VN Ren'Py Rise of the Crime Lord [v0.12 Alpha 1 Extended] [IziRider]

[cxx]

What do you mean?

bah, meant to post pics where beth is already sitting on rick's face and then asks to switch with cora so she can get licked.

whois your spellchecker? stewie wonder?

1. it's stewardess
2. his should be her
3. yoe should be you



no i'm not being mean.

 

[Izirider]

Thanks for that, I will fix these.
Not Stevie Wonder, but a decent guy who sacrifices his free time to help me without expecting anything in return. So please refrain from mocking, because at the moment he is the only one I could really count on in the long term. Many people have said they would help with the spellcheck and then either dropped out after the first round, or disappeared after offering to help as if they had been swallowed up by the earth. The latest delinquent disappeared just a few weeks after offering to help, and then did nothing, disappeared without a word, did not reply to my message. But I welcome any help. But despite all the bad experiences, I welcome the help.
The sections you have indicated have not yet undergone any checks (for some reason he can't deal with them now, but as this is still the Alpha version, it's not a big problem).

As for the earlier scene. Beth gives Rick a blowjob while Rick licks her, and then asks Cora to take over this task, because she wants to enjoy Rick's talent without distractions. This was meant to be an indication that Beth does not like to 69 because it divides attention.

 

[cxx]

Thanks for that, I will fix these.
Not Stevie Wonder, but a decent guy who sacrifices his free time to help me without expecting anything in return. So please refrain from mocking, because at the moment he is the only one I could really count on in the long term.

1. not mocking at all, far from it.
2. even more to fix.

about bug: don't think mc is from eastern europe or knows hungary.

rest are just minor typos.

 

[Izirider]

1. then please don't ask the inherently mocking question like "whois your spellchecker? stewie wonder?" Not funny at all!
2. Thank you, I will also fix these.

don't think mc is from eastern europe or knows hungary

You think wrong. Judit Weisz is of Hungarian origin, her parents emigrated to America in 1956. Her name is still Hungarian - although Weisz is not a typical Hungarian name, many Germans and Austrians have settled mostly on the western side of the country in recent centuries, and their names have since been Hungarianised from Weiß to Weisz. And her first name is deliberately written without an 'h'. She speaks Hungarian, and even her twins understand and can speak the language, thanks to their grandparents. So, although Rick is of Irish-British descent (his mother is Irish, his father British), he knows Hungary, even knows Hungarian people (Judit's parents).
Obviously he doesn't speak Hungarian, so if a sentence remains in Hungarian, it's a mistake, but it's still a fact that Rick has Hungarian connections.

 

[MEMUAR]

1. then please don't ask the inherently mocking question like "whois your spellchecker? stewie wonder?" Not funny at all!
2. Thank you, I will also fix these.


You think wrong. Judit Weisz is of Hungarian origin, her parents emigrated to America in 1956. Her name is still Hungarian - although Weisz is not a typical Hungarian name, many Germans and Austrians have settled mostly on the western side of the country in recent centuries, and their names have since been Hungarianised from Weiß to Weisz. And her first name is deliberately written without an 'h'. She speaks Hungarian, and even her twins understand and can speak the language, thanks to their grandparents. So, although Rick is of Irish-British descent (his mother is Irish, his father British), he knows Hungary, even knows Hungarian people (Judit's parents).
Obviously he doesn't speak Hungarian, so if a sentence remains in Hungarian, it's a mistake, but it's still a fact that Rick has Hungarian connections.

Oh my goodness, your comment made me nostalgic! When I was young and handsome I dated a girl from Leninváros (Now it's the town of Tiszaújváros), her last name was Mayer
P.S.
I understand why Judit's parents left Hungary in 1956. I've personally met people like them

 

[Izirider]

Yeah, 1956 was a bloody year in Hungary.

 

[cxx]

don't think sam is from hungary. ashley could have learned from judit or mc (if he speaks hungary). also 1 more he when should be she.

 

[cxx]

it was nice update, had action and story moved on, also had some funnies.

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Kindly update this one if you have time.

 

[estrada777]

Kindly update this one if you have time.

Not interested in prerelease versions.

 

[Daastaan007]

Not interested in prerelease versions.

Yeah I get that, you are probably gonna update after the full chapter released.
Now there is only Cora-Rick full tour scenes.

 

[Izirider]

LOL! The story was originally written as Rick and his father had been living with Judit, Miri and Ash for some time when Gabe was arrested. Then Patreon came along and they suspended my site because Rick could have optionally slept with Judit, and they said that was bad, bad incest. I explained to them in vain that there was no blood or legal relationship between Rick and Judit, as she was not his mother and had never married Gabe. "No", they said, "if it's a mother figure, it's incest, period".
So, I had to rewrite every sentence in which Rick claimed that "Judit is the closest thing he has to a mother". And now here are the updated Community Guidelines, which now allow sexual activity by non-blood family members. What the fuck, man? Five years ago in my game, where there was no family connection, why was this not accepted? But at least I can rewrite the original dialogues (which I never deleted, they just don't appear in the game).

Well, never mind. Anyway, I'm working on this scene now. Ashley and Rick, who are not siblings.

 

[cxx]

Izirider talking about patreon?

 

[Izirider]

Yep.

 

[cxx]

Yep.

well patreon's "guidance" has been hot topic at f95 on various threads after they started latest crusade.

 

[MAGO-DAG]

LOL! The story was originally written as Rick and his father had been living with Judit, Miri and Ash for some time when Gabe was arrested. Then Patreon came along and they suspended my site because Rick could have optionally slept with Judit, and they said that was bad, bad incest. I explained to them in vain that there was no blood or legal relationship between Rick and Judit, as she was not his mother and had never married Gabe. "No", they said, "if it's a mother figure, it's incest, period".
So, I had to rewrite every sentence in which Rick claimed that "Judit is the closest thing he has to a mother". And now here are the updated Community Guidelines, which now allow sexual activity by non-blood family members. What the fuck, man? Five years ago in my game, where there was no family connection, why was this not accepted? But at least I can rewrite the original dialogues (which I never deleted, they just don't appear in the game).

Well, never mind. Anyway, I'm working on this scene now. Ashley and Rick, who are not siblings.
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Not only did you find yourself on the hotline... but many games have come under suspicion in recent months... Patreon in its repertoire

 

[cxx]

Not only did you find yourself on the hotline... but many games have come under suspicion in recent months... Patreon in its repertoire

well no1 counted after 30 so total number could be over 50.

 

[MEMUAR]

Will there be content with Cora in the new update?

 

[Izirider]

MEMUAR Yes, the "Cora travels alone" storyline will be in Alpha 2, so Cora will be in it most of the time.

 

[alyssssssssss]

So Cora won't be killed by Mc for betraying him, she will have her own parallel story, well, too bad, maybe the only thing I don't like, but never mind. do you have a release date, thanks.