VN Ren'Py Sinful Summer: A Tale of Forbidden Love [Ch. 2.1] [Ruykiru]

[Ruykiru]

Does this require a restart? I opened an April save that had girl dancing and the ended the game.

No, open one before that. That's the after ending credits for all updates.

 

[HeathenFilth]

Are the music tracks written and performed by yourself and/or someone on team, or are you using software to generate lyrics and song?

 

[Ruykiru]

Are the music tracks written and performed by yourself and/or someone on team, or are you using software to generate lyrics and song?

I wrote the lyrics, but check the credits in-game for a surprise

 

[combige]

From the previews I see the cameraman is a man of culture.
So, what else do we have here...

 

[Raizen84]

When will there be vaginal sex, sleeping sex is not sex if there is no intercourse hahaha, it's not that it's oral sex or masturbation while a character is asleep so they should remove the TAG: sleeping sex

 

[Ruykiru]

When will there be vaginal sex, sleeping sex is not sex if there is no intercourse hahaha, it's not that it's oral sex or masturbation while a character is asleep so they should remove the TAG: sleeping sex

That tag is actually correct, refers to any sex act -> README - Tags Rules And List [Updated 2024-01-29] | F95zone

 

[quyen1998]

sissyfication anytime soon? this is getting boring

 

[WincestDevil]

I don't get this. Why is it that when a mother (which is usually the ultimate "prize") in an incest game has doubts and is questioning herself all the time it's okay, but then when it's the other way around and it's a male who gets emotional and has doubts, then he's a whimp, crybaby...? I don't like double standards.

Also I think I made it pretty clear that he's shy, responsible, thinks about the future, has no experience, is afraid, feels guilty, etc. I don't know what else I can do, apart from eventually making him more assertive.

I haven't started playing your game yet but it's different for a mother character than for her son, the only male character who players will self-insert as. When your main character actively goes against the wishes of the audience and is passive where everything happens to them and they're just along for the ride, shit can get pretty annoying or boring pretty fast. A massive number of stories being told, either through film or books, feature a protagonist who either isn't afraid to grab fate by the balls or learns quickly that he needs to affect his own outcome. It doesn't mean the story needs to be a power fantasy or that the protagonist needs to be chad thundercock, he just has to be an active participant in the story in which he is the protagonist of. It's possible to craft a story around a wimpy or passive protagonist who eventually learns to take action, but you'll have to deal with the bitching and moaning of people until he learns to grow a pair. That is if people will stick around long enough to witness this change.

 

[Ruykiru]

I haven't started playing your game yet but it's different for a mother character than for her son, the only male character who players will self-insert as. When your main character actively goes against the wishes of the audience and is passive where everything happens to them and they're just along for the ride, shit can get pretty annoying or boring pretty fast. A massive number of stories being told, either through film or books, feature a protagonist who either isn't afraid to grab fate by the balls or learns quickly that he needs to affect his own outcome. It doesn't mean the story needs to be a power fantasy or that the protagonist needs to be chad thundercock, he just has to be an active participant in the story in which he is the protagonist of. It's possible to craft a story around a wimpy or passive protagonist who eventually learns to take action, but you'll have to deal with the bitching and moaning of people until he learns to grow a pair. That is if people will stick around long enough to witness this change.

Well, try the game first maybe? If you like wincest then I think you'll love it. Besides, Lyna is also the protagonist just like Erik, you can change both names for a reason.

That aside, it's not my problem that people have double standards. I don't see him as whiny and bitchy! And I clearly stated the reasons why he's acting like he is in the novel, so if people can't see them then sorry to tell you but that is brain rot due to the cesspool of generic incest games that have been released through the years. The taboo is going to matter here, it's gonna feel good to overcome it, and not because of a sandbox grind, or pressure from impatient people, but because I will write it as good as I can. Go read some good erotica, because I want to make that but in VN format.

And lastly, boring, really? There's already some steamy action, many erotic situations, music videos... I've released the game 3 months ago and made 5 updates, give me a chance to tell my story, which I have already planned. I get that people expect the fucky fucky in one update but that's not what I'm going to do because I don't just like to make porn, I want to make a story to make the porn feel that much better.

 

[Gabo69780]

The sister who watches videos taboo,la coquine

 

[JKRollin']

I think Mom needs to take reins to her hands to go forward in this Incest-trio relationship...we need mom's perspective in this VN going forward(mom pov) multiple protag is in da house (i can imagine mom to enlighten MC about incest's not so wrong and fuck the society and shit so he don't be BLIND to his desire for looong time to come) just a small push to right direction cause lyna's methods are not effective (not manipulation)

 

[Walter Victor]

I think Mom needs to take reins to her hands to go forward in this Incest-trio relationship...we need mom's perspective in this VN going forward(mom pov) multiple protag is in da house (i can imagine mom to enlighten MC about incest's not so wrong and fuck the society and shit so he don't be BLIND to his desire for looong time to come) just a small push to right direction cause lyna's methods are not effective (not manipulation)

While that would be a good way to move forward in this game, given how Helga reacted to any slightly sexual contact (or language) from and between her children, it doesn't seem likely, at least in the near term. It still seems like Lyna is the most likely catalyst for further family activity.

 

[DarrenH]

Haeloo
Stole my review almost word for word from last release. Thats so weird

 

[Hlextor]

Well, try the game first maybe? If you like wincest then I think you'll love it. Besides, Lyna is also the protagonist just like Erik, you can change both names for a reason.

That aside, it's not my problem that people have double standards. I don't see him as whiny and bitchy! And I clearly stated the reasons why he's acting like he is in the novel, so if people can't see them then sorry to tell you but that is brain rot due to the cesspool of generic incest games that have been released through the years. The taboo is going to matter here, it's gonna feel good to overcome it, and not because of a sandbox grind, or pressure from impatient people, but because I will write it as good as I can. Go read some good erotica, because I want to make that but in VN format.

And lastly, boring, really? There's already some steamy action, many erotic situations, music videos... I've released the game 3 months ago and made 5 updates, give me a chance to tell my story, which I have already planned. I get that people expect the fucky fucky in one update but that's not what I'm going to do because I don't just like to make porn, I want to make a story to make the porn feel that much better.

I like the story very much! The slow rapprochement between the two siblings. The initial doubts of the two. Sis's jealousy of her mother... I can't wait to see how the story of the three of them continues.

 

[Desastrousman]

I really liked this game and that surprises me because I don't like kinetic games, as they seem forced but this game doesn't, and the pace at which it advances in the story is great without rushing anything, I really liked the slow burn, there's no need be in a hurry for the game to be good

 

[BlindSpotter]

I started playing this game I feel amazed of the story of this game I think the game creator of this game are more realistic I hope your game story will be more better in the next updates

 

[mrnewbie123]

HS2 enjoyer

 

[Perfect S]

Wincest with a good slow burn (not the usual lame "lets do Yoga" -> immediate fuck) is my favorite theme so I really like this game so far.
My only minor complaints are that Lyna seemed to go fully shaven offscreen (I liked her pubic hair, Erik did not suffer this fate) and that Erik is maybe a little too wussy sometimes, but I'm sure that's just character development in progress.
Anyways, hope it doesn't get abandoned (or a ridiculous update schedule) like 95% of games I happen to like on this site that are not Japanese VNs.

 

[Ruykiru]

Wincest with a good slow burn (not the usual lame "lets do Yoga" -> immediate fuck) is my favorite theme so I really like this game so far.
My only minor complaints are that Lyna seemed to go fully shaven offscreen (I liked her pubic hair, Erik did not suffer this fate) and that Erik is maybe a little too wussy sometimes, but I'm sure that's just character development in progress.
Anyways, hope it doesn't get abandoned (or a ridiculous update schedule) like 95% of games I happen to like on this site that are not Japanese VNs.

Did I miss any render for Lyna? She was supossed to be shaven so I redid some one update. About the schedule look at the changelog, and I'm gonna update every month from now.

 

[Perfect S]

Did I miss any render for Lyna? She was supossed to be shaven so I redid some one update. About the schedule look at the changelog, and I'm gonna update every month from now.

The version I played (1.4?) she wasn't at the start then changed. In the newer version I did not go back to check. That seems like a good schedule hope you can keep it going. BTW, any chance of a "flashback" with the younger twins being NSFW or is that off limits to you? Cheers.