For a demo it isn't bad, but it is short. I do however see the potential with future updates. Again this is a demo, and it is short so I can only rate this VN on what is available.
Renders are good
Story seems interesting
Overall
It has a lot of potential to get into a really good story in future updates. Not a lot of story to go on to actually tell if it's going to be a great VN or not. Hopefully the dev(s) don't get burned out, or decide to abandon this project for something else like so many others have in the past.
I wish the dev(s) the best of luck with this VN and hope it turns out to be really great.
I recommend this if you want to see the demo and get an idea of where things will go. I will keep an eye out for the next update and then give a more balanced review. Thanks for sharing this project.
Renders are good
Story seems interesting
Overall
It has a lot of potential to get into a really good story in future updates. Not a lot of story to go on to actually tell if it's going to be a great VN or not. Hopefully the dev(s) don't get burned out, or decide to abandon this project for something else like so many others have in the past.
I wish the dev(s) the best of luck with this VN and hope it turns out to be really great.
I recommend this if you want to see the demo and get an idea of where things will go. I will keep an eye out for the next update and then give a more balanced review. Thanks for sharing this project.