Ren'Py Harem Cartel [v0.2] [TotalHarem]
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TotalHarem I sorry to hear you had threats because of traps in a game. People need to learn to chill out and calm down especially if its game/porn whatever people want to label it. If you don't like something that's in a game/porn or it annoy's you to the point you have to threaten a developer who is making the game which the content is really out of our control, because's its in the hands of the developer than move on and don't keep playing it find something you do like.
Keep up the good work! I have enjoyed what you have developed so far.
Keep up the good work! I have enjoyed what you have developed so far.
Apart from one or two typo's I noticed a few small issues that need a little work. When you start out in the office and switch to the garage to get in the suv to start the journey you end up meeting a black screen which requires you to click on the map to continue. It's probably best to skip that black screen unless you plan to add an animation of some sort.
As you can see in the shadow on the wall, the butt needs a little work to be a bit more rounder.
The hair of the shadow in this picture needs to be redone as it looks almost like guiles hair from street fighter.
First time having sex with Yuna and cumming inside gave a pregnant message. is that 100% or based on a chance rate?
It might be a good idea to assign a percentage chance base for that to happen for players to take the pregnancy route. That, plus when you select the option to sleep and have sex with her you could also have the same chance and use the same response frames used when talking about her not taking the pill but have it say something different when she ends up getting pregnant due to the MC cumming inside her. That would give players the option to try again or to cum outside her. You could also offer a final chance to make her 100% pregnant at a later date if they don't achieve it before then.
Also, Considering the lighting in the room, there are at least 3 different light sources creating those shadows and the one to the right creates the greatest shadow. The problem is that the light at the bottom right is also creating a shadow for the pillows in the top right corner and they are conflicting with the greater light source.
Having sex with Keiko's animation was weird because of her arm movement was always straight, might be worth redoing that scene so her arm is beside her or she's resting on her hand behind her head as he goes to work on her.
As you can see in the shadow on the wall, the butt needs a little work to be a bit more rounder.
The hair of the shadow in this picture needs to be redone as it looks almost like guiles hair from street fighter.
First time having sex with Yuna and cumming inside gave a pregnant message. is that 100% or based on a chance rate?
It might be a good idea to assign a percentage chance base for that to happen for players to take the pregnancy route. That, plus when you select the option to sleep and have sex with her you could also have the same chance and use the same response frames used when talking about her not taking the pill but have it say something different when she ends up getting pregnant due to the MC cumming inside her. That would give players the option to try again or to cum outside her. You could also offer a final chance to make her 100% pregnant at a later date if they don't achieve it before then.
Also, Considering the lighting in the room, there are at least 3 different light sources creating those shadows and the one to the right creates the greatest shadow. The problem is that the light at the bottom right is also creating a shadow for the pillows in the top right corner and they are conflicting with the greater light source.
Having sex with Keiko's animation was weird because of her arm movement was always straight, might be worth redoing that scene so her arm is beside her or she's resting on her hand behind her head as he goes to work on her.
Ouch, adult game dev is hard.
Though, I get the negative feedback, especially about the amount of content.
I've been thinking about moving on from the 'character interactions' to 'story interactions' (like typical games within this niche do) - basically, you get to know the characters via the first interactions that currently exist (some unfinished) - and then you proceed to longer general events involving more characters.
Anyways, I will be tracking what y'all think.
Edit: reading the comments further, a bit surprised that the first version was better received than this one, I wonder what's responsible (cahracters / renders / writing / content). If anyone is leaving feedback, would appreciate specifics
Though, I get the negative feedback, especially about the amount of content.
I've been thinking about moving on from the 'character interactions' to 'story interactions' (like typical games within this niche do) - basically, you get to know the characters via the first interactions that currently exist (some unfinished) - and then you proceed to longer general events involving more characters.
Anyways, I will be tracking what y'all think.
Edit: reading the comments further, a bit surprised that the first version was better received than this one, I wonder what's responsible (cahracters / renders / writing / content). If anyone is leaving feedback, would appreciate specifics
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Lol, I didn't notice these bits.
Because of the way I structure stuff, it's more of a "reach a certain chapter/check who is pregnant/stuff happens"
Yeah, light is hard, it's like the first scene I made in the game.. When someone writes you about this stuff, it's noticeable, but when you are in dev process, you never notice it
All learnings, some content will probably get a boot and/or will be redone.
The long intro accounts for most of the new content, there are new full scenes within strip club/university, short scenes in hotel/safehouse/monastery/home/university (they would have been full scenes, but I ran out of time, and would've needed to delay for a month, which I don't wanna do without receiving feedback).
There're currently 2 traps. One self-identified. Second didn't. Due to time, I left trap content for the next version, there will be at least two full sex scenes in v0.3.
Most of the game was redone on the back-end, so yeah, old save wouldn't work. Plus the intro sections were completely changed.
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I don't really think this update has a worse reception. At least a couple people mentioned they were impressed you took feedback from the first release and acted on it to make it better.
I can honestly write that what you've done so far is actually pretty good and has avoided the main problems of AI created images that I know of. That's why I wrote that it was only a few small issues that I noticed. I'm actually looking forward to see how you handle the quests and what you have planned for them.
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you get more interaction on a first release, because people show up with questions not all of them will stick around.
what bothers me the most is sandbox, i didn't try the first version and i will probably don't start this either. Most of the time sandbox games aren't worth the headache they contain.
Game's start sucks. I can't seem to ever find a game where MC won't be ridiculed or beaten.
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are there any events gated behind having BOTH compassions AND corruption with a character?
Or is it all focused on either 100% corruption or 100% compassion?
Or is it all focused on either 100% corruption or 100% compassion?
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Well, I finished v0.2
Sex animations are pretty good.
premise is interesting enough. I hope to see more.
Seems a bit too spread out at the moment.
Lots of characters have a single scene, which is just introducing them.
Should really focus things on a few characters at first. so the content is more meaningful
Sex animations are pretty good.
premise is interesting enough. I hope to see more.
Seems a bit too spread out at the moment.
Lots of characters have a single scene, which is just introducing them.
Should really focus things on a few characters at first. so the content is more meaningful
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Looks very promising. There's not very much there yet, but the character models are simply gorgeous and the story/themes seems good. I'm hoping that the game will really earn that "Drugs" tag.
I noticed a couple of issues, when Sora grabs Sumire at the hotel, the button says "Fuck Chi", and on the quest screen (which is really bare so far) it kind of looks like the tab that is not selected is the one that is selected.
I noticed a couple of issues, when Sora grabs Sumire at the hotel, the button says "Fuck Chi", and on the quest screen (which is really bare so far) it kind of looks like the tab that is not selected is the one that is selected.
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Really TH probably should drop Patreon, I know it's the biggest platform but I've seen them go after people for light slapping or even dirty talk in games. Hoping they don't do anything to this game but I'm leery of ever utilizing them.
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