- Nov 20, 2017
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yeah doesn't help if an AVN lacks some lewd scenes you always see people point that out as a negative in comments or reviews. ( according to them) Which is a shame I feel like if more dev's didn't have worry about adding lewd scenes based on audience but when they feel like it's right would make so many much better.I feel like it's a curse that all AVN share. They feel the need to have at least one sex scene per chapter to satisfy their players even if it doesn't really fit the plot, so they need to resort to use random girls like this one.
One could argue that you are wrong on the first one. But if one insist on "correcting" the first one, I think it should be "I'm meeting up with my friend for some drinks."2 more dialogue mistakes.
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And I'm only 77 mins into the game. Did anyone proofread this? this is sloppy work if so.
Well, not 100% wrong, I just didn't complete the sentence correctly. I knew it didn't sound right, but without a bit of my fix, it would sound wrong by itself. You finished it nicely. I was just not thinking of it that way. I was trying to keep most of what was written down as to not change too much of it.One could argue that you are wrong on the first one.
My point was that "going to go meet up", as you proposed, is redundant. Even the dev's "going to meet up" was better than that.Well, not 100% wrong, I just didn't complete the sentence correctly. I knew it didn't sound right, but without a bit of my fix, it would sound wrong by itself. You finished it nicely. I was just not thinking of it that way. I was trying to keep most of what was written down as to not change too much of it.
"Meeting up with my friend" or " meeting up with a friend of mines" still means the same thing. Just said differently.