Ren'Py Photo Hunt [v0.16.2 Extra] [Moochie]

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ptahn

ptahn

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no11 said:
I don't think the game would have NTR tag because of that. And in the latest version, in romance route MC is trying to make her quit the job, though it's near the end of Red Maiden contents. But I agree that Rachel's story is ridiculous, work as a prostitute to earn money to become more popular? If her job is found out, she will be very "popular" at school. In my opinion, Rachel's story is weak compared to other's, especially Lina's. In Lina route, MC actually cared about Lina, however in Rachel romance route, or i would say less jerk route, i don't see that. And the excuse" she knew that it was the MC" will not work, because obviously she didn't like it and was scared that she would lose her virginity at work, so she decided to lose it to MC.

By the way, i have an idea about Rachel romance story. Make her does not really know all the things she has to do at Red Maiden, and when MC comes there the first time, he reveals himself, scolds her and explains about her job. However, she signed a contract so she can't quit yet. And since MC now can pay off the stupid camera debt, the dev can make him have to pay for Rachel's exclusiveness. That means MC must work hard at day and dangerous at night, and Rachel somehow finds out. This way MC shows that he cared about Rachel, and the dream scene at work can become true. And Red Maiden scenes can still happen when their relationship developed but at a slower pace.
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Your suggestion requires a rewrite of the existing story, I don't believe that there is any chance of that happening. My suggestion although not a great fix (even a good fix would require a rewrite) would not require a rewrite of the existing story.
 
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no11

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DA22 said:
Well I agree that it does not really make sense as such, but likely the problem is with the corruption route for Rachel. That route does need those sex scenes and others, but if had taken romance route away from that then dev would have somehow had to make as many sex and story scenes for romance path. Slowing game down even more.

Also agree it is high time Evelyn puts out a bit more, the setup has been there for a year already and if we first need to wait every other route it will be three more years. :p At least throw us a bone and let her story keep moving forward, Dev always has the Evelyn/Rachel threesome and other threesomes there to keep us interested.
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I agree with you about the corruption route, that why i didn't said about that route. I like the game, as I said Lina story is very well done, and I like Rachel character, so i'm a bit sad that her romance route is not that well written. And it's not that dev haven't made many different scenes for different paths, he has done it with Monica. I know that means more work for him, I just hope Rachel story is better, cause normally little sister should be one of the most favorite characters.
 
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DA22

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no11 said:
I agree with you about the corruption route, that why i didn't said about that route. I like the game, as I said Lina story is very well done, and I like Rachel character, so i'm a bit sad that her romance route is not that well written. And it's not that dev haven't made many different scenes for different paths, he has done it with Monica. I know that means more work for him, I just hope Rachel story is better, cause normally little sister should be one of the most favorite characters.
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Well it will all depend on what he does with her after the choice for Romance route, though she will be unlikely to be sexual shy considering what happened before. Unfortunately as with the Evelin path, the setup has been there for a while but we have seen no continuation yet of that path after the choice for corruption or romance.
 
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Riou

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So i have to start the game again,but before i do that just one question
if i choose the love route with rachel she stop working in the red maden or not?
 
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Paapi

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Jay 7676 said:
Mine is working too but dev said start new game that's why I am asking and also without latest walkthrough can't able to play new scenes because it's hard to find what's new
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I think i got every scenes other than getting call from Jennifer.
 
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cxx

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I got bugged, if goes to pawn shop or alley shop text box blocks view so can't go back unless makes text box seethru.
 
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