VN Ren'Py Completed Two Weeks [Ep. 6 Fixed] [Madek]

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dekmma

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Sep 18, 2017
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Viatovic said:
Well... I felt kind of disappointed after playing.
I mean, the mom and sister storylines are good, Mom is pure romance and that's cool...
The sister is a tricky one, has a lot of sibling rivalry, and it's cool too.
My main problem? The locker room shower scene made no sense.

Yeah, you want to show some skin, and you can't keep up with the peeking without the MC becoming a full-perv.
But using a character outta nowhere just to meet a quota?
It was well rendered, like all the game... but it adds absolutely nothing.

The good news... SHE REALLY DID A BASIC INSTINCT.
Keep the good work.
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Don't talk too fast, maybe she's more than a quota...

Thanks for the encouraging words guys.
 
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Viatovic

Viatovic

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dekmma said:
Don't talk too fast, maybe she's more than a quota...

Thanks for the encouraging words guys.
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I really hope that I'm wrong.
But you have to see it from our perspective.
There is zero info about her, zero pay-off... maybe just a little wink, or something that indicated that she's here to stay.

Either way, that was my only problem with the update.
I loved the rest, I'm a sucker for romance.
Keep it up.
 
Paprika

Paprika

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This looks to be a great game: mom and sis with great graphics...I'm in! I'm waiting for the mirrors to try it.
 
a1fox3

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Viatovic said:
Well... I felt kind of disappointed after playing.
I mean, the mom and sister storylines are good, Mom is pure romance and that's cool...
The sister is a tricky one, has a lot of sibling rivalry, and it's cool too.
My main problem? The locker room shower scene made no sense.

Yeah, you want to show some skin, and you can't keep up with the peeking without the MC becoming a full-perv.
But using a character outta nowhere just to meet a quota?
It was well rendered, like all the game... but it adds absolutely nothing.

The good news... SHE REALLY DID A BASIC INSTINCT.
Keep the good work.
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You don't have to view that scene in the locker room.

The sister is a lying manipulative bitch and I don't like spanking but she needs a good one.
 
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Radoslaw Wolf

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This game has a true potential. Fantastic art, the course of action makes sense. Worth spending a few bucks a month.
 
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SWLB

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Beautiful renders. Warm shades also give some coziness. ( '_')b
 
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myuhinny

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That was NOT a slap that was a punch so I changed slap and slapped out for punch and punched. In that scene when you get ready to leave the sister's room she says there there 2 times instead.

From what I have seen so far there is a lot of proof reading needing to be done as there are a lot of mistakes that I'm seeing. Like Stan: Did you made make friends at school?
 
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WLHopkins

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Jun 30, 2017
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I keep getting errors, especially at the mom watching movie scene. I have started completely new, no tweaks or cheats, but when I try to ignore the error, it makes the decision to keep going up mom's leg and get her upset. Here are the errors attached.
 
deoclitian

deoclitian

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Aug 5, 2017
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bug when shopping :
Code: 
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
  File "game/script.rpy", line 592, in <module>
NameError: name 'spy' is not defined

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
  File "game/script.rpyc", line 592, in script
  File "C:\Users\Danny\Desktop\Two_weeks-pc\renpy\ast.py", line 1681, in execute
    if renpy.python.py_eval(condition):
  File "C:\Users\Danny\Desktop\Two_weeks-pc\renpy\python.py", line 1794, in py_eval
    return py_eval_bytecode(code, globals, locals)
  File "C:\Users\Danny\Desktop\Two_weeks-pc\renpy\python.py", line 1788, in py_eval_bytecode
    return eval(bytecode, globals, locals)
  File "game/script.rpy", line 592, in <module>
NameError: name 'spy' is not defined

Windows-8-6.2.9200
Ren'Py 6.99.13.2919
bug when watching movie:
Code: 
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
  File "game/script.rpy", line 731, in <module>
NameError: name 'drunk_scene' is not defined

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
  File "game/script.rpyc", line 731, in script
  File "C:\Users\Danny\Desktop\Two_weeks-pc\renpy\ast.py", line 1681, in execute
    if renpy.python.py_eval(condition):
  File "C:\Users\Danny\Desktop\Two_weeks-pc\renpy\python.py", line 1794, in py_eval
    return py_eval_bytecode(code, globals, locals)
  File "C:\Users\Danny\Desktop\Two_weeks-pc\renpy\python.py", line 1788, in py_eval_bytecode
    return eval(bytecode, globals, locals)
  File "game/script.rpy", line 731, in <module>
NameError: name 'drunk_scene' is not defined

Windows-8-6.2.9200
Ren'Py 6.99.13.2919

 
Morpheus668

Morpheus668

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Jun 22, 2017
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seems im not the only one being greeted by a buggy mess...
WLHopkins said:
I keep getting errors, especially at the mom watching movie scene. I have started completely new, no tweaks or cheats, but when I try to ignore the error, it makes the decision to keep going up mom's leg and get her upset. Here are the errors attached.
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deoclitian said:
bug when shopping :
Code: 
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
  File "game/script.rpy", line 592, in <module>
NameError: name 'spy' is not defined

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
  File "game/script.rpyc", line 592, in script
  File "C:\Users\Danny\Desktop\Two_weeks-pc\renpy\ast.py", line 1681, in execute
    if renpy.python.py_eval(condition):
  File "C:\Users\Danny\Desktop\Two_weeks-pc\renpy\python.py", line 1794, in py_eval
    return py_eval_bytecode(code, globals, locals)
  File "C:\Users\Danny\Desktop\Two_weeks-pc\renpy\python.py", line 1788, in py_eval_bytecode
    return eval(bytecode, globals, locals)
  File "game/script.rpy", line 592, in <module>
NameError: name 'spy' is not defined

Windows-8-6.2.9200
Ren'Py 6.99.13.2919
bug when watching movie:
Code: 
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
  File "game/script.rpy", line 731, in <module>
NameError: name 'drunk_scene' is not defined

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
  File "game/script.rpyc", line 731, in script
  File "C:\Users\Danny\Desktop\Two_weeks-pc\renpy\ast.py", line 1681, in execute
    if renpy.python.py_eval(condition):
  File "C:\Users\Danny\Desktop\Two_weeks-pc\renpy\python.py", line 1794, in py_eval
    return py_eval_bytecode(code, globals, locals)
  File "C:\Users\Danny\Desktop\Two_weeks-pc\renpy\python.py", line 1788, in py_eval_bytecode
    return eval(bytecode, globals, locals)
  File "game/script.rpy", line 731, in <module>
NameError: name 'drunk_scene' is not defined

Windows-8-6.2.9200
Ren'Py 6.99.13.2919
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Herhes

Herhes

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Jan 25, 2018
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The game looks good, but it is a very early version. I hope there will be more history to enjoy more, thanks for the contribution and good luck.
 
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