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We're here for the story. Images, gifs and videos is just a bonus
Played it and it's... disappointing.
The story has a nice idea but it is not engaging at all, and it overreaches really bad, making it all super confusing and complicated. It starts criticizing porn games and their badly written stories, a bold move, but ends up hitting itself. The following scene seems to be an attempt at a bad trip but reads more like a character being moved around a game map, trying to calmly assess the surroundings and ready to move on. Some characters are meant to be likable and we're supposed to feel empathy for them but that's not the case at all, probably due to how little it takes before we meet them and them vanishing, becoming a problem or becoming a nuisance. Something similar happens later with the character describing being conflicted about wearing girl's clothes and playing with sex toys but doing it so calmly and with no hesitation that the conflict is inexistent.
My main issue with it is the choices, or the lack of meaningful choices though. Choices are sparse and the ones that are there have two flavors: to see or not to see a scene (which ends up being referenced in the future as if you had seen it anyway) or variations of the same (such as "Come on! Do this already!" vs "Come on! Do I need to spank you? Do this already!"; "I won't tell you!" vs "She'll tell you when she's ready to do it"; "Pull out and cum on chest" vs "Pull out and cum on stomach"). In its current state this game should have the Kinectic Novel tag.
Seems to be in really early development so there's surely a lot still wip, but besides the very good-looking images and a few very hot scenes involving cumplay, it doesn't have much.
The story has a nice idea but it is not engaging at all, and it overreaches really bad, making it all super confusing and complicated. It starts criticizing porn games and their badly written stories, a bold move, but ends up hitting itself. The following scene seems to be an attempt at a bad trip but reads more like a character being moved around a game map, trying to calmly assess the surroundings and ready to move on. Some characters are meant to be likable and we're supposed to feel empathy for them but that's not the case at all, probably due to how little it takes before we meet them and them vanishing, becoming a problem or becoming a nuisance. Something similar happens later with the character describing being conflicted about wearing girl's clothes and playing with sex toys but doing it so calmly and with no hesitation that the conflict is inexistent.
My main issue with it is the choices, or the lack of meaningful choices though. Choices are sparse and the ones that are there have two flavors: to see or not to see a scene (which ends up being referenced in the future as if you had seen it anyway) or variations of the same (such as "Come on! Do this already!" vs "Come on! Do I need to spank you? Do this already!"; "I won't tell you!" vs "She'll tell you when she's ready to do it"; "Pull out and cum on chest" vs "Pull out and cum on stomach"). In its current state this game should have the Kinectic Novel tag.
Seems to be in really early development so there's surely a lot still wip, but besides the very good-looking images and a few very hot scenes involving cumplay, it doesn't have much.
- Jun 2, 2020
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52k words and 600 images is a bit too long of a joke imo
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You are welcomed to have your opinion, I appreciate the feedback.
So, I played around with it, do any of the choices actually matter beyond whether or not there's immediately a porn scene? I tried treating people differently, but it didn't even seem to change the dialogue apart from immediately after the choice.
- Feb 15, 2020
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Dev has stated "...choices in dialogue to give the player an ability to "Roleplay" a bit." But I don't think we should expect any branching paths and treat this as a kinetic work. Choices being for flavor, not substance. Of course with any WIP this could always change and not about to speak as to the dev's further intentions. But my impression is a single narrative being the primary goal at this time.
While still in the mid of going through the v0.2 release I have noticed the additional choices options not only pertaining to the characters preferences, but also geared toward tailoring their personality to a degree. Even if it doesn't lead to any impactful changes I appreciate effort gone into the expanded content.
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As of now the choices are only meant to give some "Flavour", think of TES: Skyrim, there's a ton of dialogue choices, but it's always the same story.
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Dev Notes
At this point, the novel contains ~52k words and 600 images. This is about a quarter of the intended size of the complete novel.
I think you made the mistake of thinking it was a game.
I don't see "game" mentioned anywhere, so you're wrong on all accounts.
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This game (well, VN) is a work of art, and I can't wait to see further development.
Is there room for improvement? Sure, but it is great as is already.
The kink and fantasy aspects will be hit n miss cause of the nature of the beast, for me the fantasy especially is spot on. Just don't nerd out on it being "canon", cause it is it's own universe..
Is there room for improvement? Sure, but it is great as is already.
The kink and fantasy aspects will be hit n miss cause of the nature of the beast, for me the fantasy especially is spot on. Just don't nerd out on it being "canon", cause it is it's own universe..
I completely enjoyed my time playing this. I love the story. I love the characters. I love the overall concept. Wish there was more visual Novels like this out there and can't wait to play more.
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Definitely Not Dumb If you can develop a game, keep up the good work.