VN Ren'Py Blurring the Walls [v0.5.2] [Torimiata]

[Miiiiiiiku]

Damn it feels like I've joined forces with this guy who's been disliked by many on here since he agrees with me.

Probably a sign that I should stop talking. Far be it from me to continue to remove other peoples fun and be a killjoy by psychoanalyzing art lmao + introducing more discourse. I do appreciate the explanations people gave on why it is or isn't enjoyable regardless. Really gave me insight on this. I'd rather not turn into someone who critcizes just because I dont like the genre. Not a good enough reason to review it honestly. I got what I wanted and learned a bit so Ima bounce.

I still support the Dev's hard work. I echo everyones sentiment. Keep cooking Dev. You got something good here. I look forward to your future VNs and hope to see something that appeals to me in the future since your romance writing is pretty good and your art is sexy! Time to go back into my vanilla hideout. Thanks again!

 

[Illustrivity]

I can't be arsed to go through all these waffling above me, but where the fuck is the sex? Hooooly.

 

[malaac2025]

I don't like how your forced into NTR by letting him kiss her. Also fucking stupid he has an absurd size that is not realistic and than you make MC small. Just making it that MC will lose his girl if they have sex. I was enjoying the story until the forced kiss scene all the selections you make up to that point makes it seem you could get away with just exhibitionism at most not outright damn NTR. So game forces you into NTR no matter what that I don't like. All the choices I made should allow me to say no to that.

Stopped playing this game because all CHOICES have no fucking meaning! Selecting all the safer options the most you would do as a couple is exhibitionism and that means no contact with another guy.

Game Play: 2/5 (choices have no damn meaning it should of just been a damn kinetic novel as nothing you do will change the NTR)
Sound: 4/5
Art: 3/5 (at times she looks younger and other times older guess the problem with AI)

Kiss didn't happen but that you as MC did not even try to stop it like a Beta Cuck still was awful! Seriously there should of been I gotta stop it.. than before you can the ice incident happens but the thing is as MC I should of had a choice to try to stop it!

 

[WhiteFireDaemon]

I have to agree developer gave no option to opt out of her kissing chad Terrace! She was worried about kissing a girl than she just agrees to kiss a guy. Ugh.. just ugh.. MC should of had option to stop it and believe me I would.

Not sure if you played all the way through the scene, but Ari tells Ayumi to only pretend to be willing to kiss Terracce. Ayumi has no intention of kissing him and is expecting Ari to truthfully explain it to the MC. Also, this is a sharing game, not an NTR game. Everything is done with consent and not cheating behind the other's back. That said however, it sounds like you aren't interested in games with sharing or NTR content so probably won't be one you'd enjoy. Wanting a choice to not share in a game who's primary fetish is going to be sharing sounds a lot like you've simply found a game that doesn't fit with your interests. Best of luck on you finding something more suited to your tastes!

 

[Torimiata]

I don't like how your forced into NTR by letting him kiss her. Also fucking stupid he has an absurd size that is not realistic and than you make MC small. Just making it that MC will lose his girl if they have sex. I was enjoying the story until the forced kiss scene all the selections you make up to that point makes it seem you could get away with just exhibitionism at most not outright damn NTR. So game forces you into NTR no matter what that I don't like. All the choices I made should allow me to say no to that.

Stopped playing this game because all CHOICES have no fucking meaning! Selecting all the safer options the most you would do as a couple is exhibitionism and that means no contact with another guy.

Game Play: 2/5 (choices have no damn meaning it should of just been a damn kinetic novel as nothing you do will change the NTR)
Sound: 4/5
Art: 3/5 (at times she looks younger and other times older guess the problem with AI)

Kiss didn't happen but that you as MC did not even try to stop it like a Beta Cuck still was awful! Seriously there should of been I gotta stop it.. than before you can the ice incident happens but the thing is as MC I should of had a choice to try to stop it!

The goal of the game is to explore the kink of sharing your girlfriend. Later choices have more impact in the story, but it seems that this genre may not be your cup of tea. Maybe a different project will suit better your preferences.

Ayumi was unaware that MC was not in on the prank, it was the focal point of the scene.

Once she realized what happened, Ayumi was taken aback because MC did not intervene to stop the kiss, as you had anticipated. This is a key moment in their exploration.

If MC stopped the kiss then...

 

[malaac2025]

The goal of the game is to explore the kink of sharing your girlfriend. Later choices have more impact in the story, but it seems that this genre may not be your cup of tea. Maybe a different project will suit better your preferences.

Ayumi was unaware that MC was not in on the prank, it was the focal point of the scene.

Once she realized what happened, Ayumi was taken aback because MC did not intervene to stop the kiss, as you had anticipated. This is a key moment in their exploration.

If MC stopped the kiss then...

Yes it is not. Exhibitionism is a form of sharing you are sharing intimate acts with others and from my choices and how game was progressing I figured that is as far as it would go not physical sharing. That their was no option to even attempt to stop it showed game is not for me as basically game gives you no choices all decisions throughout the entire game had no meaning or purpose and it's that type of game that is not for me.

This is not a VN as in VN the choices mean something and affect the ending but this does not your going to end up in physical sharing because it is not a true VN. This just makes it actually a Kinetic Novel not a VN. A true VN would have a path for Swinging aka Sharing, Netorase, or just exhibitionism. I'm into the latter but when that key moment came about I realized what the game led to believe is a lie and it's not a Visual Novel as your choices don't mean anything and it's going to be Swinging no matter what you do.

 

[Torimiata]

Yes it is not. Exhibitionism is a form of sharing you are sharing intimate acts with others and from my choices and how game was progressing I figured that is as far as it would go not physical sharing. That their was no option to even attempt to stop it showed game is not for me as basically game gives you no choices all decisions throughout the entire game had no meaning or purpose and it's that type of game that is not for me.

This is not a VN as in VN the choices mean something and affect the ending but this does not your going to end up in physical sharing because it is not a true VN. This just makes it actually a Kinetic Novel not a VN. A true VN would have a path for Swinging aka Sharing, Netorase, or just exhibitionism. I'm into the latter but when that key moment came about I realized what the game led to believe is a lie and it's not a Visual Novel as your choices don't mean anything and it's going to be Swinging no matter what you do.

The game is not about having infinite branching paths (development would be insane). There's a main story with two routes to explore different preferences and character arcs but both fall 100% into the NTS genre.

At the end of the day, the game can't be all things to all people. If the exhibitionism-only lane is your thing then this game is definitely not for you. I appreciate you giving it a go and maybe something in the future fits better!

 

[Poa963]

Mesmo que as pessoas joguem e vejam os comentários do Tori, elas ainda acham que o jogo irá de Nts para Ntr

 

[WhiteFireDaemon]

The game is not about having infinite branching paths (development would be insane). There's a main story with two routes to explore different preferences and character arcs but both fall 100% into the NTS genre.

At the end of the day, the game can't be all things to all people. If the exhibitionism-only lane is your thing then this game is definitely not for you. I appreciate you giving it a go and maybe something in the future fits better!

Wouldn't there technically be three routes? Pretty sure there was a path that just kinda led to a short vanilla ending right at the beginning with the right choices.

 

[Pr0GamerJohnny]

The game is not about having infinite branching paths (development would be insane). There's a main story with two routes to explore different preferences and character arcs but both fall 100% into the NTS genre.

At the end of the day, the game can't be all things to all people. If the exhibitionism-only lane is your thing then this game is definitely not for you. I appreciate you giving it a go and maybe something in the future fits better!

Routes are prolezzy vs anti? Or more inclusion of 3rd girl or what?

 

[kristo0086]

Routes are prolezzy vs anti? Or more inclusion of 3rd girl or what?

Dude, play the game.

 

[Syndevic]

In the three paths, whatever MC does, he will be cuckold, a fact, if you make your girlfriend fucked by another, consent or not, gentlemen, you are cuckold, so three paths, semi faithful, sharing, and theft or loss of the girl. well, nothing new.

If english is not your first language, I apologize; if not, you are using commas way too much/incorrectly. They are to be used for separating items in a list, i.e. "Julie loves ice cream, books, and kittens." Additionally, commas are used after introductory clauses and phrases, between independent clauses, and to set apart nonessential elements. I don't mean to be the grammar police, but that many commas is just as irritating as the people who Capitalize Every First Letter In Their Sentences For No Reason.

As far as the game goes, the thing I'm most upset about is that we probably won't get the next update until July. (If 0.6.x follows current trends.) I hope more stuff happens with Terrace, and I hope we get more exhibitionism/skippier bikinis.
Great update/game Tori! I can't wait to see what's next!

 

[Pr0GamerJohnny]

Dude, play the game.

I've played it, both versions this and past - that was a perfectly reasonable question as to how dev is demarcating the routes as right now there are no significant branching forks. Thus I ask- what are the routes split? Pro lesbian swinger vs not? Pro humiliation vs not? Pro foursome swinger vs 3some voyeur?

 

[WhiteFireDaemon]

I've played it, both versions this and past - that was a perfectly reasonable question as to how dev is demarcating the routes as right now there are no significant branching forks. Thus I ask- what are the routes split? Pro lesbian swinger vs not? Pro humiliation vs not? Pro foursome swinger vs 3some voyeur?

First off, you could just play the game and find out for yourself. The two routes though are tease queen and submissive pet. Both routes have some shared lesbian content and it's still early in the story, so not a lot has really happened yet. There's plenty of promise but keep in mind that it's a slow burn story. Too soon to really know how or where it's going to end up going at this point. Also, I'd recommend being a little more clear next time. No idea what you meant by "inclusion of 3rd girl"

 

[Lolikanion]

right now there are no significant branching forks.

The reason why there are no significant branching right now, is because the routes were introduced this update.
You can pick route where Ayumi will act in more teasing way or a route where she will be more submissive.
Also there are changes in the routes.
The dialogue changes, and scene changes.
In the teasing route, she is dancing by herself, trying to tease MC with her dancing and in the submissive route she is dancing with Ari and getting groped by her.

 

[Pr0GamerJohnny]

The reason why there are no significant branching right now, is because the routes were introduced this update.
You can pick route where Ayumi will act in more teasing way or a route where she will be more submissive.
Also there are changes in the routes.
The dialogue changes, and scene changes.
In the teasing route, she is dancing by herself tries to show off and in the submissive route she is dancing with Ari and getting groped by her.

Hey I'm not criticizing - this is exactly what I was asking for what constituted the different paths - dunno why everyone's getting all up on me - I've played it multiple times; I don't remember choice forks being clearly noted as "Teasing" or "submissive" etc - hence the earlier question. People are talking to me like I'm one of these wafflers endlessly debating over if it has content I like before even touching it, again, played it several times; was simply about how people characterize the intended paths in future.

 

[baka]

my understanding of the two choices:

• Tease Queen
• Submissive Pet

is how Ayumi will behave. while the Mc will still be him.
this because in the Tease Queen, the Mc is encouraging Ayumi to do more.
he is not changing into a sub, even if he is quite passive already.
I also don't think that the Submissive Pet will create a dominant Mc (even if I like that idea)
as it seems its just Ayumi that is submissive, as that can be noticed in the maze.

my conclusion is that it will not change the Mc. but I can be wrong, or it can be both,
its all what Tori wants here. to predict anything is difficult. and also I like to be suprised.

 

[Lolikanion]

I've played it multiple times; I don't remember choice forks being clearly noted as "Teasing" or "submissive" etc

Hey I have nothing againts you, I was just trying to clarify that there are indeed routes that will make the story different.
Also are you sure you played 5.2?
Because when the routes are first introduced it clearly states what each route entails.

 

[Pr0GamerJohnny]

Hey I have nothing againts you, I was just trying to clarify that there are indeed routes that will make the story different.
Also are you sure you played 5.2?
Because when the routes are first introduced it clearly states what each route entails.

Fair, appreciate it - ill have to check my version.

 

[Reymold14]

Great game with great story. Decided to checkout the games tagged with ai cg and I'm glad I did. Shame the gens look like basic waifu diffusion, but I will deal with it because the game gets me. Guess the ai gens on pixiv have spoiled me.