The Pros:
- The Story is decent enough that it can carry the series so far I think it's well written for the most part.
- The characters so far are well developed, seem down to earth and realistic. I like that the MC friends really are his friends and have his back.
- This game shatters the ridiculous notion that you can't have multiple guy friends without their being any drama. I wish more Devs look at games like this and Hellcat Lounge to understand how to write male friends in stories. There's no unnecessary drama with chasing girls here, his friends are respectful, it's just awesome to see.
- The eye candy for the most part is good, I would like to see a few reworked as some seem to resemble the other as if the Dev used the same base model. Or it could just be the vendor like JASA that tend to have the same looking model. Reminds me of AOA a bit. Still gorgeous characters though.
- So far this is a pretty solid, well designed MC. I can get behind him and he is making this experience of this project much better.
The Cons:
- So I'm from America and hear slang a lot but some of this is agitating. It feels forced and awkward sometimes. I don't know if the Dev is American also, if he or she isn't my hope is that they don't think we all talk like this but we simply don't. Make matters worse for me least is if the MC was a city kid from the streets it would make the MC come up authentic or even a redneck but he's not. He looks like the typical suburban kid and sounds like he watched BET.
I don't want it to seem like I'm ragging on the MC because I'm not. Just know that there are times when slang just sounds... stupid in certain situations.
for example, when the MC was meeting with Chloe at the cafe, he literally said: "Fuck you, That's what's up!" I tell you, I cringed so hard hearing that. When I'm with friends, fooling around, hanging out. Sure, slang usage is inevitable but not like this. Characters like Isabel also look insane using it.
- Free Roam is ok as long as it's simple to navigate and get around. Having a home button that transfers the MC from wherever to his bedroom is always helpful as it eliminates clicks and doesn't slow down the player. Just a thought. Also have him watch TV or shower to pass time or simply put a pass time icon on the screen versus just having to go back to his room.
I hoped this helped. This was meant to help you and not deter you. I like the pacing of the game and I'm not like one of the other lewd only players that compl5when there isn't random sex scenes. Some people just can't appreciate a good story. Most are the ones that don't even read but just skip to the lewds.
The poor guy just found out that one of the people that took him in was on some Walter White shit and got arrested. And that he, a guy in his late teens early 20's is supposed to take his place or he and Riley and Elizabeth are going to be killed. But some of you are complaining about lack of sex content?
Whatever, all I know is that I enjoyed this story and the twists and turns. Keep it coming.
- The Story is decent enough that it can carry the series so far I think it's well written for the most part.
- The characters so far are well developed, seem down to earth and realistic. I like that the MC friends really are his friends and have his back.
- This game shatters the ridiculous notion that you can't have multiple guy friends without their being any drama. I wish more Devs look at games like this and Hellcat Lounge to understand how to write male friends in stories. There's no unnecessary drama with chasing girls here, his friends are respectful, it's just awesome to see.
- The eye candy for the most part is good, I would like to see a few reworked as some seem to resemble the other as if the Dev used the same base model. Or it could just be the vendor like JASA that tend to have the same looking model. Reminds me of AOA a bit. Still gorgeous characters though.
- So far this is a pretty solid, well designed MC. I can get behind him and he is making this experience of this project much better.
The Cons:
- So I'm from America and hear slang a lot but some of this is agitating. It feels forced and awkward sometimes. I don't know if the Dev is American also, if he or she isn't my hope is that they don't think we all talk like this but we simply don't. Make matters worse for me least is if the MC was a city kid from the streets it would make the MC come up authentic or even a redneck but he's not. He looks like the typical suburban kid and sounds like he watched BET.
I don't want it to seem like I'm ragging on the MC because I'm not. Just know that there are times when slang just sounds... stupid in certain situations.
for example, when the MC was meeting with Chloe at the cafe, he literally said: "Fuck you, That's what's up!" I tell you, I cringed so hard hearing that. When I'm with friends, fooling around, hanging out. Sure, slang usage is inevitable but not like this. Characters like Isabel also look insane using it.
- Free Roam is ok as long as it's simple to navigate and get around. Having a home button that transfers the MC from wherever to his bedroom is always helpful as it eliminates clicks and doesn't slow down the player. Just a thought. Also have him watch TV or shower to pass time or simply put a pass time icon on the screen versus just having to go back to his room.
I hoped this helped. This was meant to help you and not deter you. I like the pacing of the game and I'm not like one of the other lewd only players that compl5when there isn't random sex scenes. Some people just can't appreciate a good story. Most are the ones that don't even read but just skip to the lewds.
The poor guy just found out that one of the people that took him in was on some Walter White shit and got arrested. And that he, a guy in his late teens early 20's is supposed to take his place or he and Riley and Elizabeth are going to be killed. But some of you are complaining about lack of sex content?
Whatever, all I know is that I enjoyed this story and the twists and turns. Keep it coming.
