v2.02
You play as a female spider-hero who goes to school and works during the day and... sleeps at night, because you can only fight crime during the day.
The good:
- Decent writing. Better than that of most games. I only noticed a couple of spelling mistakes.
- Different facial expressions.
- Different outfits, and more coming by the looks of it.
- Some of the art: especially the black and white (AI?) - I like the style much better than the colored drawings.
- Some scenes are displayed in a comic format which looks great.
Neutral:
- Some broken sprites (missing hands, missing lower body). It's a very early version, so that's expected.
- AI art needs post-edition: there are body parts that change sizes between one picture and the next, for example.
- Clothes don't match their allure value. eg; some mini shorts and a tank top give 0 allure, while wearing a formal dress on top of a pair of leggings gives you 20.
- Constant mentions of stats. eg; "your intelligence increased by #". This makes it feel like some cheap RPG instead of a novel.
- Character sprites seem to have a single pose. Moving the arms and tilting the head would help convey emotions better, while allowing to reuse the same clothing sprites without needing to draw new ones.
- When using the scene viewer, irrelevant dialogue (ie; the one after the scene is over) should be skipped.
- The mall has a bunch of menus and only 1 or 2 work. There's no point in including buttons that lead to no content.
The bad:
- There is a single anal scene with a side perspective. You only know that it's supposed to be anal because of the description.
- The animations are really bad - one makes it look like the man is suspended in mid-air, while another looks like the MC is getting a penis pushed into her brain. Still pictures would be better, and x-ray removed.
- Many of the sex scenes are just the same sprite that you always see, paired with some weird overlay of a hand. That's ok for a text-based game, but a visual novel is meant to be, you know, visual - it's important to work on those scenes.
Good looking for an early version, but the lewd content needs a lot of improvement.
Funnily enough, the most polished part seems to be a dog, so if you're into that, you may get something out of this game. There isn't a lot to see for those of us who don't.
