Ren'Py - University Days [S1: Ep. 6 P2] [GREEBO]

renders are good
characters look good (but...)
mc doesnt look amazing and acts like stupid 17yr
story is 2.5/10
mc fucks everyone (and i think u cant avoid it)
the rest is neutral

overall for me its mid tier not shit but not really good either

review based on : University Days [S1: Ep. 6 P2]

Not recommended anymore. What happened to be a top game turned into a bad one.
Thankfully i waited until now to review this game, as i would have to redo after this update.
With this update, the dev decided to leave the story driven VN mode, and turned it into a freeroam desaster, which leaves player standing there, searching for the next clue or trigger.
This game suddenly lost all it's immersion and all that, what made it a decent game.

Art: A variety of models and good art
Animation: Some basic animation, but keeping it simple means they look more realistic
Story: So much to do and expand on, looking forward to future developments
I wasn't sure going into this game but it really grabbed me. Lots of plot and storylines to investigate. New characters keep popping up. I hope the creator is able to keep all the characters story's going. The story is not unique, but it is written well and the dialogue is fun to read.
I look forward to future updates.

This is only getting 2 stars instead of 1 because the dev did put time into this game and the renders aren't horrible and it has animations.

If you play these games for the porn you may like this if you can get past the negatives. I haven't disliked a game this much in a long time. Only reason I didn't drop was because it was bad enough I was curious what was going to happen next

Positives
nothing

Negative s

• MC is a perv
• Mc gets mad at his father for cheating on his mother yet the MC is cheating on his GF the entire game.
• His father is cheating on his mother with his aunt and helping her make content for only fans. What is the MC's solution to convince the aunt to cut his father out and have the MC be the one to take pictures and make the content with her
• Ivy offers the MC a deal for sex which means cheating on his GF and we get no say in the matter
• Every lewd scene is forced, the only choices that appear dont even matter
• Forced peeking on the girls

English:............7/10
User Interface:.....3/10
User Experience:....7/10
Art:................7/10
Dialogue:...........5/10
Story:..............2/10
Opinion:............2/10................
Avg:..............4.71/10 [2.35/5]

Edit: EVERY time I get a notification someone liked this review my only thought is "What game is that?" Hopefully that illustrates the impact of this game.

Anyone who's been on this site should know, a 'game' based around MC going to college is going to be the most boring, unoriginal, formulaic slop. Anyone who says otherwise must have rose tinted glasses about the four girls that talked to them in college. No matter what, I'm not holding my breath that this will do anything original. Hell, the UI is stock outside a font and they changed the thumb for the volume sliders. Working real hard on UI/UX I see. And you don't even need to start the game to see what you're in for in terms of renders. The girl in the main menu has stiff, floaty hair that clips through her skull. It immediately feels like "We just wanted to push out something to entice patreon members." If you even try to say otherwise, the literal first scene is a sex scene. Meaning there will be no substance in this. And most character intros are either the character being naked, under dressed, deep cleavage, or bearing their cervix for all to see. I'm not one of those idiots that slut shame a bundle of pixels for liking sex, I just find it lazy and boring to write women this way.

I'm not 5 minutes into the story, and MC woke up, had sex, went to class, fell asleep right away, and you're given dream sex. MC's already bored, what does that make me? So add "dumb useless dream sex" to your shovelware bingo cards if you got em. And he's thrown out of class immediately because he doesn't have full control over his body as if he's a toddler. Why are so many MC's unable to control when they say something, or how much they ogle someone? And it's not like he mumbled something stupid, he just shouted it across class. You know what that's called? A functional or mental disability. So congrats, MC is mentally challenged. They also go RIGHT to another sex scene in a bathroom they somehow can't smell or see cigarette smoke in. So add little to no situational awareness to their characters. Welcome in the phone that has barely legible text. And MC continuing to be an actual dodo when Ivy propositions him for sex. If you need a masterclass in writing terrible characters, look no further than this. And Zoe, the sister type that all you know about her got mad, rightfully so, at mc for having sex and peeping on the mom type? She suddenly says "Yeah let's play dress-up with this girl you haven't seen in 10 years, us, the adults, play dress up." Real consistent. Gabriella also has this empty, stoned look on her glassy, lazy eyes which do not do her any favors. And nothing but dumb sex contrivances happen through the rest of the story. MC LITERALLY walks room to room and women throw their vaginas at him for no reason. "Because he was there" is the best explanation I can think of. He's pretty much just a doorstop.

Luna pushes sex with others onto MC, if only she knew he was an asshole already. He blackmails his aunt-type to do what the scummy stepdad(?) was doing already. The principal is using him for sex? I guess? And Ivy is using the actual dumbest person in the school to get better grades. My god. Gabriella shows up, MC has literally no memory of her, but then both of them act like they've never lost contact? Does no one read the things they type out after it's saved? Every girl bends over backwards for this wet blanket of a human being that is MC. The only saving grace of this was it's pretty short, I was worried it'd drag on, but no. MC is... Rewarded with sex from Luna for everything he does for her? What has this troglodyte done for her? Cheat on her? Get stale in the bedroom? Lie? I've yet to see one good thing MC has done the entire story. But it ends right there, at current End Of Content(0.5). It's not even funny bad, just boring.

The English would be good if there weren't weird phrases like "She's just a trouble causer" Because, sure, an English speaking human has totally said that before. The UI/UX is stock like I said, so no effort there. The art is... Fine. Rose has milky bloodshot eyes, Gabriella looks stoned and brain-dead, Ivy's piercing disappear, and none of the nipple look real, more drawn on. The animations are okay, not the usual slow motion back and forth but still just a single loop that doesn't do anything special. The Dialogue is fine, it's inoffensive if not a little stupid. The story doesn't exist. I was expecting too much when I thought there'd be a story of any kind, and that's my fault, I guess. If they could somehow turn it around to campy porn stories, I guess it would be fun bad? But as it stands, there's nothing here but porn animations. Just make those, don't waste our time on fluff text that makes me sad I read it. If you just need a wank, I guess this is for you, but I don't need to come back to this, ever.

Cant say i enjoyed this one, im just tierd of pure mindless fuckfest games, you might as well just go visit a porn site would be faster and easiere, this one seems to pretty close to a full kinetic novel, you have no controle over who you fuck and theres absolutly no relationship build-up which makes just another pointless porngame where all the girls feel like whores that are more then happy to jump on MCs dick no matter how much of an idiot he is.

Also not a fan of not having a choice to allow MCs girlfriend to have sex with another girl, MC feels more like a submissive slave just fucking everyone and even letting another girl fuck hes GF, and without choices you cant choose to be faithfull either since MC jumps on any whore he sees.

I do with devs would learn how to tag games right, theres a reason i dont play kinetic, i just hate forced shit and not having a choice so i never play them, it would only help dev as well since game wouldent get bad reviews if people know what to expect and the players wont waste time playing something they know they wont like.

I did like some of the girls but hated others which makes only makes game a turn-off.

Animations are ok but nothing special.

Music is decent.

Low effort VN with a bunch of sluts, no real choices including all the things you might want to avoid. Blackmail, femdom lite, cam whores, your gf fucking with other girls, cheating on your gf all forced. MC is a puppet.

If you want a decent story or decent sex scenes or even some relationship building look elsewhere. A few of the models are good but thats the only good point I can make and to be honest its pretty standard with modern hardware. The rest is low grade, low effort, boring and forced with a loser mc.

If the dev actually decides to go back and make things avoidable like he/she is saying then I would be avoiding almost every situation and girl in the game. So far there is only 1 or 2 girls that are not just trashy ho's doing whatever they please while mc just gets dragged through it.

I wont even come back to this one to see if it improves because it would need an entire rewrite and new path's added where there should be actual choices. The only choice you get change nothing of the story or mc only if you want to peep at somebody or imagine them less than fully clothed, while blackmail, femdom or even the girls are not optional at all. This is a KN in reality every choice is unimportant and the story goes on single track and its painful.

Review - S1 EP 5

The renders and models are ok, but that is also where the positives end for me.

• The MC looks and acts like a 14-15y old idiot. He is also a spineless wimp, which gets pushed arround by everyone and their dog...and of course for some reason every girl wants to jump his dick.
• The characters are flat, there isn't really anything likable about any of them, imo.
• The story is basic to say at least. The blackmail is dumb, same for the MC to go along with it, be it the principal or some annoying girl in the bathroom...
• The choices are, from what i can tell, completely meaningless and make no difference.
• You have no choice which girl you want to pursue/fuck/''romance'', they are all forced. Same obvious for the cheating on the gf, which the MC doesn't seem to give a single fuck about. What's even the point for giving him a girlfriend...
• Should be labeled as a kinetic novel.

The game has decent graphics but considering the plethora of games similar to this and the fact that this game should be choice-driven then it is rather poor that there is so little actual choice that the game offers. You just boink everything that is visualised and there is no actual choice to make or story to see.

The game is fun to pass time, but that's it. The characters have no personality (except maybe the cheerleader). And the story makes zero sense. I mean, one thing is to be "blackmailed" by a classmate to do their homework but the principal? Also, they don't even remember what is going on during the game. For example, you talk with Gabriella and tell her that Zoe want to reminisce past times by playing dressing up, and days after when Zoe actually talks to her is like they forgot everything.

Pro’s

• The renders are good, with some attractive models.
• Animations aren’t bad.

Neutral

• English is ok. But not really much story
• It’s a fuckfest…mc fucks everyone. Guess this depends if you’re into that or not.

Cons

• MC looks and acts like a dumb 16 year old in college.
• You have no agency as the MC. Pretty much a kinetic novel but not tagged as such
• You cannot avoid fucking anyone that I’m aware of.
• 3 or 4 scenes are behind a paywall and unfortunately it looks like episode 4 ends with a major scene behind a paywall.

This falls right around a 2.5 but more negative than positive imo so giving it a 2.

I passed on this game partially because of the low score until now. It was a mistake on my part.

The game has hot renders, varied love interests that don't all look like they're from some other game. The game is sometimes rather direct to get to fucking, but it does not feel like some other games where it makes the scenes feel meaningless. It's more like everyone's just really horny. I think this game could be rated either 4/5 or 5/5, but I'll go with 5 because this game doesn't deserve it's current rating.

It could have some improvements in terms of bit more foreplay and original setup with a couple characters and music sometimes didn't match the scene super well.

The femdom is really mild in version 0.3.2 at least. It's essentially two women with fearsome reputations that play some games with you to get your help and your dick. In one of those interactions it seems like the player is able to shift the power dynamics to his favor already or at least contest them.

There doesn't really seem to be any dislikeable LIs for me in the game despite a wide cast which is a good sign. Hope the dev manages to explore all the characters.

I really enjoyed the game thus far. The story and people are well written and you are invested on the MC journal. Hopefully the game visual can be improve upon on the next update. I will keep my eyes on this game.

The renders are nice and the music is decent, but that's about it. This is just another fuckfest game with an MC that's so big of a loser that he gets bullied by girls and pushed around by teachers but somehow all the girls want his dick for absolutely no reason.

I was looking for games with male domination, but let me assure you, there's no domination here and if there is, it's definitely the girls who are dominating. He gets blackmailed into sex by his classmate and then gets forced into doing whatever one of the teachers want. And oh god, the choices. What do you think the choices are? It's about whether or not you perv on your family members or random people. You don't get to decide if you want to become a slave for sexual favours, cheat on your girlfriend or do anything. It's all decided for you. Might as well drop all pretences and call this a kinetic novel.

In this wide community, there are people who hate and love different types of sexual situations or perversions and fetishes, each one is free to choose their tastes. This novel is for those who like to have a beautiful, adorable and affectionate girlfriend and who, despite everything, enjoy the charm of enjoying other women. Personally, in the freedom that dreaming and imagining in a novel gives you, it seems like a good genre to me. Perhaps if there are two aspects that if they improve it could be an even better novel, the first is the kid's face that MC has and the second is the lack of freedom to choose different situations, in many aspects it is almost a kinetic novel. But I applaud the artist, it's a good job and I look forward to the next episode.

What is the point of Luna being MC's GF? MC straight out cheats on her, without giving the player a choice. And speaking of choices, there are basically none, the only choice you have is whether or not MC should imagine a girl in her underwear. Give the game the label "Kinetic Novel", because that's what it is. You can already tell that this game is going to be a completely fuckfest in the future.

The game really doesnt offer much now to like. There are many big flaws, and i believe the dev should correct them otherwise the game will remain mediocre.

- Remove the gf. Thats so unnecessary. She has absolutely no reason to be there. If dev is planning to make this a harem style game, just remove the gf.
The MC left and right cheats on her, fantasizes about every female. What's the need of the gf? dont understand whose fetish is that.

- Might as well label this a kinetic novel. There are absolutely no choices in the game and I just spent 20 minutes clicking.

in the current state, i would have given 1 star, but increased one to at least honor the effort of the dev. As it is still beta, i urge the dev to correct these mistakes and maybe then the game will be better.

It took me awhile to figure out just how I wanted to start this review. I figured I'd start with some of the positives like the grammar isn't bad, but when you're reaching that far down for praise, you know that this game really isn't that good, while at the same time, I couldn't just give it one star and say it was terrible because that's not entirely true. At the end of the day, this is a below average game that will undoubtedly piss some players off for a variety of reasons. What did it for me?

Well, one thing in these games I hate is starting with a girlfriend if there is going to be multiple LIs (but no harem path), because if you don't like the gf, you have to be a bastard and either break her poor heart or cheat on her. In this one, I am not especially attracted to the gf (what can I say? I think nose rings are ugly), so I want to dump her, yet we're railroaded into being lovey-dovey with her at the start and she's the first sex scene that you can't even turn down... That kind of thing annoys the hell out of me, because I want to break up with her quickly, not be forced to remind myself just how big a bastard I am for this decision.

The models are on the whole, unspectacular, although I do like the two blondes. Everyone else is kind of meh or even downright weird looking. MC looks like he's prepubescent as well (this MC certainly has appeared in other works before and I just don't get what devs see in this guy to keep using it). Of course the boyfriend of the mother is another one that pops up sometimes as well, even though the guy is basically a Cro-Magnon or something dressed in modern clothing. I don't know why devs use these particular DAZ renders over and over again. Are they free? I wish they would stop.

The current length is pretty short, but it didn't really take that long for me to realize that this was a fairly mediocre title swimming in a sea of mediocre titles. It's bland and forgettable. I guess if you can fap to it, fine, but there are better stories with better art around here.

Review for Demo

Nice college game without any loops or tomfoolery to keep the player off track. Seems fairly straightforward, story is nice, characters look and seem nice. Quite cheerful too. Does need some work as it is fairly short.

Pros
-Good characters
-Good story
-Interesting premise

Cons
-Is short
-Lack of choices
-Some odd clipping here and there

Game has lots of potential. I hope creator improves as it goes on. Will keep an eye out for this.

It's decent so far. Very straightforward, cozy game that has a lot of happy sex. Girls are cute enough, and the dialogue is fine. Nothing special, but nothing's really bad about it either.

Thanks for putting out this demo Greebo, I wanted to play something cute like this.

Edit: Oh, and also I posted a bunch of pictures with dialogue on page 10 of the forum so you can see what the new renders look like, as well as get a feel for the dialogue.

Edit:

v 0.2 update for 5/23/23

Anyways, as for my thoughts on this update, they're pretty much the same. It's decent, fun experience with pretty good art.

Oh, and the girls are really cute, and I like how the MC is short and decent looking, and he doesn't have an oversized dick.

Fake edit: Actually, you know what, this needs to be said, if I have the choice of incest, or no incest, I choose no incest, and this game does a really really good job with this. It doesn't just lazily relabel your mom and sister as landlady and roomate. You have no reason to think that they're your family. More of this please, game devs.

In fact, that is such a pleasant surrpise that I'm adding an extra star to my review, this now gets an arbitrary score of 4 out of 5! Thank you so much for this GREEBO!

There is one minor nitpick I wanna add though, although I won't let it affect my review score. I'm pretty sure that there's some stuff missing from your gallery, and possibly your replayable scenes. With the gallery at least, I kept getting notifications saying that they were added to the gallery, but I already had all of them unlocked, so I don't think there was anything new.

Keep up the goodness Greebo, I'd love to see an update like this every 1-3 months.