VN Ren'Py College Love Triangles [v0.2] [Lord Percy Games]

[Lord Bradley]

Yeah I am gonna like this game. I like the dynamic between characters and story is down to earth and nothing ridicilous yet so that's great. As someone on the kinkier side I too hope female characters will have options to have a lot of fun, it is college after all.. But that's not to say I don't want MC or other good fellas to have fun as well. May all consenting parties have lots of fun and freedom in decisions!

Couple things I wanna mention about quality of life.

1) Please sepparate character names with different colors! It would really help dialogue immersion as sometimes you gotta think extra to understand which one said what especially if it happens you named characters with similar sounding names (or even just similar length name). If you want you can even go next level and have all male names be in COLD colors, and female names in HOT colors. That would be mint!
2) When characters are kissing there are '(kiss)' appearing a lot which is horrible to read and really breaks the immersion. If you want to represent kissing with more than just a render you could simply start each sentence with *kissing* , but if the desired effect is "interrupted" speech because of the kissing you could start the sentence with *muffled* ! I think this would be much more pleasant for reading and have same effect on the readers immersion/imagination.

These are just my opinions! Wish good luck to the development process and will keep an eye out for further updates, also thank you to people supporting this project!

 

[Fapbert]

Downloaded, haven't played yet. Just from reading the comments, I think I might love this game. My sweet spot is Cheating bf/husband doesn't know, or Cheating bf/husband knows but she doesn't know he knows. But I like all the other genres as well.

 

[GetOutOfMyLab]

It's a shame.
Luna is my favourite character. I totally wanted her to cuck me.
I still really like the game though.

Ew, Joshy.... she's your flatmate for fuck's sake!

 

[Joshy92]

Ew, Joshy.... she's your flatmate for fuck's sake!

Exactly. That makes the cucking even hotter.

And this might shock you dude.
But I would let any of these hotties cuck me.

 

[GetOutOfMyLab]

Exactly. That makes the cucking even hotter.

And this might shock you dude.
But I would let any of these hotties cuck me.

I never would have guessed...

 

[Lord Bradley]

My sweet spot is Cheating bf/husband doesn't know, or Cheating bf/husband knows but she doesn't know he knows.

Great taste! As long as there is a real relationship not just "crush" and the boyfriend/husband is not a prick who basically forces the partner to cheat. I like it when women do so either as a form of masturbation when their partner is not in immediate reach or as a means to get something (promotion in work, helping to solve a problem boyfriend/husband might have, getting a discount to a purchase etc.). Ideally they don't feel bad about it and take it in stride

 

[Lord Percy]

Thanks guys for all the advice and support! I'm currently celebrating the launch with Luna (the real life person who the character is based off of, aka my actual best friend) and Sara (Luna's roommate who she doesn't want to introduce Adam to, aka the real life person who the future character is based off of, aka my wife).

 

[Joshy92]

Any dude who gets to bang Morgan is a lucky bastard.
I think she might be girlfriend material.

 

[GetOutOfMyLab]

I think she might be girlfriend material.

You're only saying that because her content thus far is providing you with the potential for the ultimate cuck experience.

 

[Joshy92]

You're only saying that because her content thus far is providing you with the potential for the ultimate cuck experience.

That's why she is girlfriend material bro.
I would have even held her hand while she Kissed Jason.
You know that would have been romantic.

And If I was the mc I would tell her she can have two boyfriends.

 

[GetOutOfMyLab]

That's why she is girlfriend material bro.
I would have even held her hand while she Kissed Jason.
You know that would have been romantic.

And If I was the mc I would tell her she can have two boyfriends.

Of course you would... you probably want him to completely break her in before you get a chance with her, too. Right?

 

[Joshy92]

Of course you would... you probably want him to completely break her in before you get a chance with her, too. Right?

I never thought about that. But now that you mention it yes, I would like that.

Actually, I would love it.

 

[robrize2169]

i've tested it multiple times on windows, mac, and android and i can't seem to replicate any traceback errors. is anyone else having this issue? could you dm me the error message?

hm, i tried downloading from pixeldrain this morning and it looks to be working ok. it gave me an error when i tried to use my old save when i tried it last night. so perhaps i had an old DL link? anyway. looks like i get to play it fresh from the start today. time to get to it. thanks for your reply to my previous message.

 

[Gamesstar]

Hi Lord Percy, If you don't mind can you tell me how are you going to do the femdom scenes? Will there be a separate route with a character for that?

 

[Zamzung]

Damn good start and just the kind of thing I've been looking for. Can't wait to see more!

 

[quiboune]

Game needs an ipatch. Renaming all those relationships is a pain in the ass.

 

[Lord Percy]

Hi Lord Percy, If you don't mind can you tell me how are you going to do the femdom scenes? Will there be a separate route with a character for that?

The original plan was for that to be a path with Luna, but with the removal of anything incest and kinda changing her story around a little to better suit that, I haven't really decided if I'll keep it with Luna, or maybe work that into Kirsten's story. But it will most probably be with one of them. I only came to the decision to completely remove incest from this game a few days ago and all of my spreadsheets of plans still need to be updated.

 

[Pr0GamerJohnny]

Just a minor pedantic passing:

A tenant is a resident of a dwelling.

A tenet is a principle or belief.

A tennent is gibberish.

Aside, I'm sure i'm in the minority here, but I see the overall change in character structures as a blessing in disguise. The whole family thing lends itself to falling back on lazy tropes, and I'm hopeful the characters will have a lot more interesting interactions without that framework present.

 

[zandalari]

As someone who has never done anything on Patreon before and thus doesn't know how this shit works from the creator side...

Why are you telling them what you're doing? Remove all posts about the game from it and post random ass wallpapers as "rewards". You pretty much can't search for anything on there anyway so it doesn't matter. Your audience is here and on discord, where you can post links to your new releases and keep Patreon only as a payment platform where fans can support you. I simply cannot imagine how they will know unless you tell on yourself.

Is it a hassle? Maybe. Is it less than rewriting a large chunk of the game? You tell me.

 

[Frankbob]

Just a minor pedantic passing:

A tenant is a resident of a dwelling.

A tenet is a principle or belief.

A tennent is gibberish.

Aside, I'm sure i'm in the minority here, but I see the overall change in character structures as a blessing in disguise. The whole family thing lends itself to falling back on lazy tropes, and I'm hopeful the characters will have a lot more interesting interactions without that framework present.

They are only lazy tropes because they are always the same. In another game there was the hotest scene I think I have ever seen in a game and the only reason that was is because some dialogue was used that I'd really never seen before.

Wife asked her husband what he thought about his daughter's hot wet pussy. I wasn't ready for that lol.

I'm pretty sure you know the carwash scene in Her Desire.