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Niahrleak

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Thinking and Narrating are 2 different things, the mix of it makes the VN weird to read, also too much repetition of ideas.
The main character, dude got found out minutes in the academy, didnt even read or learn before going there, then get told he is wrong, and without any proof he believes everything, i dont know the intro feels stupid.
The idea is cool though.
 

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Thinking and Narrating are 2 different things, the mix of it makes the VN weird to read, also too much repetition of ideas.
The main character, dude got found out minutes in the academy, didnt even read or learn before going there, then get told he is wrong, and without any proof he believes everything, i dont know the intro feels stupid.
The idea is cool though.
About thought and narration you are absolutely right. That is something that should be modified in the future, but since I have not seen many people complain about it, it is possible that it will stay that way.

This is a spoiler, I think, but I'll tell you anyway. It's not that he believes everything, it's that they are vampires, they can play with your mind as much as they want. Leading you to do stupid things or things that you simply would not do in another context... Among them, believing anything
 

FatGiant

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Some words...

I started to play with some misgivings because of the images. I wasn't really expecting much, but, decided to try. When I say because of the images, isn't that they are bad, but, somehow felt "empty".

Never mind, after I started playing the text and the story is so well written that I was caught in it. I only explored one side of the story yet, it kinda feels like I need to explore the other side too, because the side I played only has one character.

Anyway, I liked it.

Peace :)
 
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DrakoGhoul

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I don't know how I missed this for so long but it looks like it's time to correct this mistake of mine. I love vampires so I'll definitely be trying this out. From glancing at the overview, tags, and preview pictures, it looks pretty good.
 
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tortorus

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For me for now it s average at most. but it s really too short to make a an opinion yet.

Not enought caracter, 2 vamp, two hunter... and rushed, a little talk and they jump on you. not enought of render too, don t tell us show us the academy.

A classic story and a rushed story, you could easy make the vampire academy more longer than that, i mean 1 day and he be discovered... not even attend a single class... not meet more teacher or studients... vampire can read mind so easily ? it s not tell in the vampire skill. build the start a lot more make us doubt if vampire are evil before come with the bad girl... that the point of your start, no ? There is also good one...

A really heavy writing, you repeat yourself way too much, yes we know the academy is huge, maybe a little more of description would be nice than wooo it s huge 4 times... same with the mc feeling, same with the nice vamp girl. say it one time is enought to understand you know...

the sex scene are average, 2s loop one pose, the classic. no teasing, no building, just lets go sex because it s porn game.

Your game is really young and have a looot to improve, but i like the idea. There are not enought of good revenge story.
i wish you good luck M dev.
 
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johnmnf692

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This is a cool game with a ton of potential. The amount of branching paths that are, thus far, completely different from one another is something that you don't see very often.

Just out of curiosity, I'm wondering whether Dakaria, Izalith, Bastia, and Nadia are virgins. There are signs for all 4 of them that point towards them being virgins, but as far as I could tell there's no confirmation like there is for Stella and Emma.
 
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Azsouth

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to many different paths, but at the same time if you only go down one the game is very short. I'd suggest condensing the game down to the factions so you can develop the story more instead of having to write a bunch of different paths for every update.
 

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Welcome to Vaniar [v0.4] Unofficial Android Port

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Is there female version for people that don't like gay content ?

Will have harem ?
Ty
It is in my plans to make a female option for the futanari characters, I will probably consider it in the next update

About the harem, yes, there will be a lot of harem in this game. In the next update the first harem route of the game will begin
 
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In Stella's route, make the decision to search for your sister and then choose the Asmodea path.
 

lierbex

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Impressive Spanish adaptation, Young people from the age of 3 in Latin America and spain already speak spanish. feels like a Native <3
i can´t waiting updates follow from now on.
 
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FatGiant

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Impressive Spanish adaptation, Young people from the age of 3 in Latin America and spain already speak spanish. feels like a Native <3
i can´t waiting updates follow from now on.
I think that it is the English that is the adaptation. Some turns of phrase, while rare, made me think so. Also, the fact that out-of-the-box the language selected is Spanish Latam.

But, I may be wrong.

Peace :)
 
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I think that it is the English that is the adaptation. Some turns of phrase, while rare, made me think so. Also, the fact that out-of-the-box the language selected is Spanish Latam.

But, I may be wrong.

Peace :)
Exactly, that's right. The thing that costs me the most about the game, more than anything else, is translating it into English hahaha
 
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