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Saint Blackmoor

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I did a spelling and punctuation fix on the script.
This is the script and the chapters in one file.
This is just dialogue, no code.

Here are the spelling-corrected script and chapters with no punctuation corrected.
With code.
 
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Zemax

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Looks interesting
 

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I did a spelling and punctuation fix on the script.
This is the script and the chapters in one file.
This is just dialogue, no code.

Here are the spelling-corrected script and chapters with no punctuation corrected.
With code.
You should try contacting the dev, I'm sure he appreciate it and make it official.
 
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Boehser Onkel

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I did a spelling and punctuation fix on the script.
This is the script and the chapters in one file.
This is just dialogue, no code.

Here are the spelling-corrected script and chapters with no punctuation corrected.
With code.
are you kidding me ...
:ROFLMAO: :ROFLMAO: :ROFLMAO: :ROFLMAO:
i am just done with proofreading this ....

a mess with their/there - your/you're

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Boehser Onkel

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my proofread version of the scripts

changed/altered some sentences to make more sense ; punctuation ; more colored names ; removed the lastnames on most parts
fixed the "sex1_nonvirgin" bug
extract attached file into the mainfolder - overwrite if asked


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changed gui - textoutlines ; quickmenu (added a codex button) ; textbox removed

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extract attached gui.zip into the mainfolder - overwrite if asked (make backup if needed)

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Dear Dev : Not bad, but you need a proofreader and you should get rid of that game over option at the start if you tell the Indian guy at the start to fuck off and let you sleep. Funny line about the pew-pews and all, but players don't like that "illusion of choice" shit.
That's not even an illusion of choice if it goes direct to game over. At least an illusion of having a choice strings you along for awhile until 'BOOM!', you got nuked! That's straight up a "Fuck you, bitch!" and a kick in the nuts. :ROFLMAO:
Nice... a little heads up on the land mine. (y) I'll give it a try for a look at the chocolate treat...:p Now that I don't have to worry about gettin' nuked. :devilish:
 

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Andromeda 0.5 Part 2 Release
Hello crew, the final part of 0.5 is finally out. I don't really have much to say this time. With this update we arrive at Starbase 40 and after a short layover next time we will be departing Terran space.

No Android release provided by me this time again, I am still issues with Ren'pys built in tool for building the Android apk file.

Changelog:
205 images
1 animation
~720 lines of Code (dialogue, etc.)
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Multiple people in the thread posting free proofreading / spelling and punctuation corrections, bug fixes and more?

and the dev doesn't even acknowledge the free help? Not even a thankyou?

Sad....
 
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yeah , but i think this one here suffers from a very bad translator .. and a bit lazyness :ROFLMAO: :ROFLMAO: :ROFLMAO:
Don't think it's lazy translation, but Dictating Speech to text, otherwise i don't thing that translation would write "Their" instead of they're.
I do find it annoying, but not as much as translation errors like 'fixing' instead of 'going to' oh i hate that one;
And no I'm not a native English or even bloody american speaker
 
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