloading...

EDIT:
Okay, so I haven't even gone through the introduction yet. No spelling errors so far that I've noticed, but some of the sentence structure is kinda off.

Also:

Spoiler: So the MCs father died and started dating?

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Sorry for being picky but I want to offer constructive criticism whenever I find a game that looks interesting. Keep in mind that I'm not even through the introduction yet. Try and get yourself a proofreader if English isn't your native language.

Good luck with your game AMN01

 

[Trasher2018]

Believe it or not theres alot of people who enjoy both contents mixed together they just dont come crying on forum boards all the time. Pure NTR games are boring and Pure harem are boring as well, mixing and having options is what makes the game interesting. The content is only divisive to the people that dont like it the non NTR/sharing. The other side dont complain even half as much. They accept that different people have different tastes and enjoy whatever content there is. Where as the other side have no tolerance for anything that isnt what they want. People just need to play the game how it is, give feedback if its constuctive to the game as a whole not to their specific feelings. Theres hundreds of games i dont play and i dont go into their threads to say sorry ide love to play but you include blahh blahh blahh gl. Theres no gl wished there at all. It just a thinly veiled attempt to influence the dev they would better off listening to them. So just let the dev do what he wants

My man! That!

As long as the game gives me the chance to avoid stuff (and not just a skip - it has to never happen) I am for all of it. One note games are boring - thats why I dont like pure sharing/happy cuck games or harem. Its more fun to have the danger of cheating or that the LI is going rogue if you dont watch out. And pure harem in general is boring because there has to be other reasons for drama or tension and in most cases that is just not that great. I dont like games where every pussy is destined to be on my MCs dick.

@ this game:

The translation is bad - really bad. When even easy stuff is messed up (brother-in-law instead of stepbrother - i mean, stepbrother should be the 3rd most common word in porn after step-mother and step-sister^^) I dont think that it is good sign.

Or he is not the virgin he says he is and is married to the hidden 3rd sister ...

The common mix up of personal pronouns left and right.

Then the whole premise.

Why does the CEO (rich!) move in with one of his employees? No mansion asset at hand? - that makes no sense .. so the ceo has not enough space for 3 ppl more but she has a large enough home to make it work with 2 more ppl and their household? Sure...

Then - why are they fine that the one sister is in a relationship with a gang boss?

Dont be so direct - say that her boyfriend has money and connections but you dont know what his job is... something like that. That is missed potential.

After that you have the "party" ... dude. Why? Just say "Hey come and visit my at my BFs home I want you to meet" or stuff like that and then he says that something came up and he as to leave. Why promote a party that is not happening and feels just wrong that it gets called off early... and no, our beta nerd is not the kind of guy that arrives so late that the party is ending ...



She is indeed hardcore when she can finish a bottle without opening ...

And than all not avoidable stuff happens and I stopped playing. Sorry, that is not the way how you structure these games - ppl HATE forced stuff.

Good luck with the game - the renders in general seem to be quite nice, but the writing, the premise and the gameplay are not good enough for me to invest more time into it at its current state.

Edit: Oh just as an info, I dont rate games until they are 3 updates in (commonly 0.3+) - so no rating from me at this time.

 

[Deleted member 5640726]

Thank you for your messages!

I'm currently working on version 0.1, so that it can be released in better quality.

As for the translation, that's probably the biggest problem, because I don't really have a proofreader to help me and for the other points, I'm working on them too.

I'll be back soon with an improved version 0.1!

Thanks again for all your advice

 

[Jay_Deeznuts]

Little funny to see so many people mentioning a “stolen name” on a site based around pirating content lol

Criminals are allowed to understand the concept of creativity. Unlike devs apparently.

 

[CheekySix]

Loving the amount of foot content, hoping to see more!

 

[Ghost'']

My New Life [v0.3] Unofficial Android Port + Uncensor Patch

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[Greebz]

Thank you for your messages!

I'm currently working on version 0.1, so that it can be released in better quality.

As for the translation, that's probably the biggest problem, because I don't really have a proofreader to help me and for the other points, I'm working on them too.

I'll be back soon with an improved version 0.1!

Thanks again for all your advice

Do you plan on adding pregnancy, impregnation and or breeding content? Would be grand!