VN Ren'Py Abandoned My First Teacher [v0.04.03] [MrEvo Games]

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Uzhirian

Uzhirian

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The writing (and the use of the English language) is awful but the renders are pretty good.
This version is really short and has almost no content.
While some proof-reading/editing it could have potential
 
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Goblin Baily: DILF

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ThunderRob said:
d/l..install..play..delete..."shakes his head at yet another copy/paste of every other frikkin lazyass bad engrish impossible scenario games" to all my follower(HAHAHAAAA..singular) avoid!
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maybe it's singular because there's only 1 follower with multiple accounts?
 
goatwhisperer3

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Funny how u can tell by just reading the description of a game that the writing will be bad.

The teacher looks hot, so against better knowing I will give it a try eventually. Not today tho.

Hardest part will probably be to write believable dialogs for the girl. Teachers usually have some personality since its needed for the job. Devs have a hard time creating those in general without diving head first into the realm of porn stereotypes.
 
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Chris1878

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botc76 said:
Okay.... I'm sorry to say this, but this one sucks.
1. It's stupidly sexist. The MC never really feels comfortable with a woman driving a car and it is such an uncommon occurrence for him, that he stares at his teacher due to it, while she drives.
2. The motivations and explanations are excessively moronic. Seldom have I read such cheaply and thinly veiled premises for a porn game, and that's saying something.
3. This is another Engrish game. If you want this to succeed, get a translator and an editor or someone who knows how to write something people would want to read.

Sorry if this appears too harsh, but I'm really sick of these cheap cash-in attempts. A game needs a story, a game needs at least understandable writing, halfway decent renders aren't enough to make a good game, not even an acceptable game.
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Couldn't agree more, I would let the poor English slide if there was a decent or even okay premise to it. It's a shame because the renders are nice too.
 
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dutchpete

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Looking promising so I am positive about the future development of this game. However Minigames really piss me of and would stop me from looking into it further.
 
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xenon345

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botc76 said:
Okay.... I'm sorry to say this, but this one sucks.
1. It's stupidly sexist. The MC never really feels comfortable with a woman driving a car and it is such an uncommon occurrence for him, that he stares at his teacher due to it, while she drives.
2. The motivations and explanations are excessively moronic. Seldom have I read such cheaply and thinly veiled premises for a porn game, and that's saying something.
3. This is another Engrish game. If you want this to succeed, get a translator and an editor or someone who knows how to write something people would want to read.

Sorry if this appears too harsh, but I'm really sick of these cheap cash-in attempts. A game needs a story, a game needs at least understandable writing, halfway decent renders aren't enough to make a good game, not even an acceptable game.
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Yes, I have to agree. I installed the game and read to the point where MC thinks that "he feels uncomfortable when a woman drives a car". I facepalmed and uninstalled the game.
 
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