The development for this game has been all over the place from day 1. In fact I had long since thought this game to be abandoned since I hadn't seen it for some time on the front page.
It has clearly been overhauled for the most part. The writing, the characters, and the endings don't make much sense even with the walkthrough. The renders and animations are solid so we at least have that.
The endings are rushed and the lack of a "Golden Ending" with the MC getting with both available women doesn't feel right as far as the story goes. Worse still a gallery option is missing so unless you want to replay from a well placed save you aren't able to see any different end scenes without a full replay of the game.
Overall I am glad to see a complete game which is something of a oddity on this site but I have to stress that this game is a "one and done" and is also probably the thinnest 3 star game I have ever reviewed.
I really hope that if this developer continues to make games they will take some lessons away from this game. The biggest of which is: Write at your level.
If you can't write at Tolkien's level don't try to write at his level. Keep the plot simpler and focus on making that work instead of what I feel like we see here where we try to get a secret society plot in the middle of a Daddy/Daughter survival game. These things can work but its a lot harder to wire them together than what you might think.
It has clearly been overhauled for the most part. The writing, the characters, and the endings don't make much sense even with the walkthrough. The renders and animations are solid so we at least have that.
The endings are rushed and the lack of a "Golden Ending" with the MC getting with both available women doesn't feel right as far as the story goes. Worse still a gallery option is missing so unless you want to replay from a well placed save you aren't able to see any different end scenes without a full replay of the game.
Overall I am glad to see a complete game which is something of a oddity on this site but I have to stress that this game is a "one and done" and is also probably the thinnest 3 star game I have ever reviewed.
I really hope that if this developer continues to make games they will take some lessons away from this game. The biggest of which is: Write at your level.
If you can't write at Tolkien's level don't try to write at his level. Keep the plot simpler and focus on making that work instead of what I feel like we see here where we try to get a secret society plot in the middle of a Daddy/Daughter survival game. These things can work but its a lot harder to wire them together than what you might think.