VN Ren'Py Abandoned Consort [v0.4] [8inchFloppyDisk]

[Fazed]

The story of this game is bonkers in so many places, it literally makes no sense.
There is a nonsensical incentive the antagonist wants to instill on MC,
but the game makes MC literally disintegrate into nothingness.

There is nowhere to go. Strip bars where guys get drunk and blow their money away
are literal dumps where all life is broken into little pieces and souls get ground to dust.

MC is the boss with a huge condo, but he leaves the cheating hoe in there and moves to a desolate hotel, with nothing to wear, nothing to do, even tho the antagonist brainwashed him.

So MC is a loser on all fronts and his reaction is to- abandon everything and everyone and go drink himself to death in a strip bar ... The antagonist is so much of a dumb fuck he literally destroyed
any chance he had of MC ever meeting any other hottie, ever, then brainwashed MC and
made him into a dumb idiot.

MC admits thie fiancee is the only girl he ever got close to, only to find out she was sicked on him
by his employees who wanted MC off their tails and head over heels with her.

So the whole setup is there to proove MC is the worthless brain dead cuck to ever live.

MC wants answers but lets the cheating hoe keep the penthouse to cheat some more.
MC was literally fed the cheating hoe by his employees to make him lose his streak.

Colour me surprised. Coherent points made by canto forte.

As cyndical a view as it is, there are some good points here. All orchestrated by the devil? How much was real and how much was an illusion or a lie...Who knows?

I'll be back next update to see how the plot unfolds.

 

[Raboobie]

not that i cant back it up, yet just too tired for prolonged discussions and pointless arguments (what ntr/harem talks usually become, sooner or later).

i didnt read the thread, downloaded game, played it and liked it very much.
saw few "omg, why, ntr shit, unavoidable" comments on the last page and that would be it

even IRL shit happens with far less powerful manipulators, and in this game she has been seduced by the devil (or omnipotent demon at least) himself.
was there any way she could resist - an unaware average human female?
or it would be better if the dev added, imo stupid warning "ntr scene ahead, do you wanna to see it or not".
this way player sees the whole scene, the way the dev thought it would be for the best, and mc is betrayed and hurt, and not sure what to do, or not to do....i don like enforced gfs, fiances or wives even less, yet usually those are shallow ordinary porn games "hotties" (typically a loli, redhead, freckles...hell, one cant go wrong with it, can he?), yet fiance here is intriguing, and im more than willing to give her a chance to redeem herself (and not talking about stupid guilt sub/dom trip or anything, which is also popular kink around here). so that would be it.

btw, sorry if i sounded rude in my first answer to you (now when i read it again it does sound as that).
i might be daffy, yet even daffy should try and be polite every now and then

Holy shifting goal posts batman....

I'm curious now too. Your original post you said the cheating bitch was " just too good in every way to be left down the drain". Someone asked you why and your response was to insult them and a say it's not worth explaining.
They called you on that being a bs answer and you're shifting the whole discussion trying to make the usual ntr flame war the reason you can't answer why you like the cheater. He didn't bring that up you did. Really?

How about back up your claim and explain it? Simply saying she's in intriguing is not the same as too good to pass up. It's a big jump from someone being interesting to being " just too good in every way to be left down the drain." You go on a few times about hating forces gf/wives/li, so there must be something special. Now I'm curious why you think she is when everyone else so far almost universally hates her?

Either you have valid reasons or you where just blowing smoke and got caught in the lie.

 

[An_Able]

Since I see a lot of people (developer included) sharing their views on the whole fiancée situation, I'd like to give my two cents as well.
I personally abhor NTR, and when I saw that scene I very much thought that that's what it was, since it's the literal definition of it (and predicted the outrage about the missing tag). I'm also suspicious of how the rest of the story will play out because of a line of dialogue by the devilguy, but I can't for the life of me recall it. I quite like the breadth of choices the dev gives us (including how to handle the cheating fiancée,) so I'm keeping an eye on the game and hoping dearly that my suspicions don't come true.

As for the fiancée herself, she didn't look nor sound out of sorts even before the MC's mindwipe. She immediately began trying to justify herself, even saying that the devilguy had told her the MC'd be at work until late, which can only lead me to believe she was fully aware of what she was doing. That is cheating. I don't think she was being mind-controlled or anything of the sort, and if it comes out she was then the scene is just badly written. Taking into account what the developer has said (as well as the general quality of the writing so far), I'm almost certain she was aware she was cheating and actively wanted it, no supernatural manipulation necessary. Needless to say I booted her as soon as the game allowed.

Regarding the tag itself in this game, I'd just like to say that the scene itself soured the whole experience for me to some degree. I understand why it was there, I understand the thought process behind it, and I appreciate the choices given to handle the whole situation, but it was NTR and I don't like it so it kind of polluted my experience of a perfectly good game. That said, I don't think the developer should change it unless he deems it necessary. The tag is there (wasn't when I downloaded the game but better late than never) and so is the disclaimer featured prominently on the first post. The player has the choice to not interact with that LI and in fact be quite outraged about the whole situation. The fact that I'm even posting this means that the damage is done, as I'm not one to go starting wars over tags. Trying to compromise now would only lead to people complaining more about anything they don't like in hopes of changing it and, as many other developers have experienced firsthand, that never ends well.

Best of luck with development.

 

[ZeroSG]

Finally, a VN designed for the bottom display on my Zenbook Duo!

Seriously, though, nice start. It's well written and the soundscapes really elevate the presentation for a development version.

 

[Sngo]

Glad I re checked the tags before playing it.
That tag plus dev saying will not say anything about future tags is suspicious as hell.
Could be nice but na, dev already ruined it.
Anyway gl

 

[Joshy92]

just played this game for the first time and i gotta say i like what i see so far it's going to be interesting to see what happens in the story going forward.

Doesn't hurt that all the girls are hot lol (I have a good feeling about Lucy she is my favourite so far)

 

[Wildbill5150]

I'm going to give this a try I just really wish I knew whether there would be future forced ntr?

Now that I think about it I'm gonna wait I will keep an eye on it but I'm not gonna start playing get invested in another girl just to have her also get banged out by someone else looking over everything it's obvious the dev will absolutely put in more unavoidable forced ntr it my not be the focus of the game although that seems to be all it's about so far

I guess I'll just wait and see how bad it gets if it starts getting good and the mc can avoid any future ntr/sharing/swinging then I'll be happy to play and enjoy this game but right now it's just to up in the air about what the dev is going to do

So good luck I'll check back at a later time

 

[sokserey]

We need heavily feature NTR

 

[m4pII]

We need heavily feature NTR

I don't see ntr here in the future (at least not a heavy one).
this story is about something else

 

[goulet1995]

We need heavily feature NTR

the dev has said ntr is not a theme he wants to explore in the game it has the netoare tag for a scene at the begining of the game that is apparently a one time thing

 

[ambitiousGorilla]

Naval aviators are not Colonels, they use navy ranks, and the equivalent is Captain.

 

[Kotobiki]

Holy shifting goal posts batman....

I'm curious now too. Your original post you said the cheating bitch was " just too good in every way to be left down the drain". Someone asked you why and your response was to insult them and a say it's not worth explaining.
They called you on that being a bs answer and you're shifting the whole discussion trying to make the usual ntr flame war the reason you can't answer why you like the cheater. He didn't bring that up you did. Really?

How about back up your claim and explain it? Simply saying she's in intriguing is not the same as too good to pass up. It's a big jump from someone being interesting to being " just too good in every way to be left down the drain." You go on a few times about hating forces gf/wives/li, so there must be something special. Now I'm curious why you think she is when everyone else so far almost universally hates her?

Either you have valid reasons or you where just blowing smoke and got caught in the lie.

Fiancee is cool.

 

[hobobobb]

We need heavily feature NTR

And people bringing comments like this is exactly why you really have to wonder and think before you decide to put NTR type content in your "does NOT heavily feature NTR content" game... (unless it is the focus of the game)

Add that particular Small & Highly for Individual Taste fetish once and, aside from losing a bunch of potential $upport, a Developer will be constantly plagued by requests for more.

Still, Dev should always make what they want to make, even if it ends up being a 'not for the money' project.

Glad the game is actually tagged Netorare now at least, that's a step in the right direction.

 

[HentaiKami]

Interesting start for a story. Will be interesting to see where it goes from here. I do hope we get to have revenge against that demon that is really satisfying.

 

[Jimayo]

8InchFloppyDick Welcome aboard tattooed on his penis. That's a great reference but I doubt many people will catch it. IME not many people have seen that movie.

 

[8InchFloppyDick]

8InchFloppyDick Welcome aboard tattooed on his penis. That's a great reference but I doubt many people will catch it. IME not many people have seen that movie.

Glad you picked up on it. That film is one of my favourite guilty pleasures

 

[Jimayo]

Glad you picked up on it. That film is one of my favourite guilty pleasures

Guilty pleasure? That film was awesome. Kelsey Grammer's character was brilliant.

 

[ktemanuel]

spanish translate link

 

[8InchFloppyDick]

Hi All,

Just a heads up, I've started work on Episode 02. I'll be posting development status and other (hopefully) relevant bits on my subscribestar page

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I still have little idea about how the social media and supporter end of VN publishing works and I'm not a big user of Discord. Yet. Stuff might be a bit 'experimental' and probably a little broken till I get the hang of things.

l8trs!

 

[Canto Forte]

First off, the Episode 02 story stuff is coming along nicely and I should be ready to start converting my plot ideas into actual prose soon.

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