VN - Ren'Py - The Sunset Fairies [v0.08] [Ethan Krautz]

Story 3/5
Well i did like some of the story, its about MC and hes 2 nieces that get forced to live on a island where MC has a house due to a zombie breakout.
Thats pretty much it, there are a few plots/twists since MC is an agent of some kind working for the goverment and they turn on him trying to kill hes ass to get to hes nieces which apprently are the cure for the infection that creates zombies.

It goes a bit to crazy for me personaly with the android girl and the virus shit, its not really something i care about in the game, also not really a fan of the android putting presure on the twins to do sexual things with MC its just idiotic and she should be shut down for doing stuff like that and it annoys me that MC just follows along with someone that are manipulating hes girls.

The biggest problem i got with this one is really the lack of choices, ive seen 2 maybe 3 in the game and thats it, not that they change much other then either getting a HJ or a Footjob.

Also im 99% sure everyone will be forced on you as the player, mother, granny, sister simply just everyone, which will ruin the game for quite a few who arent into milfs or grannys or big saggy tits and so on.

The story also took a weird turn going from fun to stupid, MC will take the twins with him so he can go save an aunt whos on the other side of the world at a time where there is not just zombies everywhere but also having the army coming after him....it just feels to stupid that he would risk the twins and him self at such a time.

Its is an incest story and got to say i love the twins and there are some quite funny scenes with MC and Camila but im not a fan of any of the other family members that MC will go after at some point.

Then theres MCs idiotically huge horse dick, considering the twins are loli he would break them in half if he ever fucks them, it would almost come out of their mouth its that big....it should be cut atleast in half to make it just a little bit more realistic but even that would be to big still.....and even so one of the twins can take the hole dick in a blowjob....its just to idiotic.


Girls 4/5
Well not much to say i like the twins and they are the main girl which are the reason i give high score for this since i dont really care one bit for the rest.

Animations 3/5
The animations arent the best which is to bad since renders are really nice, the virgin scene was well made when it comes to deflowering, BUT the sex part just ruins it when you see MCs dick half way into her stomach pushing her skin to the extrem from the inside, you almost expect it to break through its really really poorly made and shows again why its such a poor choice making MCs dick like a horse....

Music 3/5
I dont know about the music, most of the time it really dosent fit with the scenes considering it is a zombie game and running around a city full of them and its playing happy tunes i mean no...just no....

Choices 1/5
Cant say there are many choices there and i wish there would be alot more when talking or being with the twins or anyone else.

Cant really deside what to give this one 2, 3 or 4 stars....so ill leave it at 3 for now and wait to see what happens when they get with the sister/mother if we will have any choices then, since for now its pretty much been a 100% kinetic novel and should be tagged as such since not a single thing changes the story so far, only changes is what type of sexual thing a girl will to with MC and even that is extremly rare.

I will revisit this later and adjust my review up and down depending on how things will turn go with the mother/sister stuff.

Let me start by saying I didn't even make it to the vjay sex scene with the niece. I was so put off by the ridiculously long schlong of the MC during the first few lewd scenes, that I couldn't go any further. The animations are poor to fair, the story is typical, the renders are good. Put those together with a normal schlong and this is a middle of the road (3 star) game. I have never reduced a star from a game for schlong length, but here it is

Dude has a comically large penis. Horses look at this guy and get jealous. It's absurd. You could cut his dick in half and it would still be fantasy porn size. And yeah, the writing is cringe, The grammar is terrible. Protagonist is a Marty Sue that is way too open with his desire for an incest harem. The women are way too onboard with an incest harem. The plot moves at mach 5, from a peek at the dick to sucking like a $2 whore in about 2 days. This feels very much like a first draft of a late night fantasy that has yet to be edited.

That said, the renders are excellent. The zpoc fantasy is on point, if not original. And it scratches a certain itch.

This game's story was absolutely boring and made me feel like I was reading some 13 year old's super cool super agent adventure story. I literally skipped through as much as I could. The models are cute, but the MC really creeped me out to the point that I was not comfortable with his 'exploits'.

V0.08

I think this is in the top 5% of games on f95 already...

Rare example of an actual decent story idea well executed, all the possible threads... looking forward to seeing what this becomes! Please keep it up. This ticks so many boxes...

I dont get the zombie/badass stuff, thought this was just going to be about a dude and his nieces. Cant say much about the story since I skipped everything thats zombie/badass related until its back to the nieces. Overall, it is a good game to play with some nice models. Probly a 4/5 if counting the zombie stuff.

I just can't understand. The models and renders are good in my opinion, but the story and especially the writing is a cringy mess. If the dev isn't an english native speaker I can understand sme of the spelling mistakes, no shame in that and nothing what coudln't be fixed. But the dialogues and narration is written like a 12 year old would describe his adventures in an apocalypse like scenario.

I recommend, especially during erotic scenes, to skip some of the dialogue. It ruins the fun. *Edit: Corrected to 3/5, like the ideas behind the scenes. Just to be fair in rating it.

i played this game i really enjoyed it a lot i like this kind of games with domination/humiliations/S&M and this game dose it will.
the models look good i like that there is verity also the fact that we have milf's waiting for us add more to the game.
the developer is not afraid to do what hw wants and that is something i respect a lot .
the story is good and entertaining but here for the sex ngl.
all in all love the game best of luck.

This story makes zero sense. The models are nice. The Lolies are cute but if you're looking for a reason to stick to with this that's pretty much where it ends. Basically this boils down to it just not being for me. Nothing much to say beyond that. I hope the dev gets the support they need to keep this going for those who like it. If you do enjoy this go give them some support.

This game has nice models of the lolies. That's the only positive trait.
The writing is simply abysmal in all possible senses. First of all, the story is full of clichés and boring in general. Some of the situations just plainly stupid. Like when the MC (who is a superagent) goes on a very dangerous superagent mission, he nearly gets killed because his sister distracts him at the very heroic superagent moment with a phone call. Are you 4king serious? Also, before killing his evil targets in a fight he has time do discuss with them why he is doing it. Bloody hell!
The dialogues are written in broken EngRish and also apparently composed by a low grade AI. Humans do not speak like that at all. Every situation or a dialogue is full of cheap pathos and shallow dramatism as if it was written by a 13 years old.
Seriously, I love the renders but the plot, characters and dialogue just don't make any sense. For his next project the Dev needs to employ a decent writer.

Renders are decent, and the main plot (as in: what happens in the world) is one of the most enticing ones I have seen as far porn novels go. Worthy of a movie, there are moments you really feel the tension and the emotion of the characters.

But the problem is the characters. And smh MC or his AI being a total lolicon is the least of it (it would be better if you could skip the NSFW interactions, but at least you are usually given the option to just be a big pervert as opposed to a borderline rapist).
The little girls are insufferable. It's not just that they are middle schoolers, or innocent to a fault: they are constantly doing the most careless of acts during life-or-death situations, while being hornier than an adolescent boy when not in danger (later on even starting to forget about this factor). I get they gave up competing with TLOU at some point, but every single female getting unconditionally wet just at the thought of your prowess becomes eerie without at least an explicit mind control justification.
This is the first game that I think would benefit from an un-uncensoring patch.
Also the first time that I think a dick is just too big. It's one thing when you have the the typical hentai setting with boobs the size of watermelons and magic all around, it's another when you are trying to convey a serious story and it's longer than the childs' arms (shoulder to elbow, and then some).
The only redeeming joy is Aqua in the end.

Animation: Pretty good models, animations can be a tad robotic but are used well.
Scripting: Grammar and spelling need to be looked at but it improves over time, the dev is getting better and better at this.
Story: This is a wild escapade of themes and action, but you never win playing it safe. there a good balance of story and "content" for now so I hope that continues.
This is a fun game, a bit raw at moments but there is alot to work with and move forward on. I hope the dev continues

To begin with, the story is really disjointed and kind of a mess. We are kind of just thrown into this zombie apocalypse that happens suddenly and we don't get to experience it at all. It just happens suddenly and we don't get to see like traveling through the city in chaos, people getting bitten and eaten, none of that. Use the setting, there's a reason there's 10 billion zombie movies and games. It also leads me to one of the strongest points of the game yet conversely also one of the weakest. Later on, there are genuinely awesome scenes in which the MC and his niece go through decayed and bloodied hospitals in pitch black with just the flashlight illuminating the scenes. This is awesome and really needs to be more prevalent. Show us more of the zombie apocalypse, show us more of the aftermath of the infection, show us more of the chaos. Currently, there are very few scenes showing this and it's a huge missed opportunity.

It also leads me into the writing, which is sometimes very poor. Why is the MC, a trained and heavily armed soldier, navigating these biohazardous environments like that bloodied and infested hospital with his niece who is like 5 feet tall with 0 muscle. It makes no sense at all. To compound this issue, there are scenes where hes literally just outside on the streets with zombies running around and he decides now is a perfect time to handcuff his niece and facefuck her into submission. What the hell? While the scenes are indeed very hot and the sex scenes are nice, if you are going to do that stuff, make it somewhat believable and have it be at the house or in some secured ruined building or something, not on the damn streets. I'm willing to suspend my disbelief that both nieces are crazy over the MC and literally want him to facefuck them into submission, but make it a reasonable setting please, otherwise it pulls you right back out from this apocalypse setting and leaves you scratching your head. Overall it's not really a bad game, it just lacks heavy polish with the story connection and the writing is iffy at times. It also needs more showing of the zombie apocalypse because currently, it feels like the game is a half baked zombie apocalypse and a half baked incest game and not one unified game.

Story is good, the scenario is beautiful. I like the dialogue and i love how the story progress. Its new so its short, even though there were not many options to choose also felt more like of VN it was very enjoyable

I just finished update v0.06 and I gotta say I'm really enjoying the game so far. No many choices that have major impact on the story. The choices are more of how your going to treat the girls. There are two paths you can take with the girls. You can choose the love route where you are compassionate and loving to them, or you can choose the corruption path where you use them more in a aggressive sexual way and corrupt them slowly. At times it can feel linear at times but even so I'm enjoying it. I can tell the game developer is very passionate at this game and I wish nothing but the best for them. Only draw back is the story, not that there is anything wrong just for me there was no build up just kinda throws you in there with no backstory, you learn as you continue the story but it can get confusing at times. All in all it's a great game and definitely worth the play. Again best of luck to the developer and I can't wait to see what happens next.❤

Three stars thus far is accurate and fair, being a rating in progress, based solely on what has, to date of review, been created and delivered and not what may or may not be in prospect for the future.

So, the external story premise is original and pretty well executed. However, throughout it all, I have felt incessantly bludgeoned by the incestuous aspect (nieces would represent a blood connection through the mc's sister, right?) and the righteous justification and purity of heart the mc professes, particularly with regard to the two young...imo dangerously young looking... girls, every single one of whose holes, he's obviously hell bent and obsessed with, righteously and devotedly, sticking his ridiculously clichéd telephone pole into.

This internal aspect, so repetitively expressed, as with "Single Again", for me, relentlessly stifles the greater enjoyment possible from a wider-ranging story exploring more of their wordly circumstance and the intrigue surrounding the creation and spreading of the virus.

It seems like every other breath we're back to one of the girls creepily drooling and fantasising about her uncle/daddy and that clichéd *yawn* totemic *yawn* cock. And no, I assure you, I do not suffer, in the slightest, from telephone pole envy.

Quite frankly what started off as a fairly acceptable premise, has come to make me feel completely creeped out playing this guy. Most certainly, the young nieces, who, both in physique and emotional maturity and outlook, are absolutely borderline children, do look gorgeous and are irresistibly cute, but even so I ceased finding them attractive quite a while back, simply because of their total preoccupation with cock and all things "uncle (daddy)" to the complete and utter exclusion of any and all other juvenile interests . Hell, even chasing and playing with each other on the beach had a sexual connotation.

The sexuality, instead of enhancing the situation and story, for me, absolutely chokes everything off. I guess (I honestly wouldn't really know) this may be fapper's delight, but for me it represents a very disappointing opportunity missed due either to the Dev's own obsessive preoccupation or his/her perception that it will be (and perhaps correctly so) his audience's obsessive preoccupation.

It's a downright shame because there really is a whole lot in this that is inventive, intriguing and, yes, if suitably toned down enough potentially heart-poundingly erotic about this novel, especially compared with so much of the dross put up by many other "creators" in this genre.

I hope, at least from my perspective, that this potential gem may still be saved, but as with all these episodic adventures, time alone will have to tell.

Would love to see version 0.06 but even with the content released so far it's a great game in the future hopefully hes able to give the bot a more human body i gave it 5 stars because i enjoyed it but the messed up pronouns kinda threw me off

Version: 0.05

I tried this for the milfs, Eva (mc's mom/gilf) and Alyna (mc's sis/red-head mother), but there isn't much content with them yet. However, the novel proved to deliver good content with the twins, Camila (the introvert) and Emma (ponytail extravert). The incest is baked in and the twins are both forced love interests. I assume the milfs will be as well. The novel focuses on telling a story about family while offering the player the option to corrupt them gradually.

Writing
story didn't interest me - I quickly lost interest very early, at around the twins speaking to eachother in the temporary red brick house

• a lot of story to be had and non-lewd plot amongst the family
• despite not viewing the story, it's mildly wholesome
• sexual content isn't rushed, there isn't any penetration yet
  • what it lacks in hardcore content it makes up for in ecchi-ness though nowhere as much as the story's plot

Visuals

• good lighting and textures of main LI models

• backgrounds stand out as plain and generic
• nice feet shots (coming from a non-foot fetishist)

Sex Content

• lots of kissing, ahegaos and squirting/intense orgasms (legs and toes stretched and sprawling inb4 she says "I need to rest")
• sex scenes are short
• specific sex acts include: pussy rubs, cunnilingus, spanking, footjobs, handjobs, blowjobs, swallowing and cum drinking, thighjob)
• the twins swoon for you
• choices offer content regardless of the choice; love or corruption
  • however, a scene close to the end of version, at night, only appeared if corruption is higher than love - thus favouring corruption
• spanking animation has jiggle

Sound and Other

• a lot of music tracks for scenes
  • but could use some closer attention to match the moods like the poor blunt use of the upbeat track at the beginning
• not much use of sfx, mostly just for gunshots
  • as such; no spank sfx >:/
• auto naming of last save to "Latest save" is such a great QoL feature and needs more use in the VN community
• For Dev: see [minor] bugs and typos below

Since I'm not paying attention to the story, although I like the genre of survival (though it feels more of a backdrop in this story), the sexual content is what's holding my interest. The models are pleasing to look at. I'm not into lolis but I appreciate the ecchi scenes with Camila and Emma. They were better than the straight-on x-job scenes. And the animations, some, impress me by how smooth and such a non-issue it is on my low-end pc. Personally, love the jiggle on that one spank scene.
Although the game offers choice between love and corruption, it seems to slightly lean towards corruption with the fact that there is one extra scene if your corrupt. is higher as well as the version-end image being the twins in dog collars.
I await for milf content.

Review based on v0.03:

Just an average game with nice looking LI's and good sex scenes. The problem with this game is everything else. The story have some cool ideas but does have many problems, like the geographical aspect of it all just makes no bloody sense in the way the MC and LI's move around their island and city, the way the relationship between MC and LI's develop also moves to fast, yes I know it is supposed to have gone a few months of time in the game but it just portraits it so badly that it all feels like somebody pressed fast forward until just before the sex scenes could start to happen, making it all feel so, so rushed. They all also seem to care too little about the world being a zombie apocalypse. Music choices are all over the place with music that many times do not fit the scenes they are in at all, so bad that I started to wonder if I had a second game running in the background because the music felt so out of place. And lastly but not least, the insane size of MCs dick. It is so large it could have its own zipcode ffs, I actually laughed out loud the first time it was shown.

It is a shame because this game has good potential but is filled with strange decisions from the dev.

honestly this game, has some potential.
The good:
The sister and her daughters are super cute and hot.
the renders are decent, and I like the build up were the uncle gets to know his 2 cute nieces.
The bad:
the spelling and gramma is horrible
Mc's Dick look hilarious its like 50 cm long, just make a normal large cock bro its fine .

played 2 updates, and it does have some potential.
if the dev's sticks with the things, that this game does well.