VN Ren'Py Pecker PI [v0.3] [MrPocketRocket]

goulet1995 · Jul 8, 2023

seems like you plan the girls to be sexual with eachother which is something i dont like even in threesome so im curious if that will be avoidable

Saphfire · Jul 8, 2023

Hm, short but enjoyable start. Looks promising so far, but time will tell.

MrPocketRocket · Jul 8, 2023

goulet1995 said:
seems like you plan the girls to be sexual with eachother

no not at all.

MrPocketRocket · Jul 8, 2023

Mister_M said:
That was pretty nice. I was mostly drawn to the game by the fact, that we have black LIs here, who are usually absent from most of the games and when they appear they're often treated as secondary LIs. So I hope for some quality time with dark skinned gals here, shame I couldn't ask any of them for a party tho.

I like the noirish setting too, tho personally would prefer non-smoking MC. I get the genre conventions, but it takes me away from role playing the game a bit (I'd also wouldn't mind more choices and some good, branching plot). But overall the game looks nice, I hope the story will be interestingly developed and we'll embark on a dark, erotic criminal mystery full of twists and turns.

Victoria was the original LI, and despite the fact that I can say very little with any certainty for the future tags of this AVN, I can say with real confidence that Victoria's story will not be secondary.

Branching plot is probably not doable if I'm going to publish on a somewhat reoccurring schedule. It also becomes a massively different story in the writing phase. I like the idea, but not sure it's realistic.

goulet1995 · Jul 9, 2023

MrPocketRocket said:
no not at all.

could you explain this it seems like your saying girls wont be sexual with eachother but picture 4 and the game having the lesbian tag and want to be clear wheni say lesbain im also asking about bisexual stuff with mc included

punisher2099 · Jul 9, 2023

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LOL Is she ok? Are her eyes meant to be that way?

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Where's his fist?

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Is he growing breasts?

MrPocketRocket · Jul 9, 2023

goulet1995 said:
could you explain this it seems like your saying girls wont be sexual with eachother but picture 4 and the game having the lesbian tag and want to be clear wheni say lesbain im also asking about bisexual stuff with mc included

punisher2099 said:
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LOL Is she ok? Are her eyes meant to be that way

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Where's his fist?

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Is he growing breasts?

Hmm, I'll have to look into that fist of

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Thanks. Your a great help!

Rockero_69 · Jul 9, 2023

yasirahmed said:
Harem possible?

I also wonder the same

rogokin · Jul 9, 2023

Good first release looking forward to more. The style/setting and the MC's background boxer/war hero are great.

MrPocketRocket · Jul 9, 2023

Rockero_69 said:
I also wonder the same

MC will be able to have more than one LI if he chooses, yes. Will multiple of those share his bed at same time, not sure.

MrPocketRocket · Jul 9, 2023

rogokin said:
Good first release looking forward to more. The style/setting and the MC's background boxer/war hero are great.

Thank you! Always good to hear positive feedback to motivate the effort.

xXwankerXx · Jul 9, 2023

everhardninja said:
yup this definitely sounds like the 50s

Can't we just play the game like the fictional work it actually is without giving a shit about racism for once ?? Don't we have enough of that shit IRL ?? Do we need it in fictional porn too ??

MrPocketRocket said:
The rape tag is there and it isn't a choice, but it's not perpetrated by MC. It's a story element so I don't want to give too much detail, but I don't think it should be reason to avoid the VN.

No, it needs to be avoidable, or at least make it happen in the past tense so the MC can comfort the woman who went through such a horrible experience and get closer to her or just keep it friendly with her, but the player should always have the option to prevent something like that. Making it unavoidable 'for the plot' will definitely get you some backlash, and some ppl will avoid the game bcz of that. My advice is to reconsider adding unavoidable questionable stuff like that, or be honest from the get-go if you want it in your story. We fans appreciate honest devs who keep their promises, but lying to ppl about the kinks you'll have in your story isn't a good way to do business.

MrPocketRocket said:
There are some kinks I'm contemplating but nothing that I see in the next few releases...as it were

Please tell us in advance a lil more about these kinks, coz given the premise, I expect to see a good deal of voyeurism. Hope we won't be forced to watch our LIs get fucked by NPCs for information or shit like that without having the option to prevent it coz no vanilla/non NTR fan wants that.

MrPocketRocket said:
How many true lesbians really exist in an AVN? But to answer your question. No you cannot currently avoid them.

Man, that sucks. Seriously now, I love sweet Gabrielle, but letting that random ho, Josephine, grab the MC's dick and kissing him without having the option to tell her to go fuck herself or at least politely decline her 'generous' offer is a big minus here coz the player needs to have a say in this. Nobody likes forced stuff, especially with women they may not be attracted to, so you should make all this unavoidable stuff that's so far in the game completely avoidable if you want to convince more ppl to support you.

WerewolfSinX · Jul 9, 2023

xXwankerXx said:
Can't we just play the game like the fictional work it actually is without giving a shit about racism for once ?? Don't we have enough of that shit IRL ?? Do we need it in fictional porn too ??

No, it needs to be avoidable, or at least make it happen in the past tense so the MC can comfort the woman who went through such a horrible experience and get closer to her or just keep it friendly with her, but the player should always have the option to prevent something like that. Making it unavoidable 'for the plot' will definitely get you some backlash, and some ppl will avoid the game bcz of that. My advice is to reconsider adding unavoidable questionable stuff like that, or be honest from the get-go if you want it in your story. We fans appreciate honest devs who keep their promises, but lying to ppl about the kinks you'll have in your story isn't a good way to do business.

Please tell us in advance a lil more about these kinks, coz given the premise, I expect to see a good deal of voyeurism. Hope we won't be forced to watch our LIs get fucked by NPCs for information or shit like that without having the option to prevent it coz no vanilla/non NTR fan wants that.

Man, that sucks. Seriously now, I love sweet Gabrielle, but letting that random ho, Josephine, grab the MC's dick and kissing him without having the option to tell her to go fuck herself or at least politely decline her 'generous' offer is a big minus here coz the player needs to have a say in this. Nobody likes forced stuff, especially with women they may not be attracted to, so you should make all this unavoidable stuff that's so far in the game completely avoidable if you want to convince more ppl to support you.

Pretty much everything you said. As you can see with my sig, I'm not a fan of harems or NTR so i figured this would be a good experience, but when that rape scene happened I'm out as its my least favorite tag.

xXwankerXx · Jul 9, 2023

MrPocketRocket said:
Is that something that is of interest to people in general?

To some fans it probably is. Personally, I'm not that interested in it, unless it's kept for the endings, where you'll have the option to get your favorite LI(s) pregnant, but nutting inside them is something that needs to be there, or at least as an option the player has at the end of the sex scene. Nothing beats the experience of knowing you blew a big load deep in those sexy lil sluts.

MrPocketRocket said:
Victoria was the original LI, and despite the fact that I can say very little with any certainty for the future tags of this AVN, I can say with real confidence that Victoria's story will not be secondary.

That's good to know, but don't forget to give Gabrielle and Nat some well-deserved love too, and ffs, tone it down with the cheap gold digger attitude on Natasha, bro'. Lil bitch is a perfect 10, a beautiful blonde that's right up my alley, but hearing her gold digger talk really disappointed me. Please change that.

I understand that women want a guy with a stable future who can provide for them, not a lazy ass bum playing detective for pissy rich idiots, but it sounds like she more interested in the money than the guy himself. We call women like that short flings, side bitches, or one-night stand material, not serious relationship.

WerewolfSinX said:
when that rape scene happened I'm out as its my least favorite tag

Fully agree with you on this. I still hope the dev reconsiders it coz there's a lot of ways to create drama and add plot twists without going down that road, but if stuff like Josephine basically sexually harassing the MC keeps being unavoidable, I'll delete the game and move on to other titles.

Greebz · Jul 10, 2023

MrPocketRocket said:
no creampie yet, but it will absolutely be player option. Haven't put thought into pregnancy. Is that something that is of interest to people in general?

yes, yes and YES

monksims · Jul 12, 2023

I didn't play all paths but I opened up the code after I finished. I noticed that code forces MC to go with Nat even though there is a possibility not to ask either Gabby or Nat to the party. I had Gabby as my tour guide.

Python:

    if ask_gabby_to_party == True:
        call berg_party_with_gabby from _call_berg_party_with_gabby
    elif ask_gabby_to_party == False:
        call berg_party_with_nat from _call_berg_party_with_nat
    scene thefollowingday with dissolve

Although, MC seems to be blind which women are interested in him and goes after a pair he saw. I wish there was a choice how to handle the blonde at the party. Also, the Renpy project is "The Curse of the Pearl Necklace" but the name here is "Pecker PI". Which one is it, I wonder...

MrPocketRocket · Jul 12, 2023

monksims said:
I didn't play all paths but I opened up the code after I finished. I noticed that code forces MC to go with Nat even though there is a possibility not to ask either Gabby or Nat to the party. I had Gabby as my tour guide.

Although, MC seems to be blind which women are interested in him and goes after a pair he saw. I wish there was a choice how to handle the blonde at the party. Also, the Renpy project is "The Curse of the Pearl Necklace" but the name here is "Pecker PI". Which one is it, I wonder...

I intended to have a path that had MC go alone, but in the interest of having someone to talk to and me not stretching this first chapter out in production time any further (first couple of scenes are rendered with a mac air laptop, cranking out all of 1 render per 24+ hours while siting on some freezer blocks).

The project is Pecker PI, while the first case or "book" is The Curse...

Gorse · Jul 12, 2023

After a full investigation of the game, here are some F a n S i g s for "PECKER PI" :

Gabriella - Fan Signature
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LINK: https://attachments.f95zone.to/2023/07/2787303_PPIsiG1.gif
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Natasha - Fan Signature
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LINK: https://attachments.f95zone.to/2023/07/2787304_PPIsiG2.gif
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Detective Turis - Fan Signature *
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LINK: https://attachments.f95zone.to/2023/10/3050987_PPIsiG3.gif
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Josephine Smith - Fan Signature *
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LINK: https://attachments.f95zone.to/2023/10/3050988_PPIsiG4.gif
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Amy - Fan Signature *
300 x 124 px / 0,93 MB / .gif

LINK: https://attachments.f95zone.to/2023/10/3058382_PPIsiG5.gif
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There's evidence for more signatures with more future updates.
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...The more clues, the better for this case and your private investigation

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And MrPocketRocket: thanks for your game & good luck with the future development! All the best & cheers!

monksims · Jul 12, 2023

MrPocketRocket said:
I intended to have a path that had MC go alone, but in the interest of having someone to talk to and me not stretching this first chapter out in production time any further

I just felt I needed to point out how the game logic worked against given choices: you gave the player an option not to go with either girl but force the player go with Nat. That's not nice towards the player to give an option that doesn't exist.

After you decided to drop the going alone option, you could have changed choice options when inviting Nat: not inviting Nat would mean choosing Gabby and add the conversation with Gabby reusing many existing renders next time they met in the office. Fits quite well to the character of MC because he's totally clueless what females feel about him.

MrPocketRocket said:
The project is Pecker PI, while the first case or "book" is The Curse...

May I suggest you to rename the Renpy project accordingly? For example, "PeckerPI_Case1" or something that includes the actual project name. "The Curse of the..." is impossible to find from the latest updates page using the title search. At the moment a title search using "curse" gives lots of game threads but not this thread.

MrPocketRocket · Jul 13, 2023

monksims said:
I just felt I needed to point out how the game logic worked against given choices: you gave the player an option not to go with either girl but force the player go with Nat. That's not nice towards the player to give an option that doesn't exist. After you decided to drop the going alone option, you could have changed choice options when inviting Nat: not inviting Nat would mean choosing Gabby and add the conversation with Gabby reusing many existing renders next time they met in the office. Fits quite well to the character of MC because he's totally clueless what females feel about him.

May I suggest you to rename the Renpy project accordingly? For example, "PeckerPI_Case1" or something that includes the actual project name. "The Curse of the..." is impossible to find from the latest updates page using the title search. At the moment a title search using "curse" gives lots of game threads but not this thread.

So you didn't read all the code and missed the following in the scene prior to the party.

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Thanks for the heads up on the search issue. I'll fix that.

And yes, he is a bit clueless

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