RPGM Abandoned Bart the Tempter [v0.011] [GameBox]

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Jetfire616

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Mar 14, 2018
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art's good, story has potential but the english is just terrible. 10 minutes in i couldn't take it anymore
 

NODOGAN

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Dec 11, 2017
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fingers crossed for the art to remain good/animation of the porn scenes!
 

Dustellar

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Aug 22, 2016
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Really interesting story... and it's still incest because you will fuck Bart family using his body so... I will play it! now I wonder if Bart will escape and fuck Bob's wife xD
 

Zer0z

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Jun 29, 2017
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looks interesting but I doubt there's much content so I'll wait for a couple more releases
 

FutaBox

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art's good, story has potential but the english is just terrible. 10 minutes in i couldn't take it anymore
If you're a native speaker, you can support the project and tell us where we have mistakes, and we'll fix it. Otherwise, it sounds like "I don't like it because I don't like it".
 
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FutaBox

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Oct 23, 2017
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Really interesting story... and it's still incest because you will fuck Bart family using his body so... I will play it! now I wonder if Bart will escape and fuck Bob's wife XD
Technically, it's not incest because Bob uses Bart's skin, not his body ;)
 

BitterFrost

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If you're a native speaker, you can support the project and tell us where we have mistakes, and we'll fix it. Otherwise, it sounds like "I don't like it because I don't like it".
I don't think people who want to play a game should be required to translate it themselves first. The report "the English is so bad it's almost not understandable" is really enough and now it's up to the creators of the game to find better translation. For instance, see if anyone wants to be helpful. Or go find a translator that can do a better job.

It doesn't at all sound like "I don't like it because I don't like it" to say that the English is lacking quality.

In my case, I don't like it because I don't like it, cartoon sex isn't sexy to me, not when done in the style of the Simpsons or kids cartoons. But, I have to say, the art looks very good for what it is. It just doesn't appeal to me personally. That is "I don't like it because I don't like it". :p
 

FutaBox

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Oct 23, 2017
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I don't think people who want to play a game should be required to translate it themselves first. The report "the English is so bad it's almost not understandable" is really enough and now it's up to the creators of the game to find better translation. For instance, see if anyone wants to be helpful. Or go find a translator that can do a better job.

It doesn't at all sound like "I don't like it because I don't like it" to say that the English is lacking quality.

In my case, I don't like it because I don't like it, cartoon sex isn't sexy to me, not when done in the style of the Simpsons or kids cartoons. But, I have to say, the art looks very good for what it is. It just doesn't appeal to me personally. That is "I don't like it because I don't like it". :p
I beg to differ with you.
I'll try to explain why.
Game development is my hobby, so if this was the only job I did and didn't go to my main work, I'd obviously die of hunger.
This game is completely free. This means, if people want to see its development or they just want improvement (in graphics, English, or any other thing) right now and propose to hire additional people for such work, they should support the project (financial assistance is not mandatory), otherwise I won't be able to do what these people want from me.
Of course, I practice my English in my free time, but since I don't have much time, this process is moving not very fast.

Other than that, I'm open to criticism, and if there's something I can change, I'll be happy to do it. :p
 

Ruffy2010

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@FutaBox
Do not worry! Most do not even know how much work is involved in such a game! You say yourself that you do it in your free time and it's a hobby for you and it's free, so people should not have such high expectations. The English is not perfect, but it is enough to understand it! I just hope that you do not let it pull you down and the game aborts! Do you have an appointment for the next update?
 

FutaBox

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Oct 23, 2017
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@FutaBox
Do not worry! Most do not even know how much work is involved in such a game! You say yourself that you do it in your free time and it's a hobby for you and it's free, so people should not have such high expectations. The English is not perfect, but it is enough to understand it! I just hope that you do not let it pull you down and the game aborts! Do you have an appointment for the next update?
Thank you for the kind words.
When I'm done with the update for my main project, I'll start making next update for this game.
 

Amedore

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Jul 6, 2018
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I have reached the level of "max level of relationship" with Marge, Maggie and the maid. That's two scenes each. There is something more to do in the game after that?
 

goatwhisperer3

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Jul 22, 2017
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art looks good.
rpg maker is fine to me

will rise and fall with the genres/tags i guess. will have to wait to see more...
 

Morkar

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Aug 9, 2016
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Not bad for a 0.1 version

the art is very good and the game can be very interesting if it ends up adding other women of the simpson universe


and I'm looking forward to seeing Marge in the star wars slave bikini in some scene
 
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