Ren'Py Finding Cloud 9 [v0.3.1] [Onyx Decadence]

[MrBenny]

Thanks for sharing. Good points. Biggest portion of girls are not sloppy seconds. I dont intend all girls to be alike either. Different stories, different outcomes.

Some things regarding Mila have not been disclose yet. Something in her past is making her react in such a way. If the player is interested in her, he will try to figure it out and get her. If he believes she is worth it.

You got the whole point with Elizabeth being kind of naive. Perhaps grown up but love gives you pink glasses, makes you do dumb things, right?
Not sure what you mean with her father.
A big assumption regarding affection points. I have simply not put in the variables for some characters. If you played the game. All girls show up in the in the character window.

All in all, like I said, different stories, different outcomes. Some characters will be more straightforward. Some not so much.
Thanks for the input. Makes me think more on the story and all its aspects.

Thanks for the quick reply. I wanted to mention I like how you have been very patient answering players questions, even the ones where they are being overly aggressive towards your story structure. Great work...I wish other dev's showed your respect and patience with their fans.

And with regards to the the father comment I made, I felt due Elizabeth being recently aware her father secretly creating meth or some other hard drug for an organized crime syndicate. She would have avoided anyone involved in any kind of criminal activity, but instead she is stupidly ignores, and still is dating a biker dude (...and so I'm wondering, and I'm sure others would like to know if they have been sexually active with each other...or has it not happened as of yet? Unless Elizabeth is actually bi, and is with the biker chick at the bar instead?). And because Elizabeth is a bit older, I assumed she would have been smart enough to not want to be involved with anyone involved with a criminal organization, because of what happened with her father.

And I found it odd, MC's reaction with Elizabeth being intimate with a biker, MC could have shown more of a back bone and more concern with that relationship at that moment. To the point where he would have been totally honest with her right away, regardless if some negative info was going to slip out...it would have been a good spot to show his love, care and protection for her. And considering Elizabeth's father was keeping his criminal acts from everyone in the family. And MC is now forced to do the same thing as her father did, he would lose the "maybe we will talk to her about it later attitude" is very troublesome (I found the "what ever attitude" odd, considering I had 7 points in MC's intellect stat...and yet he is still acting like a dumb and spineless idiot).

Normally bikers don't treat woman very well...over a short period of time it usually doesn't go well for their women. As the guy will becomes violent and controlling, acting like a pimp...forcing the girl into drugs, getting her hooked. Then transitioning her into stripping, or worse doing porn, or into prostitution making money for their club (I hope that doesn't happen to her). For me, I felt MC didn't show enough concern for her...considering she is a loved one in his life (and a potential love interest), also a part of his immediate family.

Though, I did like how MC protected the Mom right away from the slimy restaurant owner. But it was odd with her choice of dresses for a job interview (it's like she is asking to be sexually assaulted by any random dirt bag. Maybe wearing those on a date, but not an interview). And considering what just happened earlier on with the other slimy guy, I'd assume she would be smart and more aware. (Though, I'd like to know how the restaurant owner knew her husband was just put in jail... )

And finally, when MC was given the task to deliver product at the photo shoot, it gave the impression that it was actually a porn shoot location (lighting stands and all the couches). And even the look on the girls face that she seemed a bit concerned after both guys had their drugs, it seemed she was about to be forced into doing sexual acts with both men after MC left. But in a later scene she said it was just a normal modeling gig, or was it...? (Are any of the girls lying to MC?)

Looking forward to more content when it's released.

Best Regards.

 

[billfk]

How do you pass the time besides sleeping in bed?
This should be a frequently used feature, but it's so inaccessible.

 

[burbero]

And finally, when MC was given the task to deliver product at the photo shoot, it gave the impression that it was actually a porn shoot location (lighting stands and all the couches). And even the look on the girls face that she seemed a bit concerned after both guys had their drugs, it seemed she was about to be forced into doing sexual acts with both men after MC left. But in a later scene she said it was just a normal modeling gig, or was it...? [/ISPOILER] (Are any of the girls lying to MC?)

Looking forward to more content when it's released.

Best Regards.

I thought exactly the same thing. At first I thought maybe it was the drugs that bothered her, but she said that she used them occasionally.

 

[Onyx Decadence]

I thought exactly the same thing. At first I thought maybe it was the drugs that bothered her, but she said that she used them occasionally.

No. Its like in the real world. Friends do drugs together. Sometimes thats it. No fucking involved. Plain and simple. This story doesn’t involve NTR or have things you’ve implied like sexual assault, sexual harrassement, no watching LIs getting fucked by someone else, etc. Things people would see in several games with female protagonists. Where they get blackmailed or somewhat coerced into sexual acts.

 

[Onyx Decadence]

Thanks for the quick reply. I wanted to mention I like how you have been very patient answering players questions, even the ones where they are being overly aggressive towards your story structure. Great work...I wish other dev's showed your respect and patience with their fans.

And with regards to the the father comment I made, I felt due Elizabeth being recently aware her father secretly creating meth or some other hard drug for an organized crime syndicate. She would have avoided anyone involved in any kind of criminal activity, but instead she is stupidly ignores, and still is dating a biker dude (...and so I'm wondering, and I'm sure others would like to know if they have been sexually active with each other...or has it not happened as of yet? Unless Elizabeth is actually bi, and is with the biker chick at the bar instead?). And because Elizabeth is a bit older, I assumed she would have been smart enough to not want to be involved with anyone involved with a criminal organization, because of what happened with her father.

And I found it odd, MC's reaction with Elizabeth being intimate with a biker, MC could have shown more of a back bone and more concern with that relationship at that moment. To the point where he would have been totally honest with her right away, regardless if some negative info was going to slip out...it would have been a good spot to show his love, care and protection for her. And considering Elizabeth's father was keeping his criminal acts from everyone in the family. And MC is now forced to do the same thing as her father did, he would lose the "maybe we will talk to her about it later attitude" is very troublesome (I found the "what ever attitude" odd, considering I had 7 points in MC's intellect stat...and yet he is still acting like a dumb and spineless idiot).

Normally bikers don't treat woman very well...over a short period of time it usually doesn't go well for their women. As the guy will becomes violent and controlling, acting like a pimp...forcing the girl into drugs, getting her hooked. Then transitioning her into stripping, or worse doing porn, or into prostitution making money for their club (I hope that doesn't happen to her). For me, I felt MC didn't show enough concern for her...considering she is a loved one in his life (and a potential love interest), also a part of his immediate family.

Though, I did like how MC protected the Mom right away from the slimy restaurant owner. But it was odd with her choice of dresses for a job interview (it's like she is asking to be sexually assaulted by any random dirt bag. Maybe wearing those on a date, but not an interview). And considering what just happened earlier on with the other slimy guy, I'd assume she would be smart and more aware. (Though, I'd like to know how the restaurant owner knew her husband was just put in jail... )

And finally, when MC was given the task to deliver product at the photo shoot, it gave the impression that it was actually a porn shoot location (lighting stands and all the couches). And even the look on the girls face that she seemed a bit concerned after both guys had their drugs, it seemed she was about to be forced into doing sexual acts with both men after MC left. But in a later scene she said it was just a normal modeling gig, or was it...? (Are any of the girls lying to MC?)

Looking forward to more content when it's released.

Best Regards.

Someone is probably lying about something. Everyone is. But not about stuff like that. She’s sad about taking drugs with her friends simply because she’d rather not be a part of that life. Because that road can be dangerous. But you are who you hang out with. If your friends do drugs, chances are, you will too.
But obviously you will find out more further in the game. The characters will reveal more about themselves as the game progresses.

 

[MrBenny]

No. Its like in the real world. Friends do drugs together. Sometimes thats it. No fucking involved. Plain and simple. This story doesn’t involve NTR or have things you’ve implied like sexual assault, sexual harrassement, no watching LIs getting fucked by someone else, etc. Things people would see in several games with female protagonists. Where they get blackmailed or somewhat coerced into sexual acts.

Hmm...so is Elizabeth seeing (sleeping with) that bouncer, or is it another dude at the biker bar? Because we haven't seen anyone else but the girl boss, the bartender and bouncer. And I'm sure many are hoping it hasn't gone that far yet with her seeing someone. As I, and many hope she isn't spreading her legs to anyone yet, at least until MC has his chance to become the one that is intimate with her.

Regards.

 

[Onyx Decadence]

Hmm...so is Elizabeth seeing (sleeping with) that bouncer, or is it another dude at the biker bar? Because we haven't seen anyone else but the girl boss, the bartender and bouncer. And I'm sure many are hoping it hasn't gone that far yet with her seeing someone. As I, and many hope she isn't spreading her legs to anyone yet, at least until MC has his chance to become the one that is intimate with her.

Regards.

Hehe. Won't disclose any more details. Going to have to wait for the next episode

Glad people are invested, curious.

 

[Ohvidente]

Android Port Updated..

How did you manage to make the port? Translate the game into my language but when creating the apk it won't work.

 

[JD JJJD]

hello I hope you have a great day I have a question will your game have ntr because I don't really like that shit but I see that many of this site do and there are already a lot of games with that .. m for them to spoil another great game

 

[John242]

hello I hope you have a great day I have a question will your game have ntr because I don't really like that shit but I see that many of this site do and there are already a lot of games with that .. m for them to spoil another great game

They stated in the Genre spoiler:

Not Happening: NTR