Nice try for the demo, but has some 'beginner' flaws.
1) The game is not optimised. Several scenes or between scenes cause horrible lag. Literally nothing fancy is happening -- you just move the characters in the city but they can hardly take steps. Example, in between of finding the antagonist and getting some quests done.
2) If you skip text (like I do), you don't understand where to go next and whom to speak. A quest journal is a must-have in this type of RPG Maker creations.
3) You don't have an option to stop antagonist from NTRing the protagonist's girlfriend during battles. Neither the girlfriend herself stops the harassments.
OK, it's a trite corruption fetish, but see point 4.
4) There is literally no pace in corruption. The girl is immediately fucked into her mouth in the first 'porn' encounter, and the protagonist is so blind that he doesn't notice what's happening behind his back.
OK, this can be an NTR fetish for someone, but seriously… in the very first NTR-battle?
5) There is no option to avoid the antagonist completely, or partially influence him. Something like battle vs timer, such as kill the boss fast -- no prize for antagonist; kill the boss slowly -- antagonists gets more and more. This no-choice approach is blunt and boring.
6) You can't lose to generic mobs. I don't understand how it works, but you are always healed from 0.
7) Even if you make your characters lose (with the help of Cheat Menu), the very first mobs -- Slimes -- don't fuck neither the protagonist's girlfriend, nor the protagonist himself……… Oh, come on!
Developer, make yourself a favour and ask yourself some questions:
1) Would you play your game with generic story, generic Koikatsu models, generic RPG Maker navigation, generic combat, where you can't even influence the story?
2) How is your game different from over 9000 other kinetic NTR games?
3) How will your game be different from Nymphomania Priestess - Jaziro branch?
1) The game is not optimised. Several scenes or between scenes cause horrible lag. Literally nothing fancy is happening -- you just move the characters in the city but they can hardly take steps. Example, in between of finding the antagonist and getting some quests done.
2) If you skip text (like I do), you don't understand where to go next and whom to speak. A quest journal is a must-have in this type of RPG Maker creations.
3) You don't have an option to stop antagonist from NTRing the protagonist's girlfriend during battles. Neither the girlfriend herself stops the harassments.
OK, it's a trite corruption fetish, but see point 4.
4) There is literally no pace in corruption. The girl is immediately fucked into her mouth in the first 'porn' encounter, and the protagonist is so blind that he doesn't notice what's happening behind his back.
OK, this can be an NTR fetish for someone, but seriously… in the very first NTR-battle?
5) There is no option to avoid the antagonist completely, or partially influence him. Something like battle vs timer, such as kill the boss fast -- no prize for antagonist; kill the boss slowly -- antagonists gets more and more. This no-choice approach is blunt and boring.
6) You can't lose to generic mobs. I don't understand how it works, but you are always healed from 0.
7) Even if you make your characters lose (with the help of Cheat Menu), the very first mobs -- Slimes -- don't fuck neither the protagonist's girlfriend, nor the protagonist himself……… Oh, come on!
Developer, make yourself a favour and ask yourself some questions:
1) Would you play your game with generic story, generic Koikatsu models, generic RPG Maker navigation, generic combat, where you can't even influence the story?
2) How is your game different from over 9000 other kinetic NTR games?
3) How will your game be different from Nymphomania Priestess - Jaziro branch?
