VN Ren'Py Abandoned Love and Submission [v0.08] [veqvil]

[DanMachiFan]

I was actually trying real hard to restrain myself

Don't do it! You were great!

 

[Goblin Baily: DILF]

Please, can someone remove murder and gore from the game tags? ...What? They aren't here??

but there was murder and gore... The MC attempted to choke his own mother with his dong. and Mira busted one of my nuts

 

[jaydem]

but there was murder and gore... The MC attempted to choke his own mother with his dong. and Mira busted one of my nuts

You know that, If the MC was of a mind to, he could have averted a lot of the hostility towards him. Just by the jogging scene the first time. Bear with me a moment if you will, I know you will say it wouldn't work this way, but I've personally seen it done.

When you answer the door, before the jog event, invite her into the door room or foyer whatever. As soon as she is about to speak her evil at you and has opened her mouth, You move in closer to her and kiss her using no tongue at this point. She will naturally push you away to bitch or even hit you at that point.
Immediately move forward to her and as she opens her mouth again, you kiss again, grabbing both her hands as you do. Only this time, you start lightly probing your tongue inside her mouth, while you then open her hands with hers and entwine your finger with hers.

After a certain point, you break the kiss. While your still holding hands, you lean forward and whisper in her ear: I love the way you smell girl, I love the way you taste too, and I can't wait to spend my time jogging with you.

Then without another word, you walk out the front door, while she tries to compose herself.
I promise you, the next time she speaks to you, whether talking about jobs or whatever. She will then try helping you instead of condescending or condemning you.

Just a couple of thoughts brother.........Peace!!

 

[Barioz]

You know that, If the MC was of a mind to, he could have averted a lot of the hostility towards him. Just by the jogging scene the first time. Bear with me a moment if you will, I know you will say it wouldn't work this way, but I've personally seen it done.

When you answer the door, before the jog event, invite her into the door room or foyer whatever. As soon as she is about to speak her evil at you and has opened her mouth, You move in closer to her and kiss her using no tongue at this point. She will naturally push you away to bitch or even hit you at that point.
Immediately move forward to her and as she opens her mouth again, you kiss again, grabbing both her hands as you do. Only this time, you start lightly probing your tongue inside her mouth, while you then open her hands with hers and entwine your finger with hers.

After a certain point, you break the kiss. While your still holding hands, you lean forward and whisper in her ear: I love the way you smell girl, I love the way you taste too, and I can't wait to spend my time jogging with you.

Then without another word, you walk out the front door, while she tries to compose herself.
I promise you, the next time she speaks to you, whether talking about jobs or whatever. She will then try helping you instead of condescending or condemning you.

Just a couple of thoughts brother.........Peace!!

Or she will hire Duke to shoot you and this time he hits Carol. Achievement unlocked: complete orphan.

 

[jaydem]

Or she will hire Duke to shoot you and this time he hits Carol. Achievement unlocked: complete orphan.

It's entirely possible brother. More than likely though, after the jog event, she go home and tell her mother about it. There by having golden eyes making certain comments to you, that only Aiden will recognize, there fore would be a good reason why he said not to steal his wife from him.....Earned achievement "Two Moms for the price of One".....Lol!! ............Peace!!

 

[JayneCobb]

You know that, If the MC was of a mind to, he could have averted a lot of the hostility towards him. Just by the jogging scene the first time. Bear with me a moment if you will, I know you will say it wouldn't work this way, but I've personally seen it done.

When you answer the door, before the jog event, invite her into the door room or foyer whatever. As soon as she is about to speak her evil at you and has opened her mouth, You move in closer to her and kiss her using no tongue at this point. She will naturally push you away to bitch or even hit you at that point.
Immediately move forward to her and as she opens her mouth again, you kiss again, grabbing both her hands as you do. Only this time, you start lightly probing your tongue inside her mouth, while you then open her hands with hers and entwine your finger with hers.

After a certain point, you break the kiss. While your still holding hands, you lean forward and whisper in her ear: I love the way you smell girl, I love the way you taste too, and I can't wait to spend my time jogging with you.

Then without another word, you walk out the front door, while she tries to compose herself.
I promise you, the next time she speaks to you, whether talking about jobs or whatever. She will then try helping you instead of condescending or condemning you.

Just a couple of thoughts brother.........Peace!!

Just so we're all clear... are you talking about in the game, or are you condoning sexually assaulting someone in real life?

 

[Barioz]

It's entirely possible brother. More than likely though, after the jog event, she go home and tell her mother about it. There by having golden eyes making certain comments to you, that only Aiden will recognize, there fore would be a good reason why he said not to steal his wife from him.....Earned achievement "Two Moms for the price of One".....Lol!! ............Peace!!

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[jaydem]

Just so we're all clear... are you talking about in the game, or are you condoning sexually assaulting someone in real life?

Nah, It was just for in game sake only, I myself wouldn't have the balls to do something like that. I did have a friend that was bold like that, and before you start with the assault talk, I'm aware that's what that is and don't wish it on anyone. My example though is that I seen him do something very similar and ended up not only dating her for a long time, but married her as well.............Peace!!

 

[jaydem]

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Damn!! that was awesome. I love it.......Peace!!

 

[jaydem]

Ok, I'm kind of bored at the moment, so I thought I would do another scenario involving Amy this time. It may be a little long, so I will apologize now.

It will start out after the shooting scene, and she just came home from the hospital. The scene takes place over a few days, she will heal fast in my game, do to the fact of the mystical nature of the game.

In the start you are taking care of her every need, and every time she awakes she sees you on a chair either waiting to get her water, or carry her to the bathroom, or just sleeping while watching over her. In my game he'll read to her and play a guitar singing softly to her romantic love ballets.

After a few days of that she starts getting her strength back and being able to walk around, using the bathroom on her own now.

Then on the fourth morning, she meets the MC outside her bedroom, as he is just passing by. He notices that she remains completely silent and is just staring at him, her eyes fixed on him and her breath is slow, deep, and heavy. Because he sees her breathing is different, he at that point notices her nipples are fully erect, showing through her pajama's. As he comes closer to see if there is a problem, she reaches out and grabs his shirt, pulling him urgently into her room.

She then begins to feverishly take his cloths off as well as hers too. By the time they reach the bed, they are both naked, and she pushes him onto the bed. He notices that her inner thighs are soaking wet, as the juices that are clearly coming from her pussy are running down her legs. She then positions herself over your penis, keeping the tip at the entrance to her pussy. Then with a loud deep moan she slides all the way down. Not able to contain her lust any longer, she starts bucking madly, riding your hips like a pony express rider being chased by Indians on route.

Through the course of all her riding, she managed to has several orgasms. By the time you blow your load inside her, the force of which hits her vaginal g-spot and causes her to have a g-spot orgasm, causing her to now buck and spasm until all her energy is spent. You guys lay there in blissful afterglow, until she finally recovers and heads to the bathroom for a shower. Before she goes though she symbolic-ly throws her dildo in the trash can. You lay for a while, thinking how much you love her and how far your relationship has grown.

Anyway, thanks for your patience.........Peace!!

 

[Deleted member 363645]

This game is awesome!!

 

[veqvil]

And I agree with you both. The first time, I've spent hours to find the running shoes behind that column and the MC was covered in sweat even before go running with Mira! :coldsweat:

veqvil is good at hiding things.

Well if you played the tech route, I would make the MC coming looking in the garden from another angle, clearly showing the shoes xD

actually if you clicked the fence and the roof you'll find a secret no walkthgrough mentioned.

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That's a lie! xD

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I will say this, you may think your skills are sub-par brother, but not from where most of us are sitting.
Your game so far is awesome, and you are awesome brother. My highest respect goes to you, for at least, trying to respond to each and every post possible. It means the world to a lot of us :heartcoveredeyes:.

So I can say that, I will stand between you and those with the pitchforks and torches, with a sword and shield. If the doesn't work, I'll hack off Aiden's Dong and use it like a two handed mace, scattering your foes, like leaves to the wind. If that doesn't work, I will resort to building my Chi and release a massive power ball. That will reduce those in it's path to cinders......Like Dragonball Z.....Lol!!

Anyway, love what your doing so far....So keep doing your thang brother.............Peace!!

Damn... thank you, man! But somewhere in my heart, there is an inner peasant with a pitchfork and torch waking me every day! But knowing there are people having my back is just awesome! PEACE!

It will get an update when Veqvil is ready, try to remember he has to make sure his code is more or less clean and flawless now in this transition or he will be bothered by many bugs later on. He is attempting to make a sandbox with many different meaningful choices and different paths.

Now I can't code but do know a little about complexity theory and that difficulty goes up exponentially and not in a straight line, the more complex you make a system. So please give him the time to do it well, we will all profit from it going forward in the game if he does it well now.

@DA22 can't code but know a little about complexity theory... genius confirmed Also what he says is right, I don't want to bring another 0.03 into 0.03.1 after 2 days incident

How do you get that?

You don't, he is a troll.

 

[veqvil]

No, thank YOU for making such a great game in your first attempt in erotic genre. You are definately already among the best game devs

If you could handle the menu indicators of relationship status in your future updates it would be great indeed!!

Keep up the good work friend.

Thank you! I'm always trying to step up my game (fav pun)

Before reading it here, I'd never heard the term "yandere" (no surprise here, I live on the opposite side of the earth).
Anyway, I was serching for infos and another term catched my attention... "tsundere".
Don't know why but Duke came in mind..........:closedeyesmile:

An Australian? Hellow... MATE

Finally a Man with Brain, she is the worst. The Majority like her for some reason. When you reject her what is her solution to that ? Black dicks...

There goes boom again xD

 

[veqvil]

Lol! careful, if your right about being crazy, then you accidentally break the wrong part of the mind.....I could see her filling the bathtub for you one day. Get you in stoking you off, with a butcher knife in her other hand. Next thing you know, you hear some tearing sounds and she leaves the room. Only to find the tub is filling with blood, and you no longer have that massive cock..........:'(.........Peace!!

Ugh, blood in LaS? I would never let any of the characters get hurt, just not my style of telling an adult vn. :test:

Forget what you see around the forum with people rushing updates, you don't need to do that. Please don't do that.

If it's a simple enough game then yeah, people want quick progression but you have a lot going on with more characters being added and rushing that out will end up driving you nuts and you'll never have any time for yourself.

I know you want to keep your players happy but that's no good if you drive yourself into the ground.

We have a laugh and joke around here, we're all patient folk. We're okay entertaining ourselves while you get things how you want them.

The only thing people ask is if there is going to be long delays just let them know. If things go majorly wrong and it's another month until we see something we don't mind if we know it's going to be another month. Radio silence is what leads most folk down the dark path of rage.

You've struck rare gold with a story and characters people are liking. Over time that will grow as will your player base. Don;t do yourself or the game an injustice by thinking you need to have an update out to keep us happy. We'll be happy knowing one is coming and we'll try and keep the forum rage to a minimum.

Thank you for those kind words! I absolutely agree that rushing things certainly is bad for the project but for me, it's also about not letting you wait. I don't want to look back and think "Wut... you only got that far into the story after 6 months?". Nonetheless, having people like you say stuff like that warms my heart! Thank you

I guess majority rules....We all love ya here Brother......Peace!!

*swipe away tears* Peace!!

If only I had the skillz.... I would do it like this.Mother1 had a teenage pregnancy (older sister for folks that like em) that damaged her utherus, she hires a surrogate , Mother 2 gives birth to the MC but due to the nurse's mistake he gets switched with another kid, ending up in Mother 3 care. Mother 3 has a daughter one year later thus the MC has a younger sister. While on a stroll down the park, a couple of bisexual female pornstars abduct the MC , becoming Mother 4 &5. Mother 1 becomes a successfull CEO, Mother 2 pays her tutition and becomes a famous professor, Mother 3 becomes a lawyer to fight abductors in court while Mothers 4&5 shape the MC's libido. And here the real game would begin

And I thought transferring the game into a sandbox mode was "complicated" xDDD

For Cathy-Lynn I would go for something like this:

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It was you, telling me that I mistyped Caitlyn, now you use the wrong one? xDD

 

[DanMachiFan]

An Australian? Hellow... MATE

What? No, no, it was only a way of saying! Is my english really that good??? x'D
To be more precise, the nation opposite to mine is New Zealand (more or less).

 

[veqvil]

@veqvil can already make a playlist with all those songs x D

Unfortunately, I'm not allowed to use that, also I'm not sure if I will be able to implement any sound just yet.

Ok, checking again in 10 years maybe there will be something then.

10 years? Pah by then LaS 2 is out and four other titles xD

I like the thought of getting my hands on the next version earlier for the WT but sadly no. Although you are kind of right. :coldsweat:

Actually, that's a long-term plan for translators and walkthrough makers, but so far I already have trouble keeping up xD

deym this game is really good keep up the good work man i love the story and ur girl model grrrr

Thank you!

This game is awesome!!

Nooo, you are awesome! xD

 

[veqvil]

Or she will hire Duke to shoot you and this time he hits Carol. Achievement unlocked: complete orphan.

While @jaydem really has hot scenes in his head, this comment made me laugh so hard I just have to implement that XDDD

Ok, I'm kind of bored at the moment, so I thought I would do another scenario involving Amy this time. It may be a little long, so I will apologize now.

It will start out after the shooting scene, and she just came home from the hospital. The scene takes place over a few days, she will heal fast in my game, do to the fact of the mystical nature of the game.

In the start you are taking care of her every need, and every time she awakes she sees you on a chair either waiting to get her water, or carry her to the bathroom, or just sleeping while watching over her. In my game he'll read to her and play a guitar singing softly to her romantic love ballets.

After a few days of that she starts getting her strength back and being able to walk around, using the bathroom on her own now.

Then on the fourth morning, she meets the MC outside her bedroom, as he is just passing by. He notices that she remains completely silent and is just staring at him, her eyes fixed on him and her breath is slow, deep, and heavy. Because he sees her breathing is different, he at that point notices her nipples are fully erect, showing through her pajama's. As he comes closer to see if there is a problem, she reaches out and grabs his shirt, pulling him urgently into her room.

She then begins to feverishly take his cloths off as well as hers too. By the time they reach the bed, they are both naked, and she pushes him onto the bed. He notices that her inner thighs are soaking wet, as the juices that are clearly coming from her pussy are running down her legs. She then positions herself over your penis, keeping the tip at the entrance to her pussy. Then with a loud deep moan she slides all the way down. Not able to contain her lust any longer, she starts bucking madly, riding your hips like a pony express rider being chased by Indians on route.

Through the course of all her riding, she managed to has several orgasms. By the time you blow your load inside her, the force of which hits her vaginal g-spot and causes her to have a g-spot orgasm, causing her to now buck and spasm until all her energy is spent. You guys lay there in blissful afterglow, until she finally recovers and heads to the bathroom for a shower. Before she goes though she symbolic-ly throws her dildo in the trash can. You lay for a while, thinking how much you love her and how far your relationship has grown.

Anyway, thanks for your patience.........Peace!!

I can't say too much whats going to happen, but in general hot stuff like this are surely planned for LaS

Not with Amy though, she ded okerFace:

Also hats off to your writing skills!

What? No, no, it was only a way of saying! Is my english really that good??? x'D
To be more precise, the nation opposite to mine is New Zealand (more or less).

Yes your english is good! But who am I to judge XDD

 

[deejay12]

Ugh, blood in LaS? I would never let any of the characters get hurt, just not my style of telling an adult vn. :test:

big troll .... says the guy who let poor little Amy get shot

 

[DanMachiFan]

10 years? Pah by then LaS 2 is out and four other titles XD

I'm going to a notary to countersign this!! :winkytongue:

EDIT : Ok, done! Uff... what a ride!

 

[DA22]

big troll .... says the guy who let poor little Amy get shot

Veqvil never denied he is a big meanie at heart.