VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Summer Camp [v0.1.6] [All Natural Games]

Honestly, I don't see why this game gets so much hate. I am disappointed this was abandoned. Is the writing the best? No. Is the character a doosh? Yes. Are the renders and animation the best? No. However, this has one of the greatest story setting hooks ever. The possibilities were enormous and the itches it allowed to scratch were awesome. Allowing the user to customize parameters is a plus. Play how you want. This needs to be remade with better renders, animation, and writing. Lots of fetishes you could explore with this setting.

Reviewing after this one got the abandoned tag: Dull story with a detestable MC who has no morals. Also, a really punchable face. All the girls looks weird and have no memorable characteristics. Overall, this one's not worth your 30 minutes.

K, its not a 5* games, just put an extra star on it to make up for the low ratings that are no longer valid.

v0.1.6 rating:4*

This is an AVN full of depth, romance and wonder..... ok its none of those things. Its a sex game where you use your big cock to seduce, erm, "petite" girls. It does its job perfectly well. If you look at the banner pic and think, hm... ya i want that, you'll like it. If you want milfs or a deep layered story, look elsewhere. The story server one purpose, to get you to the next scene. And it does that perfectly well. Its not Moby Dick, but the prose is straightforward and lacking in Engrish or typos.. Its fine, and does its purpose.

My understanding is that the writing was truly awful at one time, but the dev has obviously gotten a native english speaker to completely rewrite the whole thing. Kudos to you for doing that dev. Thats what we all want. You obviously heard the criticism and fixed your game. Its now exactly what you were going for.

Now on to the girls... they are all cute and adorable. And "petite". If age play with young nubile girls aint your thing, don't play this. And certainly dont complain about it. It is exactly what its supposed to be.

I very much _want_ to enjoy games with "do not report this game to the mods" warnings on the main post.

Unfortunately, this one just isn't enjoyable. It's not transgressive so much as juvenile. The MC has unearned god-tier looks and brilliant insight into the minds of young women. Women and girls want him, other men want to be him. He instinctively knows that this one will respond to a spanking, but this one requires some yoga to unlock.

Take together, it feels like the author just got a bunch of Daz pose packs, threw some renders together, wrapped it up with some personal inferiority complex, and called it a VN. Which would be fine -- if the renders were at least titillating -- but they are not really. The whole thing seems hollow and a little embarrassing, like watching a child rubbing Barbie-dolls together to simulate sex.

After reaching the end of the few days currently available, the biggest head scratcher for me is that the mc keeps coming back to the tone-deaf thought that "it's a good thing that my girlfriend broke up with me, so now there's no problem with me sexually assaulting all these '18 year-old' girls". Apparently, loyalty to his barely mentioned girlfriend who broke up with him b/c he wouldn't go to the beach with her today was the only reason he wasn't out banging all the '18 year-old' girls that are constantly throwing themselves at him before.

I can appreciate transgressive stuff, but this is about as transgressive as an awkward kid declaring that he got a funny feeling climbing the rope in gym class today, but that's ok because everyone thinks that he is the coolest and also all the girls totally want to hook up with him anyway.

Not really bad enough for 1-star, but also clearly not good enough for 3.

Models are okay but dated. Everything else is a total abortion. Poor lighting, poor posing, everyone has the same creepy smile. The english/translation is poor. The story is constantly reaching so hard to make any sense that it probably pulled a muscle or two. This is one of the cringiest games I've ever played as well. Lets make fun of the fat guy for being fat. Oh this girl is a bit boyish shes probably trans. My girlfriend is such a bitch because she doesnt worship me like everyone else. gag... from the context clues and "logic" of this kinetic novel i can only assume it was written by a boy so young he would not make it past the " Are you old enough to read this" disclaimer at the start of this sort of game.

If you like dated models and macho rapey "euro logic" this is the game for you. Wasn't for me however.

Like watching a legit B movie. This game is bad! Dreadful. Horrific. Pathetic. Cathartic... but it is still oddly enjoyable. It shouldn't work. It REALLY shouldn't. It looks like it was made by a blind man. The dialog is even worse. It's grainy. The lighting is god awful and inconsistent from one frame to the next. MC's hair renderer gives up when close to the camera. The characters have no personality, odd stereotypes, and are visually indistinguishable from each other. Who needs a character arc? There is no gameplay. No sound. It does that false choice insta-failure bit along with all the other bad tropes. It is needlessly edgy and cringe. and I'm pretty sure there was a racial slur in there to boot. For crying out loud the header image on the page is two pictures lazily stitched together with a logo that looks like summer "camd". It's incredibly dumb. YET I STILL ENJOYED IT. It's raining b*tches for no reason as the MC stumbles around unrelatable and braindead in the oddest situations in a mindset twisted beyond repair. Cheers to not taking yourself serious, and lewd for lewd's sake! Bravo All Natural Games. You know what you are and stick to your guns.

Very good visuals, nice idea, but.. it's just basically a slideshow, where you hold the CTRL key and you're done in 5 min. No suspense, nothing to strive for. You're going to fuck 100% of the girls. That's it.

The latest version has improved previous faults, such as the subpar English. For perverts everywhere now, this is a really solid offering. It could always benefit from additional polish, but I'd say in its current form this is quite good.

Good and realistic story.
Nice render with detailed textures.
Normal characters body, no oversized boobs or bottoms.
I like that there are choices that leads to GAME OVER with sad story about that choice.

Excellent modeling.
Characters with unique personalities.
good story
Number of characters.
And most importantly, the use of teenage characters in the role of teenagers...
All this makes the game interesting. And made me follow...
I hope the story will be long and continuous.

If you want to consider the technical aspects, the writing, the story, this game in its current state probably deserves a 2.5... The pacing is really fast, but not ludicrously so. The dialogue is a bit messy and very not-first-language at times, but not a real dealbreaker. The face models are far too repetitive in both design and expression posing.

So why the 4/5? The one thing the game does nail is the "sexual situations" to borrow a PG-13 term, and the overall setting/development shows real promise. So while my head and heart has it at a 2.5, the more important head was pretty invested. There is little to no refinement to be found here, but there is definite promise. And hey, at least it respects your time. =)

Remember those crazy dreams you sometimes have where you're talking to someone but suddenly it's someone else and you're in one place but suddenly it's somewhere else?

Well, those dreams have more coherence than this "game" (ha! game... it's a kinetic novel).

The girls are beautiful, only when they look at you from the front and they are smiling, because in the next frame where they are doing something else (with their mouth) they are like monsters, which is a pity, because they are really beautiful from the front.

Oh I forgot the main character is a Gary Stu, he's perfect and his only friend is a nerdy loser because he's fat.

It has no music, no fx's and the animations make the baby Jesus cry.

Writing is godawful. Even if you account for english not being the writer's native language it is still bad. The models were cute and what brought me in but the writing/story is just sooo bad I can't get past it. I get it porno logic but EVEN STILL...just ugh. Bad. Was hoping this would be at least ok because as I said models are good mostly but yeah that writing is just so bad it takes me right out of it.

Okay so I was a little worried reading some of the reviews but IMO this is a fantastic game. The ONLY big problem is the developer is clearly not a native english speaker and frankly, not very good at english. Not only are there typos but the dev doesn't differentiate between he and she. But overall that's OK because that is such an easy fix compared to other problems that might have been.

Other than that there is one scene that could maybe be described as NTR... BUT it's both skippable and happened in the past so as a fellow NTR-hater I can say that it shouldn't pose a problem at all; it didn't for me.

It's a little short for now but that's so far to be expected with how few updates there have been.

And the upside is the girls, which makes up for almost all of the games shortcomings.

So a 4/5 for now, if the typos gets fixed and there are more and wilder scenes with the proper camp girls this will be a 5/5 for sure.

I like the the storytelling.
This game is more fast paced then most other games, but that is okay.
The girls also look very different from each other but still unique.
Can not wait for further updates

When you're looking for visual novels, you want something you can relate to, a story, characters, and an endearing universe. In general, it's quite difficult for me to hang on well to the story, because often there's too many useless extensions, too long dialogues and too similar or uninteresting characters. As for this one, I found it interesting.

But first, let me gather a few points to wrap up my opinion.

-The positive points

1. The graphics are excellent, I like the quality of the fluids and the look of the characters. The expressions can sometimes be a bit exaggerated, but that's fine.
2. I like the loss of the "bimbo" look for the female characters. In most visual novels, most of the women have very exaggerated features, and I like the look that's offered here a lot more.
3. As I said earlier, the dialogues and the story are not a problem here. For sure, they are not super worked, but at least they are not endless and boring.
4. I like that each characters has a story and a different personality that emerges with time.
5. If you want to see some ass, it's a good choice. It's a good fappable game with a little list of interesting fetishes.

-The points that need work

1. Sometimes the characters are really naïve, some scenes are a bit ridiculous and unrealistic. I see the formation of a rather utopian world.
2. The main character is a bit cliché and is a bit lacking in intelligence. Unconventional situations in the game would have honestly made us leave, but the MC is there, like everything is normal.
3. Some reactions are a bit exaggerated and pushed.
   Spoiler

   You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
4. I liked less the slightly forced side. Some people like "rape" has a fantasy. But here, the characters are already fragile and follow without thinking or reacting to the situation. This goes a little on the unrealistic side that I listed earlier.
5. It's up to me, but I would have liked that the other monitors stayed away from the "campers" and then the MC will have it all to himself without anyone else saying anything or adding someone else.
6. The animations need more work.
7. The writing needs a bit more attention. Certain sentences have been reversed with the "she" or "him" or the name's.
8. I don't see any "build up" in the scenes or the story, the girls are just attracted to the MC. Why... magically? Like he doesn't need to do anything, they just want the D.

Note: If you are looking for a story with strong emotion, with suspense, intrigue, it is not here. In my opinion, this is more a game for fun. But, if the points said earlier, interest you, I advise you to test this game. It has great potential and I hope to see it finished.

I can't wait to see the story continue and for the next updates to come.

Keep up the good work!

<3

Please remember that this is my opinion and I fully respect the opinions of others. I'm not disparaging anyone, besides, I'm just giving my opinion on the work that certain people do, because I think it need to be put forward.

Really enjoyed it so far, and I disagree with most of the bad reviews below! The premise is exciting and it fills a niche fetish. Some spelling mistakes for sure (his/her reversed mainly stands out), but models are really cute and I really hope to see more of them soon. Regarding the LI's backstory, I think it's great that you can choose to see it firsthand or not. Keep it up!

This started off pretty good where it looked like the MC was to be the only one getting action with the LI's. That is until the most recent update where they decided it would be a fantastic idea to show one of the LI's being sexually assaulted and just loving every minute of it, then to rub it in even more that LI has promised her virginity to the sexual assaulter. I can only imagine what horrors are in store for future updates.

So if your thing is watching LI's being assaulted and more than likey fucked by other men this game is most definately for you. If your looking for a harem/romance game my suggestion would be to look elsewhere for your loli enjoyment.

I thoroughly enjoyed this. The girls are especially gorgeous and I adore they do not have giant breasts. This was a refreshing, very fappable VN - we need more of these. Looking forward to more updates!

Quite understand those that want improvements for this game, because there's still rooms for improvements.
.
But to me it's not that bad as some might have said. It's just doesn't suit someone's taste, and obviously that is not me.
.
Cause to me the model/girls are good (the average of the faces passed my cute standard, but yeah their look are quite 'young' for my actual taste but that is alright), some filter/lighting even make the girls look real.
.
About the plot, sometimes you want a realistic plot game but if all the games have that it would be bad, in case you just want to relax and chill and have your fantasy fulfilled. So the 'all girls want to bang me' plot is already fine for me as it is.
.
Because games are suppose to fulfill 'what we couldn't do/have in real life' isn't it?
.
So some of the fantasy in this game is perfectly fine for me.
.
Thanks for this game, and keep up the good work.