VN Ren'Py Abandoned Secrets [Ep. 3 v4.0] [Elun Games]

[Fairchy]

Just did the the demo, Good story and the renders are great!

 

[mysterious stranger]

Looks good, looking forward to the real episodes.

I really like the plane idea.

A few things that struck me:

Not sure it was needed for Johana to explain the standard RenPy controls but maybe that is just me.

If your uncle was dead for two months, wouldn't the funeral have happened already? (although maybe with foul play it may have been delayed)

Not sure you should call the place "Overseas" - everything else seems so believable until the name "Overseas" was mentioned and that just didn't sit right. Maybe you could pick a more believable name:

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[ELTACO]

WOW what a hell of a demo , I love everything so far , wish it were longer obviously but DAMN what a start. If I had any issues it the font size it way too damn small and the fact the MC talks way too much to himself other then that, I look forward to the next update.

 

[Nerttu]

THANKS, the demo is fantastic !! Renders are GREAT and the story is well writen and unusual !! Then some improments (imo):
Font should be little BIGGER ! lol
Anims are NOT so great (2-3 frames)
Adding sound in some points should be great (aaahhhh, mmmhhh, ooohhhh)
At next update... Don`t use speech bubbels !!

But for a DEMO it has potential, GREAT work !!!!

PS. Sadly, this demo brings me bad memories of some game (Family Secrets by Aorrta). Start was similar and then nothing ! :FeelsBadMan::FeelsBadMan::FeelsBadMan:

 

[BubaJ]

At Least.. MILF tag make me... INTERESTED :firstimekiss:

yeah, me to. Will give this game a chance.

 

[Nimitznl]

Nice demo. Good work.

 

[Eric X.]

Hello everyone and thank you, really, thank you for taking the time to play and comment my little project
I am so happy that you liked what you see, I will try to meet your expectations as much as I can.

The demo you just played is the first half of episode 1.
In the second half, you will be able to know better your aunt and cousins, meet that lawyer and see exactly where you're going in this inheritance thing.

So after having read what you said, I will change the font, obviously, it need to be bigger.
I didn't put a background for the text box because some interesting parts of my renders are at the bottom of the image

The game won't have any NTR content, ever. I'm sorry but I don't feel comfortable with this and I really don't know how to bring that into the story.
But, in episode 3, you may have something interesting...

To answer one of the question, about the funerals, the MC simply lie talking about the funeral, he's just said that to avoid the question flow. But your remark is relevant because at first, It was two weeks ago instead of two month ago.
But I had to explain later in episode one, why Julia and your cousins have passed the mourning period. So I said two month, maybe I should go back to two week, what do you think ?

Overseas was the easy name to give, it show that the MC is going far, far away from his home. Thank you for the generator, I will choose something for next update.

Yeah anims sucks! ha ah. They are two frame only actually. I will have to learn more about anims and I will get back on this scenes.

As you have doubted, English is not my native language so if you find any Engrish words, fell free to tell me the right translation so I can correct this.

Again thank you for your comments!

Eric

 

[BubaJ]

The demo you just played is the first half of episode 1.
In the second half, you will be able to know better your aunt and cousins, meet that lawyer and see exactly where you're going in this inheritance thing.

Oh man That aunt and lawyer characters are making me excited Of course I hope they both will be fuckable

 

[Nerttu]

Hello everyone and thank you, really, thank you for taking the time to play and comment my little project
I am so happy that you liked what you see, I will try to meet your expectations as much as I can.

The demo you just played is the first half of episode 1.
In the second half, you will be able to know better your aunt and cousins, meet that lawyer and see exactly where you're going in this inheritance thing.

So after having read what you said, I will change the font, obviously, it need to be bigger.
I didn't put a background for the text box because some interesting parts of my renders are at the bottom of the image

The game won't have any NTR content, ever. I'm sorry but I don't feel comfortable with this and I really don't know how to bring that into the story.
But, in episode 3, you may have something interesting...

To answer one of the question, about the funerals, the MC simply lie talking about the funeral, he's just said that to avoid the question flow. But your remark is relevant because at first, It was two weeks ago instead of two month ago.
But I had to explain later in episode one, why Julia and your cousins have passed the mourning period. So I said two month, maybe I should go back to two week, what do you think ?

Overseas was the easy name to give, it show that the MC is going far, far away from his home. Thank you for the generator, I will choose something for next update.

Yeah anims sucks! ha ah. They are two frame only actually. I will have to learn more about anims and I will get back on this scenes.

As you have doubted, English is not my native language so if you find any Engrish words, fell free to tell me the right translation so I can correct this.

Again thank you for your comments!

Eric

First thanks for the demo, it was GOOD !!!! What about the sounds, that I suggested ???? Is that posibble or does the game "grow" too large ??? Keep up GOOD WORK !!!! :FeelsGoodMan::FeelsGoodMan::FeelsGoodMan:

 

[Demon Jhim]

Wow at least this demo has some actually sex scene on the get go.

 

[Arius Zauber]

Looks very interesting, this game definitely has potential.
If the author makes the right amount of effort, the game will definitely become popular.

 

[Eric X.]

Oh man That aunt and lawyer characters are making me excited Of course I hope they both will be fuckable

Maybe... :biggrin::winkytongue:

First thanks for the demo, it was GOOD !!!! What about the sounds, that I suggested ???? Is that posibble or does the game "grow" too large ??? Keep up GOOD WORK !!!! :FeelsGoodMan::FeelsGoodMan::FeelsGoodMan:

I will work on that, I don't think there will be a problem with the game size.
My only concern is... In that kind of game, each one of us has its own character voice in head when we read their lines. I'm a little afraid that if I add moaning sounds, the voice tone may be too different of what people had in mind and they may be disappointed. See what I mean?

Looks very interesting, this game definitely has potential.
If the author makes the right amount of effort, the game will definitely become popular.

Thank you for your words I will try my best and work hard :coldsweat:

 

[ThunderRob]

seeing "overseas" then a Crown Vic copcar..overseas is either Canada or the U.S..making me think the MC is Euro.

 

[King Monkey Mon]

god, this is fucking diamond, 100/10 :eazyHype:

Hello everyone and thank you, really, thank you for taking the time to play and comment my little project
I am so happy that you liked what you see, I will try to meet your expectations as much as I can.

The demo you just played is the first half of episode 1.
In the second half, you will be able to know better your aunt and cousins, meet that lawyer and see exactly where you're going in this inheritance thing.

So after having read what you said, I will change the font, obviously, it need to be bigger.
I didn't put a background for the text box because some interesting parts of my renders are at the bottom of the image

The game won't have any NTR content, ever. I'm sorry but I don't feel comfortable with this and I really don't know how to bring that into the story.
But, in episode 3, you may have something interesting...

To answer one of the question, about the funerals, the MC simply lie talking about the funeral, he's just said that to avoid the question flow. But your remark is relevant because at first, It was two weeks ago instead of two month ago.
But I had to explain later in episode one, why Julia and your cousins have passed the mourning period. So I said two month, maybe I should go back to two week, what do you think ?

Overseas was the easy name to give, it show that the MC is going far, far away from his home. Thank you for the generator, I will choose something for next update.

Yeah anims sucks! ha ah. They are two frame only actually. I will have to learn more about anims and I will get back on this scenes.

As you have doubted, English is not my native language so if you find any Engrish words, fell free to tell me the right translation so I can correct this.

Again thank you for your comments!

Eric

by far Louise is the best girl legit is officer sexy as of this update im tempted to put this on my top porn game list seeing how im thinking this could be the next Dreams of Desire game in terms of renders and animation

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[Nerttu]

I will work on that, I don't think there will be a problem with the game size.
My only concern is... In that kind of game, each one of us has its own character voice in head when we read their lines. I'm a little afraid that if I add moaning sounds, the voice tone may be too different of what people had in mind and they may be disappointed. See what I mean?

Yes you may be right and as I said, it was an suggestion !!! Although, those games with sound (My cute Roommate, Dreams of Desire and couple of others), nobody ever complains that (I´ve read all posts of those I mentiones), on the contrary, they hoped that DoD had more sounds (in that game it was minimal)!!!!! But keep up good work !!!!:heartcoveredeyes::heartcoveredeyes::heartcoveredeyes:

 

[ThunderRob]

ya..no moaning sounds or any sounds for the MC please..lol...i have a deep Canadian voice and want to keep it that way (i do NOT say "eh" though)

 

[L☹VE]

by far Louise is the best girl legit is officer sexy as of this update im tempted to put this on my top porn game list seeing how im thinking this could be the next Dreams of Desire game in terms of renders and animation

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what took you so long? :extremelyhappy:

 

[King Monkey Mon]

what took you so long? :extremelyhappy:

no idea i guess i was watching resident evil lets plays and jacking off to Jav stuff all day i mean theres been alot of missed games so i was relucted to try this out for some reason i should've trusted my good friend on this anyways just added this to my top porn game list

 

[WaltS]

seeing "overseas" then a Crown Vic copcar..overseas is either Canada or the U.S..making me think the MC is Euro.

Don't think so - IMHO that whole 'overseas' shebang was /is just a bad idea....
Change the location / country / state and you're all clear.

Also hoping for a repeat w/ officer Louise and maybe even some anal action. She's h.a.f. in my book.

And what is it with that strange girl on the plane and the DNA test? Enquiring mind wants to know *g*

 

[WaltS]

it's a "Secret". Ha, get it? XD

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